Terror Vs. uzimaximus
 

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yo im commin live striat up from CT, go ahead crack try to rap against me, this shit aint hard, jus flow some words, make it go together thats a rap ya heard, and sont try to steal shit from 50, ur rhymes straight up fake but mine sound nifty, im form a city, where all i do is rap dawg, head to NY chasin kats wit gats Dawg, and ur metaphores gotta make some sence, i pack nugs in my pocket long and dence, my shit is intence, me and D-money gonna climb dat fence, u know where were commin from dont hide ur face, its a mutha fuckin rapgame not a turtle race, one more thing when u rhyme try to make ur shit more than one scentence, and try to repentence, some shit that works dawg cant u hence, now that ya spent dont come round here, unless u got some shit that i want to hear. big it up to ma dawg terror

im jack the ripzta
and yea im gonna diss ya
wacth out im gonna split ya
im ill
i love to pop a pill
or 2 or 3
so you betta watch out for me
shoot you in the head
and see me flee
im crazy b
im startin to question my sanity
DONT FUCK WIT ME
or ill see you dead
burried under my shed
with a head full of led
I dont give a fuck wat the police said
ill bust on them two
after im finshed with you
youl alway see me in BLUE
alwayz a blunt and gin n juice
im thru
dont fuck me round
or ill blast ya wit bulletz and buck you down
im out so fuck you clownz
sorry dun more than 15 words heres another

ight heres mine

This kid Steppin to me like he big callin me a Hoe//
But he must not know hes gonna get Ripped in my Flow//
UziMaximus?Why did u take ur name from "Gladiator"//
But ur still tryin to reach my level while i ride the Escalator//
You should learned ur lesson when King Tore You Up//
My Rhymes get more attention then a Full House at Rupp//<--(UK's Stadium)
Maybe next time u wont run Your Punk Ass Lips//
Cause i blazed u harder then a Whole Block of Crips//
Your Now danglin on Your Mic,Hangin by Your Final Strand//
I dont hit with my Hand,I Verbally Abuse u so dont wonder u cant Stand//

ok uppin votes

and try to ignore he Doubled line limit

I vote for the first one. purely because it had much more "funk"

not phoned in funk like the second one.

uppin votes

Reading that first and second verse (both by Uzi) hurt my eyes and my mind. It was that bad. Neither was an actual battle verse, just a random series of characters that, frankly, I'm surprised the typist had the skill to form into words. Kid, elevate big time before you start rapping again. Terror, your verse wasn't great, but it was a verse, so you win for the other guy being a total bitch.

vote on my battle with atticus, its on the first page.

haha ight uppin

my votes goes to terror he murked this cat.uzimaximus your punches were weak and you were rappin bout yourself in some lines for example i love to pop a pill
or 2 or 3
so you betta watch out for me you have to come better than that and you need to flix your structure

ma vote terror

still uppin

Votes plz

Votes plz

Still uppin plz

well when u get 20 come back and vote