baller vs. cerile
 

aight check in
10-20 lines
all ya voters know what to do

aight lets do this... we doing this timed.. or who's dropping first?

u go first, as soon as u done i'll post mine and then let the voters vote

this clown makes me laugh...

You little impatient, in patient, Mother should have stuck with abortifacient*//
dead from the start, released by a queef no a fart, your mother womb shoulda been your tomb, no beats from your heart//
a play on words, ill mess with your mind, dont cry for mommy thats hypnotic affecting your mind//
did i scare the baby, beware you cant compare i unleash dispair on illiterate fucks like you sinclaire//
i think ill call you fresh prince, of an affair, your sisters au pair* puss was hard to push but after the head she turn into smush//
see your family was a victom of a thing called rape and plite, but your the one who suffers like irish and the blight//
now now crying wont evade, im just bying time, maybe you got some to spare, theres no lying you got full blown aids//
tonights your last, heres are some razor blades, no more charades im done with you fool//

take a step back, fade to black, pul the shades down, Your under attack, your like iraq ,in a wierd way ill miss you, ill have noone left thats worth killing//
grilling and spilling, your ass and your blood, or maybe your crips can help out this flood//
a million ways to kill a bitch like you, too bad it had to end so soon//
i was having fun, im in a murdering kinda mood, i told yah you should be dead but instead i have to the dirty dead understood?//
enough of this shit times come and times gone, and its time to get the gun, two shots in the chest//
nigga gimme your best, micheal jackson could lay it down harder than you, you know hes used to your type//

oh and abortifacient is a pill that is givin to women as an Abortion pill ....

damnit forgot another one.... sry about this... an au pair is a foriegn person that is living in a local house an doe house work... so a foriegn unpaid maide

aight cool here we go

aight i spit these words into ya chest and leave ya breathless/
i read about ya girl in ya profile i believe she's breastless/
comin from new jersey ya should have stayed/
cuz i kill ya, bury ya and leave ya decayed/
i be killin out a towners cuz i'm spittin from utah/
flowin so quickly peeps be thinkin i'm luda/
i know so much about ya cerile/
i'll let everybody know your secret, "he cant get it up unless wit a pill"/
so go back home/ call your g-friend via phone/
let her know that baller be givin her a bone/

jesus dog your flows are whack/
i wouldnt of challenged u if i knew u woulda posted dat/
but still i'll reply/ cuz i'm a nice guy/
but even though i'm nice/ i'ma give ya some advice/
get a new hobby/
stay in new jersey/
cuz even though i be from a gay as state/
i'll take ya girl return her just a little half baked/
cuz she be hittin the bong thats my shlong/

aight there it is so post ya votes

hey it's all gravy u aint gotta explain ya rhymes, i figured them out

cerile: vocab great way better then your opponent
punches your punches hit a lot better then your opponents
structure ballers structure i thought was a little better
baller vocab not really there ..too many single syllable rhymin
punches they were on the okay side but not strong enough
structue was a lot better then ya opponent

v/cerile

i vote for CERILE because he has great punchlines

nice job but needs work baller....i want to battle you...set it up

Vote=CERILE

baller had a better verse then the other ones ive checked out but im still goin w/ cerlie for better punches an above average wordplay

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my vote goes to cerile, for better punches and better wordplay, couldnt get the flow to really sound right, but he still ripped baller. Baller needs to work on punches, and his flow was working for him though.

hit this up
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118235
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my vote goes to cerile, for better punches and wordplay couldnt get the flow to really sound right but he still ripped baller Baller needs to work on punches, and his flow was working for him though and work on creativitie and personlas added in you verse