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FlOw InTeLLiGeNt Vs. SPuL
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16 lines min 20 lines max no hate votes no crew votes no d/r votes 100 posts to vote no feedin check in i'll spit first ~!1!~ checkity check |
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dis is gonna b a fukin good ass battle, both talented n shyt we'll c how it turns out
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do you have to give the play-by-play
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I Wanna see dis battle hurry up and spit fa realz
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aiight check it....
since you aint hott this loss will be easy-to-take your sleazy-Im-great// and i'll leave spul like a etch-a-sketch cuz he's easy-to-shake// all ur punches "far in distance" i see why this won't be a "close-bout"// this kids' wack in text..only think vet about him is his fuckin post-count// child protective services cant even stop me from killin-this-kid// im a clumsy chef at barbeques cause i stay spillin-his-ribs// spul writin like a thug when he the opposite-of-a-criminal// the only time you CLAP is when you sound-out-syllables// bitch i'll get rid of you..cop a squat then shit-on-you// break you up like intervals...cause kid-your-pitiful// splatter your facial features and fuck you up in general// damage : unpreventable... grill : left unpresentable// i'll pump-you-up...get used like a condom then i'll dump-you-slut// people think you have acne the way i leave you wit lumps-and-cuts// i scatter this turd..talk shit and watch how i shatter this herb// i'll strike SPuL so hard i'll leave him with battered nerves// SPuL never had a streak of brilliance and he's overly fake// i'll pen "gay on ya grill" to prove "fag is written all over ya face"// im arm'd wit cabbage..spul the type to disregard beef but stay tossin salads// put you in the ground and have u "push up daisies" like "gardeners in caskets"// ~!1!~ |
^props to you, man.
Here's my verse: I wanted to gaze things from your point of view, I guess I should have passed Cuz I don’t think it’s possible… to fit my head so far up my ass “ayo spul if u wanna battle holla bak, no beef just wanna battle someone nice”<quote You jus admitted that I’m good, but you gonna call me wack. Man, you’s a joke After I’m through, I’ll have yo ass “Runnin’”, but you ain’t Tupac or Biggie You ain’t Ludicrus either… so stop reppin’ him in yo siggy Unlike what it states in yo title… you ain’t a Multi Master You wouldn’t be Phat wit a Mic, even if your initial name was Disaster (Phat Mic used to be called Disaster Master) You say you from Tha Roc, like you consider yourself from Roc-a-fella For you, that isn’t possible, cuz you can’t even manage to ‘roc-a-cella’ Man, you fancy a DiCk WiT It, that for you, is considered fun You assert that you are “SiCk WiT It”, but like the flu season, you are done You are the opposite of clutch… cuz you can’t contibute in the last quarter You’re so dirty... that you need to creep up on the bath water Jus like your Flow, your mind is slow, don’t kno why you called Intelligent You bought a donut from Dunkin’ Donuts, and returned it, cuz there was a hole in it (lol) You assume you are Royal, but you couldn't even touch cheap gold You prolly are one of those idiots, that has a glass door wit a peep hole I’m flabbergasted you called me out, cuz 99% of the time you are a wussy The only reason a girl would go to you, is if they want a pussy LEt's get votes on this. |
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flows-Nice structure.Nice personals.....Balanced stabled
COmpexity alright so is the punches......Just was a slight off on some things....but aight though 8/10 spul-YOu was tight wit it.........I liked some lines and was feelin some...... Stucture was good...But I think flows take this by a ant...........Compleixty and stuff is good so is the similies and metaphore........but ya live 7.99/10 Return the favor flows please I need this...they are some gay votes http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124057 |
Flow - damn nice spit....u had a hot flow on it....good punches....not really any personals....alot of multi's....structure was okay....dont like the // though....good meta's....good amount of fillers tho.....but i give ur verse an 8 out of 10....good drop....ur really elevatin....
SPuL - alright u started off well.....than fell on one bar....than dominated with punch after punch.....that peep hole one had me rolling......very good drop.....great metas and punches....couple good personals.....that phat mic line was decent....but u killed his verse wit the last few bars.....hot spit....givin ur verse an 8.8 out of 10.... NICE BATTLE....PROPS TO BOTH.... Vote - SPuL |
This was a dope battle to read- Both of you had alot of punches the vocab was on...heres how I broke it down..
Flow- Consistent verse, flowed well, decent punches- Nothing to stellar but because of overall quality I'll give it an 7.75 outta 10 SpuL- Again this verse was consistent for the most part- The flow got choppy in a couple spots but moved nicely through the verse. I think youre punchlines were a little more personal and hit with more of an edge so Ima give you the narrow win by Givin this verse an 8.00 outta 10. Return the Favor plz: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124241 |
wheeeww nice shit yall nice shit nice punches nice vocan nice word usage nice personals came hungry emcees likes dat
Flow-nice drop homie came wit some real illmatic type shit punches were connected da majority of da time persoals came along da way and name speak 4 it self bestline-all ur punches "far in distance" i see why this won't be a "close-bout"// this kids' wack in text..only think vet about him is his fuckin post-count// ^^^ niceee worsteline-none really structure was a lil off doe overall-verse gets a 8.5/10 spul-nice ish started off kinda slow but picked it up wit linez dat made me go damn creatvity was a factor in yo verse u used it 2 yo adavantage nice punches and personals and good floww bestline-Unlike what it states in yo title… you ain’t a Multi Master You wouldn’t be Phat wit a Mic, even if your initial name was Disaster nice worsteline-none next time better start doe overall yo verse gets a 8.7/10 using creativity nice winner-spul |
^yea, thanks for votin', but you need 100+ posts to vote.
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aiight, thanks for votin' Choppa. Uppin' for more votes. 2-1 me.
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c'mon, people. Don't sleep on this. Uppin'
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