quickpunch vs L.I.
 

Okay.........

10-20 Lines
No Feeding
No Dr
No Hate
No Crew
Blind Spit
Due 30 Min Fta Check In

I Will Check In Afta U.........pussy

checkin in....i'll spit my shit....dont worry....haha....niiigga finally glad to see u grown...pussy

checked in........lets see that talk afta u lose...........

bitch i kno u waitin fo me 2 drop so u can drop..so here im'a drop...only took me 10 mins 2 cook up...pussy dont care if u win...just doin this fo fun....here it is

Fuck my enemies, shit I got a new and improved style for them
by showing them one of YOUR verses till they die of boredom
went to McDonald's and Fucked the hoe and decided to come back
Even with all the excessive fats It's heavy weight status you lack
Don't act brash we know CLASS SICS has a whack reputation
What's sad is CLASS SICS says you still need elevation (check classics forum fo info)
We can put ur album up for charity and ur shit still wouldn’t drop
I’ll Brake ur Waist and Feet so u can Brag about Repping Hip Hop
u might spit but I vomit , vomit shits that’s hot like the atomic
ur skill level would never be high even if u were on chronic
u might as well not post ur verse cause this battle is already won
u wouldn't be hot even if u were rapping with an inflammatory gun
when u done reading this I'll make u leave this site
u would never shine even if u had the beacon of light
opened u up , so I guess in this battle you could call me the lyrical surgeon
Fucked around with your rhymes so many times I'm surprised your still a virgin
I’ve beating u, it’ll replay in ur head like a chorus u can only refrain
I want to know who died and left you in charge so I can kill them again

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vote on this one straight up I'll vote on this when its done.

My Verse
 

Oh yea...

Now this is what i wanted...

To finish this herb's trash talking....

Haha....aight check it...

I could finish this 'quick' wit the complex 'punches' i throw...
Forget about his dick...i think he needs he is game to grow...
Talkin shit like he left my crew and he hot shit leadin his own route...
What the fuck are you talkin bout...i kicked you weak ass the fuck out...
Run your mouth so fucking much but you have nothing to put on display...
Your rhymes are such a joke even mute people have things to say...
Elevation isn’t meant for cats like you, so stop askin for help...
You could use brail on your lines and they still wouldn’t be felt...
Sayin your shit is recognized worldwide and is well known...
Yeah right, there’s a better chance of an artificial plant growin...
Getting into battles and doesn’t even contend or put up a fight...
Name should be Big Boi cause you just an Outkast on this site...
Sure you record looks nice...but ur opponents rhymes look like jokes...
Next time you leave a crew dont come bac askin for sum votes...
Think u could come up with a personal against me? shit thats crazy talk...
I leave you so fuckin shook, your permanantly doin the crypt walk...
Damn you afraid of emcees that guaranteed to leave u in a hurst?...
Seems to me that u havin a major odeal wit having to spit first...
Quit talkin that shit cuz it leaves a very bad impression...
Shoulda no showed cuz u werent an even match contestant...

aight there ya go........quit tralkin shit........votes please.........

nice spit...now its all said and done....best of luck...no more net beef i dont net beef....UPPIN..pce

demobx
 

Both drops was good L.I structure fell off here and there but u had good flow and punches. It was kinda hard for me to decide. I go for quickpunch for having a little bit more stronger punches, but i think it was a good battle

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LI and quick punch
LI felt you came strong and verse wuz tight but no real multiez, most of ya punchez were connectin. your vocab seemed a lil restricted.but overall i give it a 7.5 for you
Quick punch came wit multiez betta punchez didnt see any personalz if there wuz didnt recognize any. but quick punch i give you a 7.8 thiz wuz close az (you know what). But what i think got the vote for you iz your strong opener and consistency.

vote Quick Punch

Shit as Much As I Hate To Do This' iSh.. Im Going To Have To Give This To QuiCckPunch!!

Fuck my enemies, shit I got a new and improved style for them
by showing them one of YOUR verses till they die of boredom

^Opener Is Shit' Weak Weak Weak!! No Doubt!!! Needs Serious Help!!

Don't act brash we know CLASS SICS has a whack reputation
What's sad is CLASS SICS says you still need elevation (check classics forum fo info)

^Nice Punchline' .. But You Throwin It At Class Sic' ..!! Not "L.I." .. So Its Not Directed Towards Him!! 8/10

We can put ur album up for charity and ur shit still wouldn’t drop
I’ll Brake ur Waist and Feet so u can Brag about Repping Hip Hop

^Nice Bar' Right There But The Punch Is Where 7/10

opened u up , so I guess in this battle you could call me the lyrical surgeon
Fucked around with your rhymes so many times I'm surprised your still a virgin

^Nice I Like That Line' .. 10/10 Perfectly Done!! Probably Your Best Line In Your Verse!!

