G-Rattle Vs Young Renegade
 

Ez Dogg,

Letz roll,

No D/R
10 linez min

U Spit 1'st man

ayo, im the renegade,im standin here in my b-boy stand/
u the rattle? oh u a baby, nowonder u pissin in ya pants/
i spit that shit that make eminem look non noncontroversial/
bust on ya girls face so she look like she from a noxima commerical/
and My dick stay in ya girls mouth all the time like her teeth/
And the heat will have ya corny ass sweatin liek keith/
Ayo im a real gangsta ill throw ya body in the luandry hamper/
U just a lil kid still crawlin around in pampers/
fuck u, shit im done wit this gay ass battle/
Why am i wastin my time wit a dude who still play wit a rattle/

ah fuck first line sound be " im the renegade, standin here in my b-boy stance"

Battle
 

Nice...

Yo Young renegade, waz it your mom i just laid?
Heres My spade, u gonna need it,
ya only leavin in ma hurse, so go get busy, use ya purse
2 buy a plot o land, stand in it luk around,
itz where u gonna b...dead and fuckin found

This shit your sayin in your text, u sure itz at your best?
I swear this little fucker sitting there in a pink vest
cuz u c he likes 2 use wordz like Gay, an Kidz
probly spanks hiz dad with fat-ass fuckin dustbin lidz
this keith guy your gay lover? u sure like 2 talk
U probly bend him over an fuckin shove in ya stalk

Yo man, giv my spade back, im very nearly dun
Peace out bro, my ryhmes thru, itz time 2 get the gun
Go stand in that Hole u dug, u sure your happy with it?
I'll Make sure Keiths lyin at your side, peace out bro, go liv it

cuz renegade why u ever think you'd win this battle
It'll teach u next time not 2 mess with da G-Rattle

uh keith is keith sweat, get it the heat will make u sweat like keith...aight llets get some votes

Letz get theze Votez Rollin now we both said our piece

Dude, how u sposed 2 get Keith sweat outta dat?
No offence dogg, but it waz kinda shit

make u sweat like keith...idk y u dont get it, i mean dudes name is keith sweat

Im Going To Have To Give This To!! Young Renegade!! lol.. Dude Took This Battle! Off Hand

Yo Young renegade, waz it your mom i just laid?
Heres My spade, u gonna need it,
ya only leavin in ma hurse, so go get busy, use ya purse

^But What The Fuck Is Up With These 3Lines'!! I Mean C'Mon' ... 0/10

this keith guy your gay lover? u sure like 2 talk
U probly bend him over an fuckin shove in ya stalk

^Good Punchline!!' ... 9/10

Go stand in that Hole u dug, u sure your happy with it?
I'll Make sure Keiths lyin at your side, peace out bro, go liv it

cuz renegade why u ever think you'd win this battle
It'll teach u next time not 2 mess with da G-Rattle

^ A Weak Closer!! But Got You The Win' ..!! 8/10

An Alright Verse OverAll Im Going To Have To Say

Now Check Young Renegade's Lines:

ayo, im the renegade,im standin here in my b-boy stand/
u the rattle? oh u a baby, nowonder u pissin in ya pants/

^ A Very Weak Opener Could Have Improved On That Shit 7/10

i spit that shit that make eminem look non noncontroversial/
bust on ya girls face so she look like she from a noxima commerical/

^ A Very Hot Line And Also Good Punch!! 10/10

Ayo im a real gangsta ill throw ya body in the luandry hamper/
U just a lil kid still crawlin around in pampers/

^Fairly Good!!! But Just O.K For Me!! 7/10

fuck u, shit im done wit this gay ass battle/
Why am i wastin my time wit a dude who still play wit a rattle/

^Funny Closer!! It Was Aight' ... 9/10


How It Goes Down..!!! ' ' ' G-Rattle Evelate Kiid' ...!! And You Will Improve EveryBody Starts Off At A "Level" And EveryBody Could Work On Something!! That They Can Improve On!!!

But Ya'll Had Nice Structure & A Nice Flow!! I Will Give You That!!!

Good Battle On Both Sides!!

Vote: Young Renegade!!

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Ez,
I gotta admit wen i read da start, It'z kinda shitty, openerz need work

anyway Cheerz Dogg,

Upin 4 Votez :slick:

Adds 2 pennys.....

G-rattle...

Yo Young renegade, waz it your mom i just laid?
Heres My spade, u gonna need it,
ya only leavin in ma hurse, so go get busy, use ya purse
^^^^
?????<---- nuff said

Yo man, giv my spade back, im very nearly dun
Peace out bro, my ryhmes thru, itz time 2 get the gun
Go stand in that Hole u dug, u sure your happy with it?
I'll Make sure Keiths lyin at your side, peace out bro, go liv it
^^^^
ok i dont really know what ure doing but it aint battlin....

and how u didnt know who keith sweat is i dunno...

G-rattle, ya verse is lackin Venom, u need alot of work on battlin full stop...

Renegade...

i spit that shit that make eminem look non noncontroversial/
bust on ya girls face so she look like she from a noxima commerical/
^^^
lol, ma fave punchline of the battle...

fuck u, shit im done wit this gay ass battle/
Why am i wastin my time wit a dude who still play wit a rattle/
^^^
I think that was a sick finisher..props...

so....
my vote goes for renegade, simply cuz his verse was better overall, punches were nicer, flow was a lil off but came out better than rattles...

Ayo Young Ren you doing your thing kid keep battling your killing um. i got that sweat line but it was ok not great but better then his ryhmes. but y you take out Next level in your sig. you still one of us boy?

Wow Young got it b/c he has nice flow and better structure Rattle that was sad but its obvious who won.

Young=6/10
Rattle=3/10

G-Rattle i give you my vote b/c the other guys verse was wack as hell. yours could have been better but all in all you had a better verse. your punchez could have been but but overall nice verse.

vote=G-Rattle

This battle was a dissappointing one idk what you guys think ur rapping about but do what u got to do renegade one this one!!!!!!!!!!!!!