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-   -   V.i.p. Vs Lil Aj (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=129105)

V.I.P.. 06-10-04 04:11 PM

V.i.p. Vs Lil Aj
 
this guy really is a fuckin chump/
he a man wit out rhymes like a pimple wit out a bump/
this guy sucks alot of ~dicks then gets beat to tha ground/
this is channel ~six reportin lil aj is tha biggest cocksucka around/
take these rhymes in ~consideration before i blast/
u in my ~fedaration fuck it take these rhymes and shove em up your ass/
i'm rippin your heart out ya chest/your vest i'm stripin these words i'm flippin/

Lil A.J. 06-10-04 04:16 PM

Your act is so damn wack
I get a kick outta seein some wack ass rhymes
10 people showed up that's why ur show got cancelled
I make rap cats disappear like this gay ass fag
In case this mother fucker wanna jump bad now
Start some bullshit and imma lay ur punk ass down

Lil A.J. 06-10-04 04:29 PM

hey yo u didn't set this shit up right, set it up again

V.I.P.. 06-10-04 05:53 PM

uppin for votes

For$akeN 06-10-04 05:55 PM

look dawg you forgot to make the most important thing in this battle............................................ ..........A POLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

V.I.P.. 06-10-04 05:57 PM

how do i do it again

V.I.P.. 06-10-04 05:58 PM

Aight Come Vote

V.I.P.. 06-10-04 08:22 PM

aight cmon and vote

V.I.P.. 06-11-04 01:34 AM

aight yall uppin for votes it would be apreciated i'll return tha favor

V.I.P.. 06-11-04 03:24 AM

uppin for votes yall they would be apreciated aight

V.I.P.. 06-11-04 02:35 PM

aight uppin for votes yall tha favor will be returned

Big Kountry 06-11-04 02:42 PM

you to are stupid this is a poll not a battle go fuck yourselfs

GKillaz05 06-11-04 02:45 PM

V.I.P - iight spit man, you had a couple good lines in there and your flow was on target.

Best Line - this guy sucks alot of ~dicks then gets beat to tha ground/
this is channel ~six reportin lil aj is tha biggest cocksucka around/

Worst Line - i'm rippin your heart out ya chest/your vest i'm stripin these words i'm flippin/ (WEAK)

Lil AJ - You need some work man, your punches wernt all that good and you didnt flow very well either.

Best Line - NONE

Worst Line - Your act is so damn wack
I get a kick outta seein some wack ass rhymes
10 people showed up that's why ur show got cancelled
I make rap cats disappear like this gay ass fag
In case this mother fucker wanna jump bad now
Start some bullshit and imma lay ur punk ass down

OVERALL - Overall was a weak battle here, but I will have to give this battle to V.I.P. he just came harder in this battle. AJ your shit didnt ryhme all that well, and your flow was off.. and you didnt have multi's or a good flow or really anything. Work on some of that shit and improve.

VOTE - V.I.P.

RETURN THE FAV
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=126322

V.I.P.. 06-13-04 10:34 PM

aight uppin for votes

etcetera 06-13-04 10:37 PM

i vote for v.i.p because of flow and especially the punchlines. i was feeling the punchlines they hit hard and they were personal. so my vote goes to v.i.p.
return the favor
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129561


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