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Age 5 03-11-04 05:38 PM

enygma Vs Adept
 
10 Lines!
You Know The Rules!
and please no bullshit votes!

Enygma 03-11-04 05:52 PM

Give me a minute, I'm cookin up some hot shit....literally, I'm cookin.........This is my checkin, start keyin if ya want

Enygma 03-11-04 06:18 PM

Sorry for the wait.........even though I still dropped first, hmmmmmm?

Adept still owes flows he's too new, But it's true I'm not a vet/
But my names true, I do confuse, Shouldn't they call you adebt/
Pussy rappers like you need not worry, I even shook the tightest/
I hope you Big Pimpin cause your raps won't make you Brooklyn's Finest/
Don't worry bout writin today, go ahead and drop tomorrow/
The only time this dude spits quick is when he forgot to swallow/
I hate to break it to ya but your rhymes are startin to bore us/
You're still stuck on your first synonym while I'm writin a thesaurus/
Yo,I got pistols spittin off like missles from the get go/
Dude, here's a bottle of draino.......Maybe it'll help ya shit flow/

And thats how it's done

Age 5 03-11-04 06:58 PM

And This Is How It Finishes...

I Warned You About Me Like I Gave You A Mid Term-Sign !!//
Let This Worm-Unwined, Cuz The Only Cum Back You Can Make Is When You Put Your Sperm-On-Your-Spine !!//

Enygma Never Has Wordplay..Thats Becuz He Cant Flare-Scrabble !!//
Known To Scare-The-Cattle, Even If We Moved This Arena To The Carnival It Still Wouldnt Be A Fair-Battle !!//

You Crossin My Boundries Like Drunks At Track-Meets !!//
Putting A Miami Jersey In A Suitcase Is The Only Time You Could Ever Pack-Heat !!//

I Got Ya Shit Locked Up Like I Cuffed-Your-Ass !!//
Cuz My Knifes'll Be Happy To Give You A Pierce-In Like The Last Boston-Draft !!//

No Need For Hype-And-Attention, My Blade Swipes-Your-Dimensions !!//
So Ya Know I'll Take The Life Out Of You Kid When I Cut Ya Stomach Open Like-A-C-Section !!//

Age 5 03-11-04 07:35 PM

Uppin.............................................

Age 5 03-12-04 09:58 PM

Damn Please Vote And I Will Return The Favor I Promise!

Enygma 03-13-04 10:54 AM

Uppin for votes...............please don't sleep on this

Restricted 03-13-04 11:01 AM

...Adept...: 8/10
Your Flow Was Decent, But Your Multis and Metaphors Were Awesome. I Enjoyed Your Flow and You Are One Of The Not Many Cats On HEre Who Impress Me...

enygma: 5/10
Your flow was alright, but you need to work on vocab and multis....there really wasn't any personals in this whole battle...

Vote: Adept

~R!

Enygma 03-14-04 08:27 AM

I just want to know where Adept's punches were, cause I don't really see any. All he does is add hyphens-between-words and all of a sudden he is tight. If I gotta do that for you to understand it, I'll break my battle down for you better

Adept still "owes flows" he's too new, But it's true I'm not a vet/
But my names true, I do confuse, Shouldn't they "call you adebt"/
Direct personal on his name
"Pussy" rappers like you need not worry, I even shook-the-"tightest"/
I hope you "Big Pimpin" cause your raps won't make you "Brooklyn's-Finest"/
He's from Brooklyn......Hmmmmmm......I even made a meta out of their best rapper
Don't worry bout writin today, go ahead and drop-tomorrow/
The only time this dude "spits quick" is when he "forgot-to-swallow"/
In our Bitchslapped http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116252 He wanted me to spit first.......Direct personal
I hate to break it to ya but your rhymes are startin-to-bore-us/
You're still stuck on your "first synonym" while I'm "writin-a-thesaurus"/
All this dude thinks he has are his synonyms.......Direct personal
Yo,I got pistols spittin off like missles from the get-go/
Dude, here's a "bottle of draino".......Maybe it'll "help ya shit-flow"/
Decent meta, worthy of a closer

Maybe that will help you out in the future. Please don't drop a vote if you don't understand the battle, it just makes you look foolish..........Oh, Re$TricTed......Try to look Past-The-Hyphens, you might see somethin that makes ya shit your Pants-In-Writin........was that better?

YoungStar* 03-14-04 09:37 AM

enygma won this becuz hiz structure and his flo wuz betta and i enjoyed it more when i read it...good battlle tho....vote YoungStar vs SnypeR or Vs. $$umpre or Vs.DisastaMasta or Vs. WIll a pear

HeXen 03-14-04 10:33 AM

good battle...enygma you came week...punches were a little played and didnt hit hard...flow was deff there tho...and structure was nice....wordplay was basic and dat kinda droped your grade....5/10
Adept....you had some good punches....flow need a little work...structure was ok....wordplay was basic...overall...6/10
v/adept
no beef

Age 5 03-14-04 03:14 PM

Thanks Uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Willa 03-14-04 03:19 PM

adept good flow good punches u need to work on vocab and personals
eng ok flow ok punches u need to work on flw vocab and personals
vote adept
vote on my battle
will a peer vs yungstar

Age 5 03-14-04 03:33 PM

Aiight Thanks Will Vote As Soon As I Reach 100 Post Uppin!!!!

Age 5 03-15-04 02:00 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by ...Adept...
Thanks Uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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