Murder Phreak vs. A.K.A.
 

YO MY WIGGA how about a no crew no limit lines no crew votes note hate vote no dick riding battle between me and you. you spit first and i'll come back at you. ok holla back. and no preposted shit. are right 1.

iight checkin in but I'll drop when I get off the phone with my lady

quit stalling and just go you made me miss two battles i wanted to be in so stop wasting my time.

iiight you im patient ho get it ready

Fuck weak MCs i rip them fags to rags/ your rhymes are cheap and burntout like shwag buddha bags
bitch I roll with Psy-Chos and slaughter dyke-hos/ you'll never Find-Flows without a search on Ly-Cos/
you don't have a punch that can provoke an aiyooo/ choppa stole my chance to deal your first K.O./
you're more wack then a Hammer come back(can't touch this)/ the only way you'd move units is puttin me on a track/
i ain't sweatin you man I just look at your sig/ and see you get owned on every battle you did/
you suck so bad your own momma told ya so/ so take your dreams of flowin and throw 'em out tha window
This is your last battle you better realize/ your rhyme is just anotha waste of my time/
I type without spite so why do you fight/ the fact that your wack and that you can't write
so slit your wrist when you hear this diss/ cuz I know your pissed if ignorance is bliss/
then you're as happy as can be cuz i guess you don't see/ from the get-go you never had a chance against me

there ya go man you wanted me to drop first now bring your shit I'll check back later!!

quit stallin' MAAAAAAAAN drop yer verse MAAAAAAAAN
lol I'm jes playin i would be intimidated too :thefinger

ill vote wen he decides to post until then put an honest vote on these...

MC DooM Vs L.I
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118305

Mc DooM Vs Baller
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118270

yo check it i wasn't gonna battle this wigga cause i could get you merked in a day or two

fuck that i fuck up forget it it didn't mean nothing i was using quick reply and messed up sorry.

bust it out then and quit talkin trash wiggaaaaaaaa

i got this
 

yo check it i wasn't gonna battle this wigga cause i could get you merked in a day or two//
i got this dude screaming i'll double what ever they paying you//
but yo went it comes to killing i work for free//
and if you got beef with me/ then it probably//
that you going to die//
and my bullets is like onions they make you cry//
exspecially when they hit all of your family members//
my name is A.K.A. and that i grantee that you will remembers//
because compared to you i'm a boss//
yo check it this wigga faker then santa cluas//
i name means when there a murder you freak//
i already have the skill that you seek//
but i glad that you don't have the same style as everyone else on this site//
and half the votes against me is because i'm white//

hate 2 burst yo bubble dogg but i'm a cracka too so there.....
but good verse lets get some votes

i never said you weren't white and yeah lets get some vote. yo and send me an im i'm nadrappper14 aight 1

AhhhhhhhhHaaaaaaaa Murder Phreak MERKED YOUR @$$ Playa

Punches: MP
Structure: MP
Flow: MP
Consistant WordPlay: MP
Vocab: MP
Creativity: MP

MP Got This Shit' .... and Merked You Playa' ... Your Verse Was A Bit Basic A.K.A But Respect' .. Stick To Your Own Class' Level FreeStylers' ....

Vote: MP

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

ok pretty even battle
BREAKDOWN
Opener - Murder...wasnt too imopressive but better than aka
Flow - Murder...his lines werent stretched n that helped his flow...aka dont stretch ya lines cuz it fucks up ya flow
Punches - Murder...most punches in this were indirect...sum of murders were aight so he got the punches
Personals - aka....muder had none....aka only had one and it was weak but a weak one beats no personals at all
Sustainment - Murder...he kept a hot verse up....aka ya shit started off slow but u picked it up...nice spit towards the end
Closer - Murder...pretty nice closer n u ended it wit a nice punch....aka i didnt feel ya closer cuz it didnt flow

heres some advice
Murder - never try to use punches say ur mom...unless ya shit is so hot...it makes ya rhymes elemtary....nice spit overall...and use personals
AKA - werk on your personals....werk on not stretchin ya lines.....overall an ok spit......and werk on punches
v/murder
return the favor
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118305