.::Re$tricted Vs. King Solo::.(Topical)
 

Is This Bitch Ever Going To Check The Fuck In??

He Calls Out Anybody and Then Doesnt' Check??

LMAO FUCKING HERB!!

~R~

Here's my spit
in case some ppl don't get it
it is bout a guy who becomes an accomplice to murder and then he can't decide whether to tell the truth or not - TROUBLED MIND

I’m just your average guy, I have always took life as it comes
But then my world was rocked like a used up set of drums
The new guy on the block arrived moving into the street next door
Then that night we hooked up right outside the liquor store
He showed me he was packing heat so I kinda realised the score
Next thing I know shots were fired and a mans dead on the floor
Now there’s a police inquiry and my whole life has turned to hell
I mean I want to help them out but I swore that I wouldn’t tell
And the worst thing of all is that my father is working the case
If he found out I was an accomplice I’d be just a big disgrace
I mean this guy really trusts me and that trust I don’t wanna abuse it
But if I don’t tell someone I’m certain that I’m gonna lose it
Now my dad is giving me strange looks and I keep thinking that he knows
He stopped me the other day wanting to talk seriously and I just froze
I was ready to let it all out and you know, just flat out confess
When my dad said they caught the guy and the arrest was a success
I thought they had my friend in custody; turns out they got the wrong guy
And my friend just says “Forget it man we got off, let’s just let him fry.”
But that is not the kind of person I am, I can not be forced to live a lie
So it looks like my friends going down for murder and me as his ally.

i'm done playa
get ure spit down

Uppin On This Tight Ass Topical Battle!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

lol i cant vote but i if i could i would vote king

*Swaying?* Must Be One Of Kingz D/R...

Look At His Rapperz Name...LoL..

Go Away You Fucking Herb..

~R~

im not one of king d/r i felt his spit was hotter then urs....bitch

i thought kings was alot better, better story, structure and flow. It was tight.
restricted's shit was hot also, but i didnt feel it AS much. u know
flow: king
structur: king
creativity: restricted ( fo sho )
flow: King

vote king

yea dis was a nice topical both had diffrent stylez of doin it but i was feelin both

king-nice drop stayed on ur topic nice story nice flow vocab was off but yo shit stayed consistant thru out the verse

bestline-u had alot but dis 1 stands

I thought they had my friend in custody; turns out they got the wrong guy
And my friend just says “Forget it man we got off, let’s just let him fry.”

nicee

worsteline-none juss vocab lacked but good enuff

~R~rated-nice drop vocab was excellent stayed on topic flow was thumbs up consistant flow

bestline-My Arms Transform Into Crucifix's With Sacred Subscriptures..
The Oppresion, I Was The Cause Of Everything In Those Pictures..


nice

worsteline-none eirthing on point

r rated-overall verse gets a 9.1/10
king-overall verse gets a 8.9/10

winner-re$tricted

Wow, both of y'all need to take a bow. Well, storyline, definately owned by King, very original, thought the wordplay was much simpler than Restricted's however, his flow was better too. Everything else was about equal. But your storyline killed it, so don't be ashamed, both of y'all did real good. Actually, after I read King's, I figured he won, but ~R~ came wit some really good wordplay, just really enjoyed both of them, but his a lil' more. Tight battle, niggaz need to stop sleepin' on this one.

Vote/ Restricted

creativity r
flow tie both were good
structure tie both could use alittle work
ok im gonna give it 2 r his story vocab and flow was better good verses from both

aight playaz
keep these votes comin
tight battle Re$TricTed

and yo whitey man, quit followin me around
dude chasin me like a rabbit...i must have carrots up my ass

I’m just your average guy, I have always took life as it comes
But then my world was rocked like a used up set of drums
The new guy on the block arrived moving into the street next door
Then that night we hooked up right outside the liquor store

^^ good story telling so far

I See Shadows That Scream and Move When My Eyes Are Closed..
Problems That Are Undefined, Not Even My Psychotrist Knows..
My Brain Waves Shift In A Zig-Zagged Directional Form..
Since I Was Born My Reality Has Been Torn In A Devilish Core..

^^ Nice descriptive imagery...

I see this is a battle between Story telling (King) and Imagery (Res)

hmm...let's see who'll win


I thought they had my friend in custody; turns out they got the wrong guy
And my friend just says “Forget it man we got off, let’s just let him fry.”
But that is not the kind of person I am, I can not be forced to live a lie
So it looks like my friends going down for murder and me as his ally.

^^ nice lyrics in terms of abstract imagery...good story telling


The Demons Were Released Cause Satan Thought I Was Beyond Mental..
Knew From My Sins God Would No More Towards Me Be Sentimental..
For My Sins I Was Paralized From The Hip Down and Turned Blind..
So Now These Pills Will Have To Help Me Control My Troubled Mind..

^^ once again...very nice imagery

DAMN...this is tough..it's hard to vote because both are excellent in their own rite


hmm

Flow RES
RHyming Tie
Vocab Res
Lyrics Tie

So i have to go with RES.


1...premium on imagery and he took it there