I’ve beating u, it’ll replay in ur head like a chorus u can only refrain
I want to know who died and left you in charge so I can kill them again

^Weak Closer' Could Use Some More Work!!! 2/10

Alright Checcck L.I.'s Lines:

I could finish this 'quick' wit the complex 'punches' i throw...
Forget about his dick...i think he needs he is game to grow...

^Nice Wordplay In The First Line' .. I Like That But Could Have Improved Your Opener ' First Impression 7/10

Run your mouth so fucking much but you have nothing to put on display...
Your rhymes are such a joke even mute people have things to say...

^Nice Punchline There 8/10

Damn you afraid of emcees that guaranteed to leave u in a hurst?...
Seems to me that u havin a major odeal wit having to spit first...

^Again Nice Bar Right There 8/10

Quit talkin that shit cuz it leaves a very bad impression...
Shoulda no showed cuz u werent an even match contestant...

^Nice Closer Well Done 9/10

Im Going To Have To Give This To Quick Punch' Because Some Of Your Lines Didn't Rhyme L.I. And That Threw Your Verse Off Balance' !!!

But Bother Verses Were Straight I Enjoyed Them!!

Fuck my enemies, shit I got a new and improved style for them
by showing them one of YOUR verses till they die of boredom
Not a bad opener....
went to McDonald's and Fucked the hoe and decided to come back
Even with all the excessive fats It's heavy weight status you lack
Ehh...
Don't act brash we know CLASS SICS has a whack reputation
What's sad is CLASS SICS says you still need elevation (check classics forum fo info)
Not a bad personal...
We can put ur album up for charity and ur shit still wouldn’t drop
I’ll Brake ur Waist and Feet so u can Brag about Repping Hip Hop
Ehh.... not worded right...
u might spit but I vomit , vomit shits that’s hot like the atomic
ur skill level would never be high even if u were on chronic
Kind played...
u might as well not post ur verse cause this battle is already won
u wouldn't be hot even if u were rapping with an inflammatory gun
Weak...
when u done reading this I'll make u leave this site
u would never shine even if u had the beacon of light
Zzzz.....
opened u up , so I guess in this battle you could call me the lyrical surgeon
Fucked around with your rhymes so many times I'm surprised your still a virgin
Finally a good punch....
I’ve beating u, it’ll replay in ur head like a chorus u can only refrain
I want to know who died and left you in charge so I can kill them again
Doesn't rhyme.....looks like it does, but sound it out....


I could finish this 'quick' wit the complex 'punches' i throw...
Forget about his dick...i think he needs he is game to grow...
Not that good of an opener...
Talkin shit like he left my crew and he hot shit leadin his own route...
What the fuck are you talkin bout...i kicked you weak ass the fuck out...
Good personal....
Run your mouth so fucking much but you have nothing to put on display...
Your rhymes are such a joke even mute people have things to say...
Ehh....could be worded better...
Elevation isn’t meant for cats like you, so stop askin for help...
You could use brail on your lines and they still wouldn’t be felt...
Kinda played...
Sayin your shit is recognized worldwide and is well known...
Yeah right, there’s a better chance of an artificial plant growin...
kinda weak...
Getting into battles and doesn’t even contend or put up a fight...
Name should be Big Boi cause you just an Outkast on this site...
Ok punch...
Sure you record looks nice...but ur opponents rhymes look like jokes...
Next time you leave a crew dont come bac askin for sum votes...
This was a good fuckin punch.....
Think u could come up with a personal against me? shit thats crazy talk...
I leave you so fuckin shook, your permanantly doin the crypt walk...
Ehh....
Damn you afraid of emcees that guaranteed to leave u in a hurst?...
Seems to me that u havin a major odeal wit having to spit first...
Tried too hard for the personal...
Quit talkin that shit cuz it leaves a very bad impression...
Shoulda no showed cuz u werent an even match contestant...
Ok closer.....


Overall this match wasn't as good after I broke it down. At first glance it seemed that both lyricist came hard wit lots of hard hittin punches...... Quickpunch was ok but I don't think his punches were all that great......L.I was alright too but I loved the line about askin the crew for votes.....that had me rollin.....that's why I gotta give this one to L.I..............

Vote - L.I

thanks for the vote.......uppin............keep the hnest feedback coming..........

I basically agree with enygma. two pretty solid verses, but LI came more consistently and had nicer personals. Tight battle though.. keep elevating both y'all.

v/ LI

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