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Raphael 05-18-04 02:18 PM

Lyrical havok vs fine mind
 
house rules
5-10 lines max...blind spit 20 min after check in..

Raphael 05-18-04 02:19 PM

check in so time begins

lyrical distruction 05-18-04 03:20 PM

lyrical-havvock is complete mes-ness, need to bring the hoper a new lesson/
that's getting your ass wasted, like putting you down 10 feet under/
cane your ass walkin even when your sleepin, wipe that smile away/
tearing scars in your face,someone needs stitches plz mess up the pocedure/
make his face stitched fucked up with a long face, like a shoe lace/
im bringin you down make sure your comin wid me, stick a blade in the back/
of your bladder if you diss me, i'll twist it inside you, make you sicken up/
your a fuckin pussy a wackass rapper, never gonna make it, like im here/
to watch it, as a show, i'l sit back and enjoy dis, thinkin it's a comedy show/
i can clearly see you haven't made any wins, be a quitter cuz ur just bitter/
like a bottle full of guiness, not fresh but rottern, the lyrics drown u in sorrow

Raphael 05-18-04 04:06 PM

first off...you got some fake shit

Quote:
Originally Posted by fine mind
can clearly see you haven't made any wins, be a quitter cuz ur just bitter


anyways....

Welcome to America

Im like a boxer, I stick and move while throwing punches wit my tools//
Leave FM more scratched than records used by turntable crews//
I serve fine mind like doctors when reading off the medical roster//
I spit harsh lyrics to leave ur backbone diseased to adjust ur posture//
This kid raps on the streets for petty cash and some kind of respect//hes unemployed
He from London bridge, go meet m-section, he gots the same accent//
After this loss, yourll be askin fo more like oliver twist//
Got you stuck in my rhyme similar to jews with schindlers list//

Cheerio!!

Raphael 05-18-04 04:22 PM

uppin 4 votes

boaty 05-18-04 04:44 PM

Well, to be honest both yalls flows was kinda lacking but yall made up for it in other areas. Fine mind had more oof a vocab, but didnt really bring it together in the flow. Havok had real good punches so I think thats where he got you.

Vote goes to Havok

lyrical distruction 05-18-04 04:52 PM

you fucking gay, i beat him easerly. His raps were dumb. Boaty fuck your gay ass avatar.

boaty 05-18-04 04:55 PM

You can think of a better way to up for votes. Shit ass bitch, just because you cant rhyme doesnt mean you gotta get all bitchy and start beef

DaCROZofHB 05-18-04 05:06 PM

fine mind u had no flow and ur punchlines were shitty...dont diss boaty cuz ur terrible

havok good punchlines, just work da flow better

vote-havok

Raphael 05-18-04 05:08 PM

before you start another battle learn some fuckin american english!!!

Quote:
Originally Posted by fine mind
you fucking gay, i beat him easerly
haha easerly!!!!haha

boaty 05-18-04 05:10 PM

ey havok, nice spit man. And yeah, I dont know wtf his problem is but youve got some stuff to work, just keep it up. And even though Fine Mind has some fuckin problem with me, he still did pretty good too even though hes got some stuff to work on as well. Aight, Im out

Do me a favor and hit up my battle

BigTony.Self 05-18-04 05:17 PM

yo lookin for some votes all finemind vs tonyself holla.................

lyrical distruction 05-24-04 01:14 PM

uppin for votes here, need a 2 votes to make a tie.

anxiety 05-24-04 02:08 PM

Havok wins...

Sik Wit It 05-30-04 03:16 PM

HavoK
Flow 6/10
Rhymes 7/10
Structure 7/10
Punches 6/10
Humor 6/10

Find
Flow 6/10
Rhymes 6/10
Structure 6/10
Punches 6/10
Humor 6/10

my vote goes to HaVoK

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