the streets' reminder
 

juss 10 lines i will make it longer dont wrry.


i wrote this to JAY-Z's the TAKE OVER.

Miles ahead of half you niggas juss COUNT-DA-DISTANCE//
And wen I retire imam settle down at MT.-OLYMPUS//
But for now I’m trying like the JOHN McCLAIN of HIP HOP//
Aiming for big shots// ficses in microwaves is da only way u’d make ya SHIT HOT//
You pricks, stop// cuz not every CASE-can-be-CLOSED//
And I roll with niggas who’s holsta reaches from they WAIST-to-they-TOES//
Take my advice and watch yo mouth nigga I juss hope you relax//
Cuz I kno u kno, every phone can be tapped, and codes can be cracked//
I run it, I rip it,// I’ve done it you witnessed//
Spit nothing but sickness// you want this come get this//

gimme some feedback yall

shit was good...very nice....no complaints...u came hard with it....u spat wht was on ur heart it sounds like so thats what makes it hott....

Thats Some Good Shit Man!!!!!!!!!!!

im feelin that big upps

yo thanks for the feedback so far yall and i would like some more holla back at ya boi.....

come on

i need more feedback yall come on

yeah that's wus up partna i'm feelin it
Put sum lenght on it and dat shit will be fire.
It's wit it tho good shit

i liked it.....u had some nice flow and some good creativity......big ups........keep writing

wow, dat is well gd lol, i aint no expert at all dis rap battlin but dat was amazin

thanks for the feedback but i want more.

The take over...nigga ya breaks over...god emcee me jay hova....lol, sorry i had the song in my head and shit, but ya verse was hot, stay up!!!!!!!!

i need more feedback. drop a link on ur open mic and i'll holla back.

yo gimme some feedback yall....

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123259
you are good man, your rhymes are Smooth, and good Vocab, only thing is some verses too long

100% hottttttttttttttt