.snap. v rappin' master
 

ok with da rulz. check in and u spit first.................

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And dog, this is a 'blind spit' meaning BOTH our verses are due in 45 minutes after I check in....so 45 starts now...go

theres fear in your eyes cause ur bout to be hit,
wats da point of lashing back, wen u cant even spit,
u would rather play chess cause your lifes now in check,
you must be a fag, tatoo of a dick on yo neck,
ur more bent then the leaning tower of pisa,
why dont u just give up now cos it would be alot easier,
I thought I told u man that Im too slick to take.
Like aliminuim metal, Im too hard to break.
smash your face through concrete so u can experience whats really hard.
I'll beat u like a bitch, leave u bruised and a retard,
im gunna finish this wannabe MC right here and now,
im closing in on u so wat u gunna do,
my rhymes will stick to u forevr, just as though they r glue

U don't needa read his birth certificate to know his doen sum-thing-wrong ::
This guy could put his sperm on steroids and still not be cum-ing-strong ::
He might be in insane asylum but I'd never admit that ur one of mine ::
Ya gotta slice off the top of ya skull just to show wats on ur mind ::

U were lucky to get this far, and I'm used to battlin people weak ::
Cos ur getting 'left behind' likes peeps missing their right butt cheek ::
Dawg could be rappin about flowers, en his rhymes still wouldn't have ROSE :: *1
Ya couldn't "pull off de-feat" even if you were mastrubating french toes ::

Ya you couldn't POST-GRReat if you spit for Corn Flakes :: *2
This dorks-gay, he be 'cumming' more PLAYED than his collection of porn-tapes ::
Your verses are 'fulla holes' like its been punctured-tragically ::
constructing a verse to beat you wouldnt be EXHAUSTing if i worked at a MUFFLER FACTORY ::

``Finishing Touch``
Rappin' Master "Flexin" rhymes Faker than a Prosthetic Arm ::
Wit votes fulla more "Bullshit" than a Cows On a Farm ::
You're a wack ass newbie, so bad I'd actually suggest that you bite ::
and you just might, your shit even a disabled kid could 'fight' ::

.:Explanations:.
*1 - ROSE, as in elevate or rise in his rhyme talent (play on words)
*2 - "POST-GRReat"; POST as in the cereal


V.:.O.:.T.:.E Please!!

rm takes dis jst...vv close battle. tied on most aspects but rms punches hit a bit harder....gud battle...keep it up both of u....
both evaluate....
v/rappin' master

bothj were aight, ima base my vote on punc lines adn syt and which i felt more

vote: rappin master

keep on people wake up and vot.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

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uppin for votes people come on.,

rrappin master got this shit but it was close every thing but master had harder punchs and flowed a lil bit better to me on that level and battle is about punchs so my vote is rappin master

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121809
^^^^^ vote


flow-both was good
creativity-snap
punches-snap
See rap master,most of ur shit was just pure disses.Not many punches or set-ups.Straight up disses are OK,but you gotta have more punches.Snap had some nice similies and metaphors as well.
Complexity-snap

Vote-Snap
^^^^^Nice job dog

damm dis mastre guy has skillz...his punches were of the hook

RAPPIN MASTER: really good verse,not very many flaws,solid.
best line:theres fear in your eyes cause ur bout to be hit,
wats da point of lashing back, wen u cant even spit,
dats a very good line in my opinion.
worst line:ur more bent then the leaning tower of pisa,
why dont u just give up now cos it would be alot easier,
extremely loose-rhyming,worst on his verse.
overall:7/10.very good

SNAP:i find it hard for the second spitter to impress me after a really good first spitter like rappinmaster has gone,but dis emcee managed to pull dat off.his rhymes were really good and im happy he put da meaning for saying rose and post is grreat cause if he didnt i eouldntve understand.
best line:Your verses are 'fulla holes' like its been punctured-tragically ::
constructing a verse to beat you wouldnt be EXHAUSTing if i worked at a MUFFLER FACTORY ::
that was a hot line.nothing to say
worst line:Dawg could be rappin about flowers, en his rhymes still wouldn't have ROSE :: *1
Ya couldn't "pull off de-feat" even if you were mastrubating french toes ::
the first line of dat was hot but you shoulda found a better second to dat cause it was wack.
overall:8.5/10.excellent

VOTE:SNAP

RETURN THE FAVOUR OR I'LL NEVER VOTE ON ANOTHER ONE OF YOUR BATTLES!!! LOL!!! KID'N http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...874#post1279874


Rap'n master, your verse was alright, it lacked some really good punches, try getting more creative with them. There weren't really that many good personals either.
Snap your verse was all around better than his. Your opener was good as well as you closer, with some solid punches in the middle.
Flow: 7/10
Punches: 7/10
Personals: 7/10
Metas: 6/10
Multies: 6/10
Wordplay: 7/10
Overall: 38/60

My vote goes to snap because of better punches that hit harder, your flow was kinda choppy though work on that.

Flow: 7/10
Punches: 6/10
Personals: 5/10
Metas: 6/10
Multies: 6/10
Wordplay: 7/10
Overall: 37/60
Vote: N sight