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SPuL™ 04-22-04 05:54 PM

SPuL v.s $$upreme
 
Aiight, here are the rules:
10-20 lines
No D/r, B/s or hate votes
You spit first.
I'll spit 30 mins after I see yours.

$$UPREME 04-22-04 06:59 PM

U Can't Just Set Up A Battle Without Letting Me Know......
Fuck That....
You Got That Shit Pre-written

$$UPREME 04-22-04 10:54 PM

Fuck It I Aint No Pussy'
Lets Go....
Check In...

$$UPREME 04-22-04 11:15 PM

Bitch I Got This Battle In The Bag With An Air-less-seal Cuz No Ones Feeding Off Spul Like A Careless-meal*
I'll Knock You $senseless$ Like Bad Tariff-deals, Cuz You Couldn't Spin The Web With A Modem Box In A Farris-wheel*

Spul You Know I'm About To Expose Your Flesh, Hoe*
Cuz Your Flow Wouldn't Be Ill If You Drank Water In Mexico*

Your Text-is-slow, I'm Bringin That Perpetual-flow, Expect A Easy K.o*
Cuz U Couldn't Cum Sick Having Sex-with-hoes*

Spul's In A Gridlock, I'll Make This Bitch-walk While I Watch Him Shit-rocks*
I'll Be Quick To Secure This Script Like A Zip-lock

You Lack Smart-scripts, Once You Read My Shit You'll Have To Restart It*
You Aint Holding "beat" So I'll Be Kind And Remove Your Heart Kid*

This Kids Been On The "toilet" 4 Hours Trying To Start-shit*
You Wouldn't Be Wreaking A Heat With Farts Lits*

SPuL™ 04-23-04 01:10 AM

aiight, I'll post my verse in 15-20 mins. PEACE

SPuL™ 04-23-04 01:37 AM

Aiight, here I go:

What the fuck you tryin’ to establish… by callin’ me Michael Jackson?
You “Beat It” wit little kids… that’s the only way you contract action

You boast a gun in yo sig… and you think that makes you a G?
Man, Supreme size fries are more gangsta, than you’ll ever be

You gotta be more specific… cuz it won’t get you very far
Cuz you will see yourself dissed about it, in the very next barIn yo location,

you jus say California… man, you’re pretty wack
You go to Burger King and jus ask for a burger… man, lay off the crack

I’ll have yo ass aggravated… and I’ll leave you wit a L-oss
Cuz my rhymes make classes sic, they make ‘em green like tree moss

Your rhymes are so annoyin’… jus like Daffy Duck
The only thing Supreme about them, is the way they fuckin’ suck

You put the money sign in your handle… cuz you don’t have any
You’ll have a nickel after this battle… cuz each vote for me gives you a penny

I’ll be servin’ more aces to you… than Andy Roddick does to Mandy
You’re correct that your career is full a bars, you jus forgot to say they’re candy

Aiight. I never PRe-write my shit, and I also told you about the battle. You challenged me in my battle thread lol. Not my fault if you didn't check back. Uppin' for votes.

Willa 04-23-04 03:11 AM

vote spul he simply had better punches
ss work on ur vacb structure floow and personals nice multis
spul work on personals and vocab pretty good battle

LyricalMethod 04-23-04 08:09 AM

as soonas yall both spit i'll drop a verdict. meanwhile vote on my thread:http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=114038

Enygma 04-23-04 08:18 AM

Alright, here we go. $$upreme started off pretty hard wit some good punches, then fell off wit some shit that made no sense. It seemed like all you were worried about was the multis and forgot the punches. Plus you came wit some old played out shit. Spul came OK but he had some pretty original punches. Originality will always beat played out punches.........

Vote - Spul

Enygma 04-23-04 08:20 AM

Ohh yeah, Thanks for the blacklist............................$$upreme.

$$UPREME 04-23-04 12:04 PM

^^^^you Must Got A Whole Bunch Of D/r..
That Shit Was Looking Stupid Compared To Mine....

franchiZe 04-23-04 12:23 PM

yo dis battle was aight not the best i've seen from u two
ure flow and structure were good spul and u used gud vocabs comin with some original punches. ure punches though were not that hard and they didn't have as good a connection as they shud.
$$upreme ure flow and structure were good and u put up a good spit as always. u lacked a little on originality but unlike others understood ure entire spit and ure punches were good and u had better connection than Spul.
Both of u had spots that were better than the others but my vote goes to $$upreme basically cuz i felt his spit better and he had harder punches.
Vote - $$upreme

Immense 04-23-04 12:58 PM

not a bad battle,supreme had nice punches and nice flow,spul had some nice punches but i thought u cud av come better spittin second.decent battle though

my vote:supreme

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

Immense 04-23-04 01:04 PM

k,in case they try an cancel here how it goes

FLOW- SUPREME
PUNCHLINES-SUPREME
VOCAB-SUPREME

nice battle guys

iamthatdude87 04-23-04 01:05 PM

yo this battle was ok both u had decent punchlines and had decent multies..flow was good for both of u but imma have to give this to spul i voted on this return the favor drop an honest vote on ecko vs shady the links down there\/

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