MARVOLoUsJ1009 - vs - Shadows Edge
 

10-12 lines.
No d/r, hate, crew, bs votes.
Verses due sometime tonight.

And yes, you should probably check in sometime soon....

jea checkin dunny..............................lets get it goin

aight, checking in. good luck man.. you'll need it :cool:

Aight.. been a while because I had a couple drinks with some friends.. aight check it:

You want some royal sickness? That ain’t your location
At night this “queen’s Nyc(nice)”… that’s his vocation
I’d end your career now, but I don’t want beef with your pimp
I mean... come on.. wow… front hard, walking with a ghetto limp?
Only time you rep Hood…is when you on milk delivery
Fuck hos? I would(wood)… but you lack the lumber, g
Fronting like you religious, I see… but that ain’t no prayer song
Man the reason you on your knees… is cuz you heard William Hung
Kid tack on a 1009, thinking there’s strength in numbers
But drop your first line… and the audience in slumber
Rap must be in your blood… cuz I got it flowing freely
Nothing to see here bud… cuz your skills are showing clearly

- Time to end this shit -

Marvelous J(ay)? Well here’s my bet:
You call yourself that…

… cuz your rap career is nothing but net

Um.. are you going to spit some time tonight or what?

who gassed and said ya line's is dope??,but i got nine's and scopes-
dogg i know where u live u like "weed" u not hard da "find & smoke"-

u madd cuzz da nicest nigga he be marv,and u think u could see me? naw-
keep actin on da net u gon dead at a scene with more "Tape" than "vcr's"-

already i koed ya punk ass last time so everytime i post u nervous-
fag 2 u feel its betta 2 "express" ya self thru "mail" like da "postal service"-

u whiteboy dat live in da suburbs u aint neva get dirty-
me nothin but net? only "rap-tour" u eva gon be in is a "vince jersey"-
(raptor)

u soft i dont believe u dude,if u blingin ima send dat eagle thru-
u gon take off ya "juelz" and say here jay "from me da you"-
(juelz datz da name of his album..you'll get it)

i dont know whut da fukk is on shadow's mind dis cats wildin-
u just started rappin nigga u'z a "white boy" dat just kop da "black album"-

pardon da wait dunn i was on da phone

aigth im gonna have to giev this too edge..

MRVE: you was coo but not good enuf..youneed to work on some of your shit like your first few lines were weak as fuck...once i read it agian i was disappointed in you...you are in elevted you should have betta structre than that..you should also be elevated already btu i gueess good battle7/10

EDGE: look kid you have done a lot of elevaten.........you already no wat you did wrong....but the main factor is that you didnt come wit enuf punches and it could have gotten a lil peronals in this but mayb it is becuz your a lil faded rite now so when you sober up you should have a rematch...all in all good battle 8/10

vote=EDGE

Blah I forgot to write no feeding. Aight, upping for votes.

aye yo can i change my vote....actuall y i would like to change my vote....EDGE see if i can change my vote....

^ um.. well you have to explain it i think. and then PM strobe and I'll go to complaints forum

aight i did it................................................ ..........

lol im elevated now?? shit aint no different ova here nigga uppin

Here's how I saw it.....

MarvolousJ1009 came Ok but that's about it. He had a few punches that hit but his flow was horrible due to some very stretched lines. Also, his spelling made it hard to read and get any kind of rythem going. I spent more time trying to translate than actually enjoying the verse........Shadows Edge was Ok as well. His punches weren't all that great except for one that had me dying......

Marvelous J(ay)? Well here’s my bet:
You call yourself that…

… cuz your rap career is nothing but net

That basically did it for me....

Vote - Shadow's Edge

Please return the favor with some honest votes on the battles in my sig....they're getting slept on.....

lmaoooo yo i said dat line be4 on dis site..but its nothin 0-2