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Nope vs. Ghost354
Rules..
No min or max just spit...(Non Negotiable) timelimit : 20 to 30 mins after checkin in(Negotiable if more time needed) Votes : No hate or Dick riding votes crews aloud (unless you disaggree) First up to mic : You (non negotiable) |
aight pimpin im checkin in i expect you do the same holla
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dis the mothafuckin check in and now a blind spit u can do wha u do
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You should do like a ghost and dissapear ..when it comes to me im ya main primal fear...
i see you stratin to shake when i come near...Battlin me is a bad choice i kould be the end of ya career.. when i spit i might as well put my words on top of your head... cause theyre too complicated for you ..what i write with this lead.. my words will put a niggas career in trauma ... wit my wordplay im more fierce and despised than that nigga osama... dont strat cryin afterwards cuz i dont want no drama... i got enuff of it after your daddy found out i was sleepin wit yo mama... ghost you made the wrong choice battlin me.. im postin up in this bitch for everyone to see... that how sick i can really be... by the end of my flow ill be wanted by every crew and that i can gaurantee... But now im unleashin the wordplay of a genius in a 15 yr olds brain... tryin to keep wit my words is drivin you insane... what you lack i pick up in and get stronger.. ya verse is too plain.. You aint even posted yet but im callin it a victory... kuz ya styles more sloppier than a college dormitory... |
listen it aint a nigga in the game that can see me/
nope u cant beat me better get 3 more wishez from a jeanie/ rush niggaz like dwight freeny leave u ass naked wearin a beanie/ u beat don d? wow dog big i should give u a round of applause/ but not with clappin im talkin wit a gun when i pull it from my drawz/ so keep plotin on a victory an ill smash that pronto/ 1 win got u thankin u a warrior like tonto/ got 2 gunz to give u shotz like a pair of free throwz/ wash the blood off my shirt and it turn to indigo/ flippin on niggaz like jack nicholson in the shinin/ come on now that shit u spitin u call that rhymin?/ like glass u just see threw so i must be diamond/ dont call me playstation just cause im in the game/ yo old rapz need restoration im heatin em wit the flame/ wit no hesitation them pistolz iz tearin u out the frame |
aight uppin for votes
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nice battle this should take a year and ahlaf to close this thread
explain your votez or dont vote simple and plain leave linkz an ill vote on your shit so holla |
aight nice battle uppin for votes drop links and ill return da favor peaCe
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You should do like a ghost and dissapear ..when it comes to me im ya main primal fear...
i see you stratin to shake when i come near...Battlin me is a bad choice i kould be the end of ya career.. both of these are way overused.. i hear that same personal against ghost each battle.. the second line is also too long i think when i spit i might as well put my words on top of your head... cause theyre too complicated for you ..what i write with this lead.. aight.. that's my kinda punch.. pretty original my words will put a niggas career in trauma ... wit my wordplay im more fierce and despised than that nigga osama... dont strat cryin afterwards cuz i dont want no drama... i got enuff of it after your daddy found out i was sleepin wit yo mama... already did the career thing above, but your worldplay and rhyming are pretty nice, last line kinda overused to, but still nice ghost you made the wrong choice battlin me.. im postin up in this bitch for everyone to see... that how sick i can really be... by the end of my flow ill be wanted by every crew and that i can gaurantee... .. could just done "crew, i gaurantee" and the flow would have been nicer. not a great punch either But now im unleashin the wordplay of a genius in a 15 yr olds brain... tryin to keep wit my words is drivin you insane... aight, pretty good what you lack i pick up in and get stronger.. ya verse is too plain.. You aint even posted yet but im callin it a victory... kuz ya styles more sloppier than a college dormitory... "more sloppier" ... kinda a weak closer over all listen it aint a nigga in the game that can see me/ nope u cant beat me better get 3 more wishez from a jeanie/ rush niggaz like dwight freeny leave u ass naked wearin a beanie/ the opener is in like half the battles i see... second line pretty nice, 3rd has a multi but i dont care much for the punch u beat don d? wow dog big i should give u a round of applause/ but not with clappin im talkin wit a gun when i pull it from my drawz/ that second line has pretty bad flow, the first line is ok but you dind't really go anyway with it so keep plotin on a victory an ill smash that pronto/ 1 win got u thankin u a warrior like tonto/ pretty ok punch got 2 gunz to give u shotz like a pair of free throwz/ wash the blood off my shirt and it turn to indigo/ weak.... flippin on niggaz like jack nicholson in the shinin/ come on now that shit u spitin u call that rhymin?/ like glass u just see threw so i must be diamond/ weak... dont call me playstation just cause im in the game/ yo old rapz need restoration im heatin em wit the flame/ wit no hesitation them pistolz iz tearin u out the frame that second line is pretty nice, the other two are just weak Overall vote: Nope ... both y'all need more original stuff n work on your flow. |
^^new blacklist voter u just aint gangsta to feal my flowz u geek but fuck it uppin
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wow slow down on votin on this shit somebody might win by next year
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screw you blacklist voter... i dont care how gangsta your ass is i don't vote for people who cant rap, so grow a pair (not to mention i voted for your ass on another battle)
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i agree with S.E. theres not much flow to either spit, and the punches could be way better..... i can't see a way to call it
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Aight uppin on this vote drop a link ill return da favor
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Aight Well people could you slow down on the vote !!!!! uppin vote on this shit dont sleep..... pretty good battle vote people vote!
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