*Tay.G*SinCity* vs White Craca
 

10 lines
No hate
No d/r
No crew
Plz xplain votes
1st to 5

ill spit first aight

yo i might be new to this shit/
but my flows are ill but u wont admit it/(1)
just spit it out and stop stealing lines/
Write ur own rhymes bitch/(2)
Im about fill yo ass up with lead/
leave you at the corner while ur girlfriend givin me head/(3)
pocket full of bread for luck/
aftermarket tires on ya truck/(4)
Ill stalk yo ass and find u up in yo room watching porn and fucking the broom/(5)
Its funny i talk about ur rapping on the streets/
and when u lose u get cleats(6) of dog shit up in yo face/
Ur a big disgrace(7) bitch and thats why ur goin down/
U literally get fucked up when u go into town/(8)
Shit man u way probably fuckin 400 pounds/
but it only takes 2 rounds to get yo ass down/(9)
and thats why im gonna end this shit

O....M.....G...... This is gonna be a piece of cake... I only read da 1st few lines u dropped, but I doubt da rest is gonna matter...

lOl

...Twistin' Linguistics, Ma spits is jus cystic to this bitch's simplistics...//
If you thinkin to win this dont be optomistic, coz what u spit makes me think why I did this... ??

*Aiight, I'm jus playin wid'chu now... Not even tryin...*

This lame could ‘Engage-In-FRAUD’, but still couldn’t “CON”-VERSES if he was was a CHUCK 'TAYLOR-STAR'//
I will ‘DE-RAIL-YA-BARS’ & have u LIVIN LIFE ON DA ROAD like bein’ EVICTED FROM YA ‘TRAILOR~PARK’!!// KO

I'll set off a BOMB In-ya-COLLEGE to force you to DROP wid-some-KNOWLEDGE//
It's obvious, switch to GOSPEL RAP and ya still couldn't spit-for-a-PROFIT!// (prophet)

Tay's a Savage Attackker, He can't Manage this Anger, I'll Ravage this Slackker//
Ya Finished so Packk up, Call me a BLACKK PANTHER coz I'm HANGIN this CRACA//

8 Lines is enuff... lOl



Thanx for accepting doe mayne...

... Everyone plz vote fairly....

lol tay took it fo sure..on a completely different level tha craca. craca u got a lot of room for improvement. u shud have used a lot more punches and work on ur flow too. try n even out ur lines so its easier to read. its txt battle so u gotta be aware of wat the reader will think. tay nice drop dawg.

vote = tay.g

ok
 

basically tan g city won
whitecraca
the numbas in ya verse ruined flo
ya structure made it worse
ya linez r well 2 short
u had punches but they were weak
u had no personals
ur rhyme scheme is very basic...u need to rhyme bigger words n add multis
basically elevate..ur new...so u can only get beta

tan g city
ur flow woz gud it woz easy to read
ur punches wernt the best,but they were harder than his n u had more
ur rhyme scheme woz tighter...
basuically jus keep elevatin,n add multis...
also get sum personals...aim ur disses beta
overall u had enough to win ...but up it next time

ma vot tan g city

Yeah, Thanx for da votes ya'll...

Basically T, dat verse was my 'simple shit'. I coulda went all off on em, but didn't think it was worth it. Thanx for da feedbackk doe. I always appreciate good criticism.

Yea Tay U Just Playing Wit Him Getting Da Easy Win

lol tay u ripped him apart, ur vocab was better, well actually everything was better
MY VOTE=TAY, HIT ME BACKhttp://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123580

... Yo, Blackkwell... You forgot to poll homie... lOl

thats why i said i was fuckin new damn i just got on this sshit

^^Dont trip Craca, everybody go be new at some point. Aint nobody doggin you, they jus tryin to give you pointers on how to up ya shit. 'Sall good homie.

More votes people!

Tay took this with better content all round
Cracka had a longer verse but thats the only thing he won in this battle
Tay had heavier punches and nice vocab also addin some strong multis

Vote-Tay

uppin.............uppin.....uppin.....gett voting......

tay g got this he had doper punches and he also had better flow so he gets ,my vote. wc u was ight u juss need to work on harder punches cause they was kinda weak other than that ur ok.

My vote: tay g

please drop an honest vote on this http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124043