blackwell vs loose canon
 

10 to 12 lines max
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gl, should be good

ight since u called me out black go ahead & spit 1st so i can respond bacc 2 it asap ight holla bacc when u get diz so we can battle & it will let me wazzup wit u & if u really wanna battle or not hurry up shit

ya ni99az need to hurry up n battle... dis lookz like a good battle tho iight fellaz ~!1!~

i know y it'z taking u so long 2 send a response cuz u know battling against me will b like taking a tote on da blunt u'll choke
i really don't have a problem wit shit diz eazy note afta note
is dat a snake in ur hand or u just holdin on 2 anotha nigga'z dicc
now i know y in all ur battles u always gettin clowned u'll fucc round & make me beat u wit a sticc
ur just a hoe 2 evabody on here & i'm not da only 1 who has done da pimpin
fake azz bitch people in ur own hood don't have 2 jacc u cuz ur use 2 trickin
neva battle me eva again 2 try 2 gain sum recognition from da people on rb
cuz u wanna b like me but i wouldn't kick it wit u even if u paid me a fee
i'm a muthafuccin g dat like 2 start shit wit othaz & finish da situation off properly
so if u don't want anotha lyrical azz whipping don't step ur feet on my property bitch

LOL loose cannon??.. stfu coz i be spittin cannonballs into ya loose "pussy"//
tellin me that u gun "murk me", lol look at ya structure u stupid fukin "rookie"//
ya invisible punches dun "hurt me", like speedin waterfalls im gun be ya "downfall"//
bitch u litteraly hit "rock" bottom" n like loose bunjees u aint comin up "again"//
ya styles off n i mean fukin "rotton" so theres no point ya never gun get "revenge"//
ya new lol ya just like soft "cotton" ya aint a gangster but u could always "pretend"//
u gunna have lost before the votes even "uppin" on this site on this 1-way "thread"//
im catapultin more words n i keep on "chuckin" so just act like saddam n play "dead"//
ya vocabs is bad, n ya reputations "repulsive" like a fat ass bitch of 88 "stone"//
ya shits definately "malted" n i can merk in real or would u prefer it over the "phone"//

ite lol i typed the lines to long, they supposed to be like the 1st 2 lines, nm well uppin votes............................................. ..........

uppin votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

my nigga LC smash dat bitch dey call blackwell u know

ight lookin at dis battle i'd say blackwell wins. hes punches where hearder and hes structure was better and so was hes flow.

i voting 4 my nigga LC cuz his verse was betta overall den pussy blackwell

my vote blackwell

punchlines=blackwell

structure=blackwell

jus all da way blackwell hot shit cuz

da great1 ya vote dun count ya lil pussy, 1st u cant explain it, and secondly its obvious u n lc r lil bum buddies so get tha fuk outta here!!

Loose Canon-Your rhymes was ok I guess, but your structure was way off. I got lost like 5 times. You started out with good punchlines but never really followed through, cause u would change subjects in the middle of a bar. Overall yo rap was below average. Keep at it.

Blackwell- Your structure was real nice. The first line caught me right off the bat that was tight. Loose Canon.........Loose Pussy. Your whole flow not genius, but plenty to beat Loose Canon.
VOTE: Blackwell

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look bitch da only pussy dat is loose on here is urs & ur mama ight so i would shut da fucc up & watch wut i say

i looked ova da battle between u 2 & lc u got 2 work on ur flow delivery sum mo & blackwell u had a couple of hardhittaz u spit at lc but my vote goes 2 LC 4 da simple fact he used different analogies 2 prove his case or point u didn't