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TheUnderRated vs. Oakley
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blindspit 45 at most no/crew/hate/dr/ check in pz |
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Sending subliminal messages like under's fronting a cult... Avatar backward's stating to "IM" him in "Bulc"!/1 Your lucky your even here, monitors preventing my reach If wakness was censored'your whole verse would be bleeps!/2 This kid's ancient, Key'in up and dealin wit splinters..(wooden keyboard) Droppin played punches more than a Kinko's printer!/3 Sayin you don't wanna get rusty and u too busy wit school.. And know your more topical? How? ur gettin 4-0'd by Rule!/4 I dont even have to say shit, your own crew laughed at your pic Half bitch, only reason your mother kept u was to get circus rich |
Beaten still with absence of both Bio information and avatars.....
cuz your a herb ...look at the evidence you still number your bars.... Kid wants to get a name for himself get known.... he's just thirsty to rhyme... but like fools getin played at prom........your just left in the punch line... Check it i know why you named yourself after a pair of glasses... cause the shades hide the black eyes i give to you in Masses... 3-0 nice start why step to me and stunt your growth...?... up against the ropes in a choke....lemme help ya get the beef out ya throat.. prolly came really personal on me.......... cause i got plenty shit to play with..... your like the last three letters of your name plus the first....you scared little bitch(yelo) get an avatar nub pz |
Oakley Break down
Sending subliminal messages like under's fronting a cult... Avatar backward's stating to "IM" him in "Bulc"!/1 Creative but not hard hittning Your lucky your even here, monitors preventing my reach If wakness was censored'your whole verse would be bleeps!/2 ^ok for a filler This kid's ancient, Key'in up and dealin wit splinters..(wooden keyboard) Droppin played punches more than a Kinko's printer!/3 OK pretty good Sayin you don't wanna get rusty and u too busy wit school.. And know your more topical? How? ur gettin 4-0'd by Rule!/4 Tight I dont even have to say shit, your own crew laughed at your pic Half bitch, only reason your mother kept u was to get circus rich Tight 8/10 Underated Breakdown Beaten still with absence of both Bio information and avatars..... cuz your a herb ...look at the evidence you still number your bars.... Tight Kid wants to get a name for himself get known.... he's just thirsty to rhyme... but like fools getin played at prom........your just left in the punch line... no great but ok Check it i know why you named yourself after a pair of glasses... cause the shades hide the black eyes i give to you in Masses... good filler 3-0 nice start why step to me and stunt your growth...?... up against the ropes in a choke....lemme help ya get the beef out ya throat.. tight prolly came really personal on me.......... cause i got plenty shit to play with..... your like the last three letters of your name plus the first....you scared little bitch(yelo) Tight as closer 9/10 Tight battle you both are good some shit that i didnt like was the underrated stucture but liked his punches. Oakley had some creative shit but fillers wernt very good so I am gonna have to give this to under |
flow was def. Oakley
but punches were owned by under closing/opening-under Under gets my vote ThA Ce http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113988 vote there^^^ |
underrated took this on punches, oakly had a better structured verse and a few decent punches but nothing mentionable.. better finisher as well.....
vote: Under Unexplained vote gone. -Token |
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I second this, no offense, but Under had the best punch lines, but Oakley Ur flo is tight!! |
This was a pretty good battle...
Oakley...you had some strong points to your verse but could have re-worded some things to make them better or more unique good verse though just nt very consistant Under...good verse a little more consistant with hard punches structure from both was same Over all Under took this with more creativity and wittiness |
oakleys wackness line was hot.. his flow was pretty decent but not all that consistant, if it was he couldve taken this, underrated had some kool rhymes a few kool disses, even tho oakley had the quote of the match i feel under was more original and creative, with a little bit more consistancy in his verse.. aiming at his opponent a little bit more, vote- under
return an honest vote no hate or beef.. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...74&page=1&pp=15 |
word alright thanx to all those that have voted thus far.....lookin for a couple more poll votes love for all the new to rB's though....................pz
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aiight the only things oakley had in this battle was structure and flow besides that he was missing the major thing u need in order to win a battle which is punches and personals, theunderrated came a lot harder with his shyt so he gets mah vote
vote=theunderrated...sorry i cant poll http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113661 |
This was a tight battle but I must slide this to Under...why?
punchlines: he had sum great punches with a gud wordplay and they just came harder than Oakley's punches personals/ Under had sum nice personals while Oakley din't had so much and Under were jsut betta cuz of the wordplay and the originality of the personals flow: Oakley had a nice flow with sum variation but also did Under, you both were gud on this part structure: Oakley had a betta structure I thought cuz I just felt that his verse was more easy to read and it just workt out gud Overall vote: The Underrated (but close) Hit this back thx: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113596 |
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sorry underated....but this was botherin me.... |
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