hardhitter vs Machavelli
 

ightt yo u spit first 10-20 lines due in 45 mins
no crew votes
no hate votes and no dick riding
3-0 knock out or first to 5 win.
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check in muh fucka,,hurry up...................................<~*1*~>

he's a noshow

he is a no show that right i will merk him hard core son............u wanna battle!?

can't got 2 in progress
but vote on mine

here we go hard hitter hard hitter?? is he really a hard hitter/
or after i kill him in this battle will he be pckin splinters//
he ain't no winner he's just full of shit/
man don't try to battle me when you can't even spit//
you can't come up on top no more not even till the end/
im battlen' another sorry ass here we go again//
as your nerves start to bend/
i can't be a no show if i can kill you now/
strat to pleed and reced as you bow down//
look what i found some other MC who thinks he can come on top/
when really all you gonna do is make your self drop/
cause my lines pop to hard for you to catch/
so you run away like a scared bitch/
so i leave you with these words that are brave and bold/
and start to tell all your friends that you just got TOLD!!//

ha yea right nice prewritin shit fagg................

that wasn't pre-written dumb ass don't be mad that i can come up with great lines just
spit and lets get the voting over with!!and don't call my shit pre-written!!

ightt yo ima merk this fag teach his ass a lesson he should a learnd
now he fucked around and got his ass burnd
its absurd how u herbs react to a call out
he signd off so he could prewrite his shit and go all out
no ur not nice you just been sliced
and ripped to the price
i hate u NEWBS ya think ya tight
but my grandma's pussy's tighter right?
your just a fag hooked on play girl mags....
its sad how u just been merkd
now u can go tell all your friends uve been hurt.............................

i didn't sighn off to prewrite i had to go to class this guy can't spit his was probably pre-written
JUST START THE VOTING!!

Very weak battle

Punches: Hardhitter, maybe if you can call them punches, but no real effective punches anywhere.
Wordplay: Neither had any
Multis: Neither had any
Opener: Neither, both very wak
Closer: Neither, both very wak

Vote - Hardhitter

Both of you need to check in wakness emergency center, seriously. Use comparisons to make punches, multiple syllables to make, hence the name, multis. Wordplay, just like of something creative.

Return the favor in my sig

Yeah, this wasn't a good battle at all..

mach- i saw u said ur lines were great.. that made me laugh. mach I guess you're new, I'd give the same advice as brethen up above. your punches were very plain, not very good. really nothing else to it. hard... actually seen you post better verses then that. u gotta step up and destroy these kinda guys. ur punches wernt good either but were better then his. that wins it. vote- hard

PLEASE hit the battle in my sig. thats been going for 2 weeks. I dont know what page its on. I had 8 votes but I'm up only 4-1, I NEED it over with. and also please hit this link too. return fav.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111802

man what ya'll talkin about i had good line thats the truth i came on top mine wasn't wack mine was good.

come on yall one more vote and i got this rapped up............leave a thread and i will hit it up and return the favor............thanx.....<~*1*~>