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Oc6 The Caustic 04-24-04 11:00 PM

<<Oc6 The Caustic VS STriniBonafide>>
 
14 Lines max, 10 lines min.
No hate votes or d/r votes.
You spit first, verse do in 25mins max. after Check in.
Same rules apply for me.

Check in STriniBonafide, and good luck.

Oc6 The Caustic 04-24-04 11:43 PM

Let's go , drop ya verse dawg

STriniBonafide 04-24-04 11:45 PM

Sorry I took long to reply...didn't realise u called me out yet

Its u the Caustic, who just caused it//
pause this battle, before you lost it//
I want my nickle back, the nickle dat, your mama took, I cost it.//

Cost this, me trini, Cause me divide by u infinity//
You gave me cause, now I effect, techno on this mic
...check//
I'm a wreck handicapping myself to prevent a supernova//
News forecast: "The hottest month now this year forecasted for October"//
I regretted all my sins befo son but seeing u relives it over//
how I raced a dog to be your father, but he just beat me over//
the sound of your beatings resound worldwide...from Trinidad to Dover//
if this shit was a movie Mel Gibson must have directed it... oh brother//
Bother! Every body will witness this massacre//
no anti-semitism here tho, just a personal whoop ass//

Oc6 The Caustic 04-24-04 11:54 PM

Aight, I'll be droppin soon playa.

Oc6 The Caustic 04-25-04 12:06 AM

My Verse
 
Yo: (For some punches to make sense, hit up his profile first)

I'm gonna make this cat stand out worse then the midnight sun/
What the fuck you doin' on a PC, with a degree, at the age of 21?/

Don't post like your a shining king, your just a peon to me/
My skills will make your Trinidad land sink right back in the Carribean Sea/

Checking your profile was the funniest shit to me/
You got a major, but have nothing greater, then to be a bitch emcee/

Everybody on here laughs when they see the name bonafide/
Because your crossed between "all talk" and a "pussy", the biggest two sides eversince Jekyll and Hyde/

Stop the rap while to you still have a rep and stick to computer science/
Your entering the Oc6 Battle Program which you won't be saved by trouble shooter reliance/

Why say "who wanna lose, I wanna bust someone up quick?"
I'll do everybody a favor and make this "joker" dissapear worse then a card trick/

See how my rhymes flow together nicley, your joke lines will cause a riot to confluent/
My talant is tempting to feast upon and make you get the fuck off your diet of music/

Can we get some Votes^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Oc6 The Caustic 04-25-04 12:07 AM

Uppin on votes^^^^^^^^

Oc6 The Caustic 04-25-04 03:26 AM

Come on, vote, Drop a link too........I'll holla

FlowIntelligent. 04-25-04 03:31 AM

aiight this was a hott battle for OC6...strini had an ok verse but it was almost all filler hardly any punches no wordplay no nothing only thing u did good was structure...OC6 had a good verse felt the whole thing..personals/punches were ill..structure flow wordplay was perfect..nice drop from you...i wasnt really feelin the closer tho...seemed more like filler than a punch but overall good battle...

vote:OC6

~1~

can someone please vote on any of my battles

Oc6 The Caustic 04-25-04 03:34 AM

Thanks for the vote, I'll return in one of your battles. Still Uppin^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Triple_N 04-25-04 03:46 AM

Kinda weak battle fellas...strini your punches were weak an half the time mad no sense, no wordplay visible, vocab was basic, opener weak, closer weak, I can only give u props for flow that was the only goood thing, no disrespect but you need to elevate
Oc6....not your strongest verse, but you had a few good punches I wasn't feelin' some of them but the ones that hit were good an hard, some wordplay, vocab was good, structure was lil off, an flow was off alil, opener could f been better, closer was ok, but overall you had the better verse, good drop
Vote: Oc6

Oc6 The Caustic 04-25-04 04:01 AM

Aight good lookin on the honesty. Still Uppin for Votes^^^^^^^^ Drop a link, I'll holla.

Mentalz 04-25-04 04:10 AM

Trini: Need more punches, more wordplay, get personal w/ his ass, keep it up.
Oc6: Good punches, nice wordplay - Fav line:
"Stop the rap while to you still have a rep and stick to computer science/
Your entering the Oc6 Battle Program which you won't be saved by trouble shooter reliance"

Vote: Oc6

D~Illar~1 04-25-04 06:22 AM

dam this was simple so i aint goin into detail
punches n wordplay win battles imo
Vote: ocs
Strini: just keep practicin n elevate son
peace

Cud Sum1 drop an honest vote on
D~Illar~1{vs}Supreme

Oc6 The Caustic 04-25-04 01:48 PM

Aight good lookin, Lets get some more votes^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Oc6 The Caustic 04-25-04 02:24 PM

Drop a link, You know i'll holla. Lets close this^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^


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