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[PeeP]:::ILL VERSE:::[Rate]
Aight, Here Go A Lil Verse. Peep It, And Give Some Feedback...
Listen, I Remember Back In the Day When I Was Sharp-And-Nice Before The Scars-And-Fights... And On The Darkest-Nights I Was In My Glory Strapped Under Them Apartment-Lights... I Been On Trains, Cars-And-Bikes And Seen The Inside Of Dumpsters, Drawers-And-Pipes... Of Course I've Tasted-Flesh And Sent Plenty To The Gates-Of-Death Without Any Wasted-Breath... Man, I Spent Months Stuck In Basements-Wet When I'm The Mu'fucka Who Creates-Respect... It's Me Who's Bold-And-Ruthless, But These Days Everyone Sleepin And Tryin To Own-The-New-Shit... What Am I Now? Old-And-Useless, Fuck All Yall Doubters Leave Me Alone-And-Use-Fists... I Was Told-I-Aint-Choose-This So I Roam-Wit-To-Clips, And If Ya Think I'll Fold-I-Got-News-Bitch... The Kid Still Accurate And Able-To-Aim, Wit Me A Cat Could Take Over And Strangle-The-Game... I Aint Never Scared I'll Mangle-A-Gang And Bang-Up-Them-Thangz, In Fact I'm Labeled-Insane... But Still I'm Real-And-True, Tell Me Though, How Would You Feel If Some Two Bit Hustler Was Dealin-You... And People Only Use Ya For A Meal-Or-Two, And Then Ya Get Thrown In A Sewer, What The Fuck! I Got Feelins-Too... Leave Ya Thoughts... |
It's Me Who's Bold-And-Ruthless, But These Days Everyone Sleepin And Tryin To Own-The-New-Shit...
What Am I Now? Old-And-Useless, Fuck All Yall Doubters Leave Me Alone-And-Use-Fists... fire! |
ncie oen ur good my friend good flo good words using dis to reflect a truth
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that was some hot stuff man keep doin your thang!
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On the real, it's aight. I just wanna know what beat this shit is on...
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Thanx For The Feedback Yall, I Appreciate It...
@EVER I Aint Spit It To A Beat Yet, It's Just Some Shit I Wrote... Keep The Feedback Comin... |
nyce flow...nyce wordplay...nyce concept very ill....multis....everything was on point stay up
got return the favor 1 pa |
Yeah, hot shit dawg. Feelin it all dat way.
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Good Lookin...
Uppin... |
sik shit dawg sik shit
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hot shyt dawg...fiya all around
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Good Lookin Out On The Feedback Yall...
Keep It Comin... |
was alright but stop using -'s and bold
it will help, and is better then ur current structure, nice lines tho. keep itup just stop using those gay ass -s and bolding it. |
^^Fuckk all dat shit Action... It's good to have dat shit for da simple minded muthafuckkaz won't notice da punches, multis, and w/p shit unless u make it obvious for em... There are lil 12, 13, 14 yr old kids voting on battles and readin these verses ya know.
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^^Word, That's The Only Reason I Do It... Cuz If You Don't Somehow Put Emphasis On Certain Words Mufuckas Aint Gon Get It.
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