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mixtape vs gotta...need that 200 to vote
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my man aint even drop, fuck it, save this for tomorrow, i gotta go to sleep.......
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No need to use tactics to match wits with a half shit already past bitch…
And rip your palms like Sunday's before easter to Catholics… In less than one hour slice the tounge of this coward… Who's more at the bottom of the barrel than gunpowder… Tossed bitch, clawed god with bomb hits… Your good?(7-8) Thats more far fetched that throwing dog bones off cliffs… Blastin with light…, The only way you'd keep on ticking after a beating is sticking a bomb in you after the fight… Spit until I hit with the force to break and contort ya ribs… Take back your lies, in this battle I cause kids to defib… Forced speed make pores bleed… Your style is missing alot like chicks who can't make up minds and keep divorcing… Soak you in gas while I pass a match past your body, blown up at last… Kids think im having a party the way im throwing a bash… Hurtin this kid who went from first to last in a flash, one thing im certain… I'm strong enough to stop light, so you better be calling it curtains… Drop your verse manye...... |
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u may be on a roll on this board, but u cant stop me/
ur a mixtape to me, a bootleg copy/ fuck typin, i might as well knock ya ass out/ u were rookie NOMINEE, but like brandy said...almost doesnt count/ ur not even a good cd to me...ur a frisbee object/ and buildin public housin in bk is the only time ull work on a project/(a cd) is it jus me/or can it be// that canibus had to go on the net, to get noticed as a real emcee//(his rhymin style) im on a whole nother level, u trailin behind// u mightv been born in brooklyn, but raised on gottas lines// and when it comes to decisions, this wasnt ur best/ he even slept on it, deciding whether not to try his best at death/ fuck half-assin the shyt im comin right at u/ u aint gully, the realest shyt u ever done, was pickin this battle/ all these metaphors and killin me shyt...it really means nuttin/ when i hang u over the empire state buildin..ull really be stuntin/ this pretty much/ sums it up,// ur overdue trash and doodoo// talkin bout my 7-8 record, i still got more wins than u do/ so this old ass mixtape need to go back in the crates/ while i show my new record about how this kid got 8(this is would be my 8th win) |
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Mixtape's Drop:
No need to use tactics to match wits with a half shit already past bitch… And rip your palms like Sunday's before easter to Catholics… IT WAS A AIGHT OPENER TO ME NOT THAT SPECIAL BUT GOOD 7.5/10 In less than one hour slice the tounge of this coward… Who's more at the bottom of the barrel than gunpowder… NOT FEELING THAT MUCH BUT ITS DECENT TO ME 7/10 Tossed bitch, clawed god with bomb hits… Your good?(7-8) Thats more far fetched that throwing dog bones off cliffs… YO THAT WAS NICE GOOD WORDPLAY OVERALL GOOD PUNCH BUT FLOW WAS OFF A LIL 8.5/10 Blastin with light…, The only way you'd keep on ticking after a beating is sticking a bomb in you after the fight… COOL BUT FLOW OFF A LIL AGAIN BUT PUNCH WAS NICE 7.5/10 Spit until I hit with the force to break and contort ya ribs… Take back your lies, in this battle I cause kids to defib… GOOD BUT NOT THE IN THE DROP 6.5/10 Forced speed make pores bleed… Your style is missing alot like chicks who can't make up minds and keep divorcing… NOT THE GREATEST BUT A AIGHT PUNCH 7/10 Soak you in gas while I pass a match past your body, blown up at last… Kids think im having a party the way im throwing a bash… OK THIS WAS NOT A GOOD PUNCH FILLER PERHAPS??? OH WELL 6/10 Hurtin this kid who went from first to last in a flash, one thing im certain… I'm strong enough to stop light, so you better be calling it curtains… OK NICE PUNCH TO CLOSE IT UP 8/10 OVERALL: 7.5/10 Gottaasswhoopin4u's drop: u may be on a roll on this board, but u cant stop me/ ur a mixtape to me, a bootleg copy/ GOOD OPENER IN MY OPINION BUT NOT HITTING HARD NUFF 7/10 fuck typin, i might as well knock ya ass out/ u were rookie NOMINEE, but like brandy said...almost doesnt count/ I NOMINATED HIM ALSO AND PRETTY SHURE HE'S GONNA WIN....WELL IT WAS A PERSONAL BUT NOT THE GREATEST....6.5/10 ur not even a good cd to me...ur a frisbee object/ and buildin public housin in bk is the only time ull work on a project/ WOW NOT GOOD WORST PUNCH YET FILLER 6/10 is it jus me/or can it be// that canibus had to go on the net, to get noticed as a real emcee//( WOW UMM FLOW OFF A LIL COUNT NOT WELL DID NOT A GOOD PUNCH THO 6/10 im on a whole nother level, u trailin behind// u mightv been born in brooklyn, but raised on gottas lines// NOPE THAT WAS A LIL BIT OF A SELF-GLORIFICATION LINE 7/10 and when it comes to decisions, this wasnt ur best/ he even slept on it, deciding whether not to try his best at death/ UMMM NOT WELL DONE BUT AIGHT 6.5/10 fuck half-assin the shyt im comin right at u/ u aint gully, the realest shyt u ever done, was pickin this battle/ WEAK AGAIN FILLER AGAIN NOT GOOD AGAIN 6/10 all these metaphors and killin me shyt...it really means nuttin/ when i hang u over the empire state buildin..ull really be stuntin/ THIS WAS AIGHT PUNCH BETTER THAN MOST OF YOUR OTHERS IN HERE 7.5/10 this pretty much/ sums it up,// ur overdue trash and doodoo// talkin bout my 7-8 record, i still got more wins than u do/ DOODOO???? ONE WORD NEVER TO SAY IN A BATTLE WEIRD.... 6.5/10 so this old ass mixtape need to go back in the crates/ while i show my new record about how this kid got 8 OK PUNCH TO END THIS 7.5/10 ITS AIGHT OVERALL: 6.6/10 VOTE GOES TO: MIXTAPE had a overall better drop |
mixtape: you had a good verse and i was feelin all the multies but your structure made you lose alot of points....your punches was hott and u only used a personal about his record which hurts a lil bit...i expected more from you...ya rhyme wasnt consistent..and your metas and multies and wordplay was the hottest thing in your verse...if your structure was better i would have gave you an 8 but the structure messed you up
overall : 6.8/10 gotta...your structure wasnt too good either but it was better than mixtapes...i think u came hard enough to win this battle and some of your punches was really hott...others were played/boring/ or just weak...elevate on throwin harder punches this was a close one and u could have lost if u didnt throw some good punches luckily u did...and u had only 1 personal too about your wins bein more than his...blah blah blah... overall: 7/10 vote: gotta ~!1!~ RTF links in sig thx |
aight this was a tight battle... i liked both but imma have to go with mixtape on this one for a couple of reasons... the first one being the fact that his structure was a lot better than asswhoopin pluss ass went over by 1 line if i counted right... both of you came really hard the punches and personals but mix hit harder on those.. overall a decent battle yall but this one goes to mix
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i duno how u can vote for mix but theyre opinions. aight heres wat i saw.asswhoopin nutin but personals and solid punches.a high quality verse.ur rhymes were raw they jus hit the target every time. ur structure was good too it was set up so u had ur setup then the punch and sometimes jus 2 punches. mixtape it all sounded like prewrites and u squeezed in his record to make a personal this wasnt ur best ive seen u do a lot better ur good but this wasnt. ur structure needed work and so did the flow. some punches didnt make sense so ima vote for asswhoopin
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