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enygma Vs Adept
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Give me a minute, I'm cookin up some hot shit....literally, I'm cookin.........This is my checkin, start keyin if ya want
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Sorry for the wait.........even though I still dropped first, hmmmmmm?
Adept still owes flows he's too new, But it's true I'm not a vet/ But my names true, I do confuse, Shouldn't they call you adebt/ Pussy rappers like you need not worry, I even shook the tightest/ I hope you Big Pimpin cause your raps won't make you Brooklyn's Finest/ Don't worry bout writin today, go ahead and drop tomorrow/ The only time this dude spits quick is when he forgot to swallow/ I hate to break it to ya but your rhymes are startin to bore us/ You're still stuck on your first synonym while I'm writin a thesaurus/ Yo,I got pistols spittin off like missles from the get go/ Dude, here's a bottle of draino.......Maybe it'll help ya shit flow/ And thats how it's done |
And This Is How It Finishes...
I Warned You About Me Like I Gave You A Mid Term-Sign !!// Let This Worm-Unwined, Cuz The Only Cum Back You Can Make Is When You Put Your Sperm-On-Your-Spine !!// Enygma Never Has Wordplay..Thats Becuz He Cant Flare-Scrabble !!// Known To Scare-The-Cattle, Even If We Moved This Arena To The Carnival It Still Wouldnt Be A Fair-Battle !!// You Crossin My Boundries Like Drunks At Track-Meets !!// Putting A Miami Jersey In A Suitcase Is The Only Time You Could Ever Pack-Heat !!// I Got Ya Shit Locked Up Like I Cuffed-Your-Ass !!// Cuz My Knifes'll Be Happy To Give You A Pierce-In Like The Last Boston-Draft !!// No Need For Hype-And-Attention, My Blade Swipes-Your-Dimensions !!// So Ya Know I'll Take The Life Out Of You Kid When I Cut Ya Stomach Open Like-A-C-Section !!// |
Uppin.............................................
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Damn Please Vote And I Will Return The Favor I Promise!
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Uppin for votes...............please don't sleep on this
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...Adept...: 8/10
Your Flow Was Decent, But Your Multis and Metaphors Were Awesome. I Enjoyed Your Flow and You Are One Of The Not Many Cats On HEre Who Impress Me... enygma: 5/10 Your flow was alright, but you need to work on vocab and multis....there really wasn't any personals in this whole battle... Vote: Adept ~R! |
I just want to know where Adept's punches were, cause I don't really see any. All he does is add hyphens-between-words and all of a sudden he is tight. If I gotta do that for you to understand it, I'll break my battle down for you better
Adept still "owes flows" he's too new, But it's true I'm not a vet/ But my names true, I do confuse, Shouldn't they "call you adebt"/ Direct personal on his name "Pussy" rappers like you need not worry, I even shook-the-"tightest"/ I hope you "Big Pimpin" cause your raps won't make you "Brooklyn's-Finest"/ He's from Brooklyn......Hmmmmmm......I even made a meta out of their best rapper Don't worry bout writin today, go ahead and drop-tomorrow/ The only time this dude "spits quick" is when he "forgot-to-swallow"/ In our Bitchslapped http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116252 He wanted me to spit first.......Direct personal I hate to break it to ya but your rhymes are startin-to-bore-us/ You're still stuck on your "first synonym" while I'm "writin-a-thesaurus"/ All this dude thinks he has are his synonyms.......Direct personal Yo,I got pistols spittin off like missles from the get-go/ Dude, here's a "bottle of draino".......Maybe it'll "help ya shit-flow"/ Decent meta, worthy of a closer Maybe that will help you out in the future. Please don't drop a vote if you don't understand the battle, it just makes you look foolish..........Oh, Re$TricTed......Try to look Past-The-Hyphens, you might see somethin that makes ya shit your Pants-In-Writin........was that better? |
enygma won this becuz hiz structure and his flo wuz betta and i enjoyed it more when i read it...good battlle tho....vote YoungStar vs SnypeR or Vs. $$umpre or Vs.DisastaMasta or Vs. WIll a pear
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good battle...enygma you came week...punches were a little played and didnt hit hard...flow was deff there tho...and structure was nice....wordplay was basic and dat kinda droped your grade....5/10
Adept....you had some good punches....flow need a little work...structure was ok....wordplay was basic...overall...6/10 v/adept no beef |
Thanks Uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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adept good flow good punches u need to work on vocab and personals
eng ok flow ok punches u need to work on flw vocab and personals vote adept vote on my battle will a peer vs yungstar |
Aiight Thanks Will Vote As Soon As I Reach 100 Post Uppin!!!!
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