spiky2k8 vs FallingAngel2k4 THE REMATCH
 

10-15 lines
No crew or hate votes
u spit first
due in the next 20 minutes

after check in

aight nigga this aint a officail battle
aight
peace out

so u back huh the class trip was fun hahahahahaahahahahahahahahahahaahahha this is gona be a gay battle and we done switching classes

my bad this is official
well check in

aight win is the verses do

we have to come on time

because no uniform right

it was due in 20 minutes but torrow at 7pm ct time

aight dawg i'm fin to hit u like a wardhog then chop
u up like a hotdog/
i'm playn wit u nigga so right now i'm pulling tha trigger
so i can kill ya/
i dont really rap good against u cause i'm using like
tool and then leaving drowning in a pool/
i know yo raps aint cool so u need to go back to skool
or keep yo cool/
man u steal verses out of peoples raps cause u bout as
weak as this nigga named ralf from the Simpsons/
i bet u confused and surprized cause i just beat u with
my eyes tide or another meaning for eyes closed/
its not my fault u got caught with taughts which were
masterbasting and rapeing while the yo mom was taping/
why cant u come up with yo own rhymes instead bribing
with 2 dimes just to rent a rhyme/
is this mbassrassing or am i'm not caring cause yo ass was
just daring /
well i'm done heating yo ass so hit tha streets yo ass grass/

go nigga yo turn now aight
be waiting for yo rhymes nigga
dont bit my shit

uppin 4 vote !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
aight vote fo me

what this kid remindz me of is a motherfucking newbie/
my words will desintergrate and destory so go ahead and ty to be me newbie/
you fear me more then the Wrestler fear the undertaker so this is your factor of fear/
chokin when you see my name i guess fear is a factor/
going aganist me is like askin for a killin/
I will kill you worst then the American killing the iraqs/
i would go hard but i think its not right/
to kill someone who's linez just don't sound right/
this is my damn spit time to go/
i think i hear your mother calling you u better go/

start voting people aight !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
cool peace

loookingggggg for votes yall

WHACK BATTLE ALERT!!!!!!
Spiky ya had a weak verse with crazy wack punches. Flow was ok asnd structure was ok. Y acould have used at least ONE FUCKING PERRSONNAL

ANgel you r a retard or you didn't try at all. YOu didn't rhyme, and when you did, it was the same wordz. WACK ASSED CRACKA!!!

Thats all constukitive critcism. ELevate liek fuck

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