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C.March 06-06-04 06:25 PM

-White Powder(II) vs. Premanition(AI)-
 
Crew Battle

10 Lines Max

No Crew Votes
No Hate
No Dickriding
No Biting
No Recycling
No Feeding

Best Man Wins..

-I forgot to set up a poll on the last battle...-

Black Haze 06-06-04 08:42 PM

ya niggaz need to hurry up n battle already na mean

C.March 06-06-04 11:13 PM

Aight i forgot..once you check in .. its i say bout 30 mins to drop i guess.. seems reasonable...

anyways ill check in later cause im going to sleep...

DeHotBwoy 06-07-04 01:29 PM

Yo y'all need to hurry up lucky you guys didint make a damn Deadline

Key... 06-07-04 01:51 PM

Blah!! Prem send em a pm. If he dont reply. I will put someone else in his place.

Premanition 06-07-04 03:17 PM

blah................check didnt see this shit.............

C.March 06-07-04 03:51 PM

This kids death is premature, steppin to me is like cancer there’s no cure //
Ya skill level is obscure, fuckin kid’s rhymes are all immature //
Yo you know this rappers just a kid cuz he cant spell his name right //
Premanition.. no bitch its premonition your obviously not too bright //
Your rhymes are like midgets playing against shaq.. you have no chance //
Mah rhymes all up in ya head like “techno” leaving you in a “trance” //
You freestlyin is like the Hoover dam…. you lack flow //
I wouldn’t be surprised if this was a no show, cause face it..you blow//
Yo this cat made a song for his girl.. too bad shes a dyke….// **
Fuck punches id have more fun bashing this kids face in with the mic //

* Check his soundclick... song called Change Nothin....

Premanition 06-07-04 04:15 PM

time to merk this bitch....

nothin but a wort on my foot....head start but i caught you up...
powder u ain't nothin, literally...leave me coughin wen i snort you up...
in this battle you a volunteer...but out of place like a lost orienteer...
clear death is near...hold a compass in a graveyard n south appears...
pussy? theres no trace....neva been to 1st base but he talks alot...
whereas Prem layed a shy girl with the top back in a parking lot....(lol)
punch wiv tight gloves n still no tension...but atleast the right 'intention'....(crew)
my grandad was a bum n still makes more than u on his old age pension....
fuck you 'white' ur mine....grit ur teeth while a break ur spine...
cos powder....trippin yourself up is the only time u drop a 'line'....(cocaine)


uppin this shit

DeLeon 06-07-04 04:23 PM

alright this was an alright battle
white powder- nice opener...hott closer
nice flow...hit with some nice personals and punches..overall
flow was nice..
best line=Yo this cat made a song for his girl.. too bad shes a dyke….// **
Fuck punches id have more fun bashing this kids face in with the mic //

Prem=nice flow but it lacked hard hittin puches and personals...
opener and closer were alright but your punches didnt hit as hard as powders
i think if you work on that you can get alot better
best line=punch wiv tight gloves n still no tension...but atleast the right 'intention'....(crew)
my grandad was a bum n still makes more than u on his old age pension....


vote=white powder

DeLeon 06-07-04 04:24 PM

drop an honest vote on this here

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128606

Premanition 06-07-04 04:33 PM

best line=Yo this cat made a song for his girl.. too bad shes a dyke….// **
Fuck punches id have more fun bashing this kids face in with the mic //

^^^best line....fuck it was played!!! well respect ya vote, nice verse powder...

uppin

kEtCh~22 06-07-04 04:42 PM

Yo you know this rappers just a kid cuz he cant spell his name right //
Premanition.. no bitch its premonition your obviously not too bright

damn hot personal....just an example i think white powder came lil harder all around..nice battle...~1~

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Big Gaz 06-07-04 04:51 PM

i vote white powder. his verse had better punches and personals, that shit bout spelling name wrong was dope. both verse were good tho, the battle was fun to read.

L.E 06-07-04 04:53 PM

Tite battle both of you...good luck wit tha votez.

SpokenBluntly 06-07-04 04:55 PM

Multies:Powder
Punches:Tie
WordPlay:Powder
Entertaining:Poweder

I vote powder simply his verse was well put 2gether his strucutre and better punches took it

SB

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