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<<Oc6 The Caustic VS STriniBonafide>>
14 Lines max, 10 lines min.
No hate votes or d/r votes. You spit first, verse do in 25mins max. after Check in. Same rules apply for me. Check in STriniBonafide, and good luck. |
Let's go , drop ya verse dawg
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Sorry I took long to reply...didn't realise u called me out yet
Its u the Caustic, who just caused it// pause this battle, before you lost it// I want my nickle back, the nickle dat, your mama took, I cost it.// Cost this, me trini, Cause me divide by u infinity// You gave me cause, now I effect, techno on this mic ...check// I'm a wreck handicapping myself to prevent a supernova// News forecast: "The hottest month now this year forecasted for October"// I regretted all my sins befo son but seeing u relives it over// how I raced a dog to be your father, but he just beat me over// the sound of your beatings resound worldwide...from Trinidad to Dover// if this shit was a movie Mel Gibson must have directed it... oh brother// Bother! Every body will witness this massacre// no anti-semitism here tho, just a personal whoop ass// |
Aight, I'll be droppin soon playa.
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My Verse
Yo: (For some punches to make sense, hit up his profile first)
I'm gonna make this cat stand out worse then the midnight sun/ What the fuck you doin' on a PC, with a degree, at the age of 21?/ Don't post like your a shining king, your just a peon to me/ My skills will make your Trinidad land sink right back in the Carribean Sea/ Checking your profile was the funniest shit to me/ You got a major, but have nothing greater, then to be a bitch emcee/ Everybody on here laughs when they see the name bonafide/ Because your crossed between "all talk" and a "pussy", the biggest two sides eversince Jekyll and Hyde/ Stop the rap while to you still have a rep and stick to computer science/ Your entering the Oc6 Battle Program which you won't be saved by trouble shooter reliance/ Why say "who wanna lose, I wanna bust someone up quick?" I'll do everybody a favor and make this "joker" dissapear worse then a card trick/ See how my rhymes flow together nicley, your joke lines will cause a riot to confluent/ My talant is tempting to feast upon and make you get the fuck off your diet of music/ Can we get some Votes^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ |
Uppin on votes^^^^^^^^
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Come on, vote, Drop a link too........I'll holla
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aiight this was a hott battle for OC6...strini had an ok verse but it was almost all filler hardly any punches no wordplay no nothing only thing u did good was structure...OC6 had a good verse felt the whole thing..personals/punches were ill..structure flow wordplay was perfect..nice drop from you...i wasnt really feelin the closer tho...seemed more like filler than a punch but overall good battle...
vote:OC6 ~1~ can someone please vote on any of my battles |
Thanks for the vote, I'll return in one of your battles. Still Uppin^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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Kinda weak battle fellas...strini your punches were weak an half the time mad no sense, no wordplay visible, vocab was basic, opener weak, closer weak, I can only give u props for flow that was the only goood thing, no disrespect but you need to elevate
Oc6....not your strongest verse, but you had a few good punches I wasn't feelin' some of them but the ones that hit were good an hard, some wordplay, vocab was good, structure was lil off, an flow was off alil, opener could f been better, closer was ok, but overall you had the better verse, good drop Vote: Oc6 |
Aight good lookin on the honesty. Still Uppin for Votes^^^^^^^^ Drop a link, I'll holla.
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Trini: Need more punches, more wordplay, get personal w/ his ass, keep it up.
Oc6: Good punches, nice wordplay - Fav line: "Stop the rap while to you still have a rep and stick to computer science/ Your entering the Oc6 Battle Program which you won't be saved by trouble shooter reliance" Vote: Oc6 |
dam this was simple so i aint goin into detail
punches n wordplay win battles imo Vote: ocs Strini: just keep practicin n elevate son peace Cud Sum1 drop an honest vote on D~Illar~1{vs}Supreme |
Aight good lookin, Lets get some more votes^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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Drop a link, You know i'll holla. Lets close this^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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