Jay_Dogg vs STriniBonafide
 

10 - 15 lines
no crew, d/r or hate votes
honest votes only
you spit first dawg

gd luck peace

Vote on these two battles before I drop nah king....I definitely need votes but noone's voting
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120624
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121363

ill look at the battles while you are spittin son now lets get the show on the road

look man u r takin to long to spit so we can resume this shit tomoro bout the same time dawg peace

I let loose my harpoon-pull yuh in like scorpion cuz,
and its pure fire when I finish you, I spit fire when I does//
whose this Jay-walking, gay-talking, limp-flow-spitting-puerile blimp
even if it was your first name...ya still won't be called "pimp"// (Check profile
ya flow-s wired like a puppet... so I'm hired to stop it,
y'all know my rhymes are heavy, can't help but to drop it//
shots fire indescriminate, your demise is all but imminent
and I don't use heat-seekers...would be suicide in a statement//
I quote a note meaningful..."Picture means a thousand words"...//
although your 'dis' plate-seems- full, I read a gay dogg trying to be heard while he's more stoned than a quarry he hurries to drop his sh*t....// (his signature picture)
even if u wear an iron panty you'd still get licked//
quick to drop lyrics that you've soldered and hacked...
irrelevant shit goes back to 8-tracks and MJ black,
mack daddies, Tupac alive and furry kangol hats...//
shit couldn't keep me from sleeping if I was an insomniac//

After Ive skimmed your epistle I will surely crave a prozac,
and would only backtrack to read back if I have a fetish for crap//
clap back like Ja Rule... I don't care....yo rhymes are wack...,
while u eat dick as a rule...eatin pussies is my attack//

STriniBonafide and no guy he wouldnt ride, bitch aint got no pride/
what yo name about anyway son, you just tryin to be wide/
playa hatin preachin like a nun, whip out ma tommy gun/
blow you to kingdum kung, hit you in the balls so hard you'd think a bell rung/
ST...GP....whatever, just a mother fuckin G.I.M.P, still sittin on santas knee/
still sendin letters to the fat pedo, please santa what ya got for me?/
mother fucker aint got no flow, surprised he made a show/
compared to him i look like a pro, but this is almost done im bout to go/
so ill drop the beat pass the mic, thats it third strike/
you out the game didnt even win the frame, shits so lame/
slowly climbin to fame, first was the thunder now the rain/
now its done never to happen again/

Come on vote y'all....uppin for votes...come on vote

What ta fuck StriniBonaFide???don't u read PM or bitch slapped anymore.I been callin you out for some time now.I can't vote in this,cause strini might call it a hate vote.

Uppin this fo votes...fellas this aint even got one vote yet...not even a dr one...what's the problem

come on all ya all lets get some votes on this shit.......

this was aight but not the best battle i seen so i'm a break it down simple like

flow
this goes to jay cuz his verse was easier to read and i cud really get into it.
structure
jay again, he used the basic square structure but strini, sum of ure lines were short then long makin it hard to get into it
punches
this one i'm a have to give to strini cuz he had a little more creativity in his lines, his punches just hit harder than jay's cuz jay's were mainly al basic in this spit
opener
this one goin to strini to cuz he used a clever little MK line and jay just spat sumthin basic
closer
both were weak but i'm a give it to jay cuz strini used that ja rule clap back shit that i've heard already, more than once.

OVERALL
a tight battle but my vote is gonna have to swing to strini basically cuz even tho i cud get into jay's flow strini hit wit harder punches and showed just a little more creativity in his spit, jay u just need to stop spittin basic, u cud try what i do, spit a few different styles until u find one that works 4 u

VOTE - STRINIBONAFIDE

thanx man uppin for more votes

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Uppin for some votes

VOTE ON THIS BATTLE WITH A WELL EXPLAINED VOTE.....IM'A HIT THIS UP RIGHT NOW THO
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121649