He-Man VS Insane16
 

rules were~~

10-15 lines
me spit first
no dr hate or crew
i get 30 mins after check into to spit

goodluck

P.S....NO D/R!!

check -in....w/e


Insane Bestoed With Aerobics, Hope Is He Can Step-Up
You Want To Be A-Head? Look, I Just Want Your Neck-Cut,
My Respects-Stuck 4 Noobs, Insane's Weak-N-You'l-See
...Soft.....Tender....Yeah, My Avy Got Him Beatin-His-Meat
-^No Wonder Its Hard-To-Stay, Ur Friends R Hard-To-Pay
Mommys The Cause 4 Insanity, & Y U Cry On Fathers Day!
Nobody Really Likes U! Lame?-Past It Theres Insane-Static
Main-Faggit, Gay Flow & Look, U Only Gt 1 Straight-Jacket!
Mistake To Play Big-League, Ur Last Battle Shit-See,
Hopin 4 Strength In Number? He-Man Vs Insane # 16....???
U Kiddin-Me? Rap 2u Is Still-A-Dream That U Can't-Play
So Go Click Cool Edit Pro, Eyes Closed n Pretend Ur Kanye, kid

checkin in................................................ ..............................................

niggas like this are the true reason y fifty made wangsta/
lil pussies runin round actin gangsta/
ur shyt looks like a paragraph not a battle/
so now ima slaughter this nigga like droppin big boy on a heard of cattle/(big boy is the name of the bomb drop on japan after pearl harbor)
if i jabbed my dick through ur head i still wouldnt get brain/
u could neva maintain the weight of insane in this rap game/
if i fuked a girl and shoot at u i could call it a 3-sum cuz id be bustin on 2 pussies/
ill blow off ya nuts and tell every1 i lightined ya load/
u came down my road to get some brain so ill make ya niggas heads explode/
come at me and my back yard is where u will remain and ceroad/(i cant spell it but ceroad is supposed 2 mean like rot away and shyt like that but i dunno if i spelled it right)
after this u gunna go pop star talkini bout love got ya life in a twist/
ill hunt u down and turn u into kurt cobien and have u slit ur wrists/
ur only crunch time is when u bite into a twix but ya hip hop game is all in the mix/
so ima leave this penny weight wit the words of wisdom to neva go against a heavy weight/
its like osca de lahoya go agains lenox lewis if his whole body was filled with leaded weights/

Votes..... uno the drill, 10 posts or up

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NO D/R!!

breakdown for he-man:

flow:good job nice flow 7/10

volcab:average nothing really to say 5/10

punches:pretty tame nothing that really hurt best line,"Hopin 4 Strength In Number? He-Man Vs Insane # 16....???" 6/10

overall:18/30 tighten up those punches

breakdown for insane16:

flow:no real flow really long lines and nothing to tie them together 4/10

volcab:alright use i think you overextended what you should though cause of the spelling mistakes but 6/10

punches:best line,"so now ima slaughter this nigga like droppin big boy on a heard of cattle" not great but different nothing else really stood out here 5/10

overall:15/30 really not enough to win here

vote--heman gets my vote

Why Thankya

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yo u gotta break down ur vote dawg thats some dr shyt unless u explain it man but wutever no hate uppin...........

Aye Yo.... The Break Down...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! No Bull Shit'

Henchman Gets My Votes Also' ...!! Because... Mainly Insane' Your Shit Was "Basic" Flow Was Off.. Witch Threw Your Structure.. Off Witch Threw Your Verse Off... And It Was Basicall's .... Off Balance' .... !!! No Vocab Nor WordPlay' ...!! .. Punches Werent Connected!! But Aye Yo.. Enough Of That Shit!!

Check Henchman's Lines:

Insane Bestoed With Aerobics, Hope Is He Can Step-Up
You Want To Be A-Head? Look, I Just Want Your Neck-Cut

^An Alright Opener Could Have Came A Bit Harder' ....!! 8/10

-^No Wonder Its Hard-To-Stay, Ur Friends R Hard-To-Pay
Mommys The Cause 4 Insanity, & Y U Cry On Fathers Day!

^Line Is Fucked Up Fix It' .. lol ... 5/10

Nobody Really Likes U! Lame?-Past It Theres Insane-Static
Main-Faggit, Gay Flow & Look, U Only Gt 1 Straight-Jacket!

^Line Was Clean' ... & Liked The WordPlay 9/10

U Kiddin-Me? Rap 2u Is Still-A-Dream That U Can't-Play
So Go Click Cool Edit Pro, Eyes Closed n Pretend Ur Kanye, kid

^Best Line & Also Awsome Closer!! :) 10/10 .. I Like Your Style It's A Bit Like Mine!! .. Propz On That.. Well ProPah Verse!! I Enjoyed It

Vote: Henchman

Breakdown:
Punches: H
Meta: H
Multies: H
Wordplay: H
Flow: Tie
Disses: H

Overall-One Sided Battle.Henchman Came Too Strong For Insane To Keep Up.H's Verse Had A Touch Of Everything Needed.He Had Stronger Punches Although Some Parts Could Have Been Delivered Better,He Had Tight Metas & Used Good Wordplay.His Multies Were Nice & The Flow Was On Point Too.Insane Had An Ok Verse.He Threw A Few Decent Disses But No Real Punches Or Complexity....Elevate

Vote-Henchman

Talk To Me Sometime H...

lol wow niggas can really dick ride on this site i wish i was still on the originall rb all of u fukin kids should be killed for being wack wuteva i dun give a fuk ne more uppin......

wtf lets get some votes man i merked this pussy why is he winning fukin kids cant see talent uppin for the 3rd time.....

uppin for the 4th time .................................................. ............................

henchman-thought your rap was too difficult too keep up with, weak all over
think you should try and focus, on better in-outro's or maybe wordplay on ya meti's

flow- terible
punches-weak(hard to deceipher)
metis-there are some meti's but they're all so god damn, confusing
your using so much filler, making your battle so weak
personals--0
2/10

Insane-like your drop, honestly your killing your battle, by (explaining things)
imagine whatching you explain ya battles on audio.......haha
you started off weak, and ended weak, but you were the best today
flow, the flow was nice, easy reader, just those things in ()))that killed it
punches-quick and easy, dont think you really tried very hard
metis- couple of good ones, used them to your advantage--bonus
personals---0

fav line
"niggas like this are the true reason y fifty made wangsta/
lil pussies runin round actin gangsta"

vote: insane