Unborn Rookie \\\/// Yung Duke
 

Aight, Yung Duke...it's all you.

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My first bar is gonna explain just why you gets no respect,
Check ya name ya ass is a Rookie that aint even alive yet,
So to put it in a nice way, you dont exist your ass is a nobody,
What good rapper you beaten, let me take a guess, nobody,
You'll never beat me, Iv'e seen ya battles, why press ya luck,
this dumb nigga Im'd me on AIM to say thanks for me sayin he sucks,
This is Duke, I'm not the average like the lame niggaz you've beaten,
The only time you'll ever blow, is when ya dick releases it's seamen,
It took you a week to finally grow the balls for this Wensday night fight,
your punk ass say you had shit to do, but I say you was scared so you had to write,

Yung Duke -- you duke like ya young, dude /
Get torn by Unborn – Do you really want to? /
Front like ya do ‘till anotha brotha confronts you /
Then get broke and smoked like them mothafuckin blunts do /
Couldn’t hold a beat if you was runnin the one-two /
I’ll come through ‘n rip ya ass like a disastrous monsoon /
Yung Duke, please – You could be a master of Kung Fu /
‘N still not land a “punch” even if my ass was upon you /
Ya beat yaself for once – I could spit passive ‘n punk you /
But fuck passive – I ain’t plastic -- I’d rather be blastin dis gun, fool /
I reek havoc on bastards with my tactical thug crews /
So just imagine the Mack, bitch – ‘N be practical, Yung Duke /
Say I'm a nobody -- well this nobody's mackin it on you /
It ain’t my style to pedafile – So don’t be havin me fuck you! /

duke: nice..structure was good and and great flow. you went directly at your opponent and i find ya punchlines amusing

un: yours was good too. u can tell u real new ..jus work on the structure and flow a little bit more and come up with harder punches and you'll be straight elevate man

v/duke

uppin

this was close but punches came harder form youngin so he gets my vote hey yo hit up my battles with a vote props

Unborn Had A Better Structure And Flow
Vote Goes 2 Unborn

yo...thanks for the votes...both good and bad...but we gotta get a lil more elaboration on ya voyes or their gonna get rejected by the mods. Oh and Da Classic.....i respect yo opinion, but if you think for one second that my structure was weaker than Yung Duke's than you just blind, yo. I mean what the hell is you talkin bout? It's one thing to think he was just better, but his structure? You need to read that shit again.....lol.
Anyways...thanks everybody for at least sayin somethin. Keep votin.
Still uuuuuuuuuuuuuupppppppppppppppppppppppin!!!!

UBR

Duke:good punches good flow simple vocab but ur flow was still good doe


Rookie:Ok punches can work on dem a bit vocab work on it u have an easy rhymes scheme use bigger wordz it sounds betta

v/duke

aiiight break down

Duke: good flow nice personals and punches , could've used more meta's and word play but still a solid verse

Rookie: your opening line made no sense at all , some of your punches seemed off to me man , u still had good flow but i didn't think it was enough to take this battle

know a good verse when you see one..still uuuuuuuupppppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnn!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Damn!....lol

UBR

man i gotta come out truthful yall both had some good flows and verses...both came hard...but im sorry my vote has to go to unborn

yo...if any one questions this dude's opinion..ya'll crazy. Just check out his audio flows and see the value in his words. Still think he's wrong. Battle 'em then...lol. Get ya ass beat real quick. Still uuuuuuuuupppppppppppiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!

UBR

Yo Unborn Stop hatin on my votes. Uppin

Still uppin, I just wanna get the last vote up in here.