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BIGPAPPA76 06-19-04 09:17 AM

BIGPAPPA76 vs. DeLEON
 
aight here we go

10-20 lines max

no DR
no Crew votes
no hate votes
no bullshit

EXPLAIN YOUR VOTES PEOPLE!!!!!!

verse is due at 1pm eastern time on monday :thefinger

goodluck hommie :shoot:

BIGPAPPA76 06-19-04 09:18 AM

ayo even tho the verse aint due til monday imma drop mine soon just for the fuck of it.

BIGPAPPA76 06-19-04 09:38 AM

aight check dis shit...

BIGPAPPA on da text so take a step back while i drop some ill shit/
rookie of da month picked da wrong motha fucka to fuck wit/
ill bust yo' ass like a dragon gettin slayn by a knight/
betta run fo some cover when im spittin these rhymes tight../
DeLEON tha true Rookie of da month thinkin he gonna come in and hate on PAPPA/
well i got some news fo you motha fucka cause im tha real show stoppa!!/
come at me hard rookie and spit that little kiddy verse/
step on up cause soon you'l be in a body bag and stuffed inside a hearse/

DeLEON aint got shit to say... lil bitch wanted this shit so he could spit in 3 days.../
motha fucka to scared to spit now? maybe a little to fucked up wit yo' mind in a purpple haze/
after im through with his ass this dude's gonna wish his ass was high/
its almost over now son so go a head and let out that deep sigh/
Tha rookie goin around slayin niggas like he be a hun named attilla/
not this time so fuck you faggot im THE REAL LYRICAL RHYME KILLA.../
Nothin can stop me from layin you down and you out for the count.../
always rememba bitch that BIGPAPPA was the one to KNOCK YOU THA FUCK OUT!/


BIGPAPPA76

you gonna take 2 days to spit...?

DeLeon 06-19-04 10:10 AM

ha ha ha.....i'll drop before 1pm monday but its gonna be on monday
like i said kid....i got plans this weekend

BIGPAPPA76 06-19-04 12:09 PM

lol whatever you say cheif... whatever you say....

BIGPAPPA76 06-19-04 12:10 PM

i see your online son... cant have 2 many "plans".... you posted 2 hours ago... plenty of time to drop a verse... but whateva

DeLeon 06-21-04 11:43 AM

He knew I’d win...so walk with caution before u approach this....
During comedy’s show and tell, im takin u as a joke bitch....
when DeLeon bombards the strip you better keep your guard and split
cuz you only spitten fire.....if i burn ya quick like an arsonist
so honor-this chance battlin me you can’t put up a fight you’ll be losing
Pappa was hot before,but he couldn’t be a fresh-man again at his high-school-reunion
Kid sucks, wack, old, and played but something had to give....
If it wasn’t for your presence, we wouldnt have those adjectives....

DeLeon 06-21-04 11:47 AM

ReaL Verse

ha ha ha.....wack kid
dont got to come hard at all

aight listen

This is like practice before the big game im just walkin thru this kid....
He's simplistic, only time he talks about Semi's is in math class referrin to Radius....
He knew I’d win...so walk with caution before u approach this....
During comedy’s show and tell, im takin u as a joke bitch....
when DeLeon bombards the strip you better keep your guard and split
cuz you only spitten fire.....if i burn ya quick like an arsonist
so honor-this chance battlin me you can’t put up a fight you’ll be losing
Pappa was hot before,but he couldn’t be a fresh-man again at his high-school-reunion
Kid sucks, wack, old, and played but something had to give....
If it wasn’t for your presence, we wouldnt have those adjectives....
So go on with ya lonely life, Lover’s Lane by yourself in ya jalopy....
Cause women ain’t like old computers, they won’t accept a 3.5 inch floppy....
Been raped in text, bitchslapped now get the fuck off the floor....
Get kicked to the curve aint like u never been there before....

Gods son 06-21-04 12:15 PM

aight good battle both of you..

flows were equal and great..multis and metas the same..i really dont know who to pick it cam down to the punches this was my fav line from Big poppa ...Nothin can stop me from layin you down and you out for the count.../
always rememba bitch that BIGPAPPA was the one to KNOCK YOU THA FUCK OUT!/

And then my fav line from Deleon..was
So go on with ya lonely life, Lover’s Lane by yourself in ya jalopy....
Cause women ain’t like old computers, they won’t accept a 3.5 inch floppy....

Again it was very close but i'm gonna have to go with...Big poppa

BIGPAPPA76 06-21-04 01:52 PM

ayo nice drop DeLEON... uppin dis shit.................

L.E 06-21-04 01:57 PM

Hahaa..............Deleon didnt even have to try....and he woulda won this wit his first verse. Big Poppa...its not that you came horrible...its that you ain' even close to DeLeon's standards. Punches, flow, goes to DeLeon...personals and vocab too. Structure goes to Big Poppa. No hate...its just that DeLeon is just way above Poppa's class...

Vote- DeLeon

DaCROZofHB 06-21-04 02:19 PM

big pappa spit good shit and spit a real verse...Deleon ur just jokin around sayin u merked him before it even started i dont like that shit...and you spit just an ok verse 1 or 2 lines were decent but thats about it...pappa came harder, step up even if you think you got da win...v=big

DeLeon 06-21-04 02:21 PM

aight W/E kid his verse has more self glorification and shit.....but w/e up

DON 06-21-04 02:46 PM

haha deleon i really liked that floppy disc line that was classic really good. ur flow and strucutre were good until it came to that one vers eu had posted before that was jus hard to read. ur punches were ok so it made the hard ones hit even harder. pappa u need a lota work dont talk about urself in a verse work on complex punches and make your verse have harder punches. work on strucutre and flow shorten ur lines.

v/deleon

e-dubz 06-21-04 03:06 PM

deleon won dis easily..better vocab, harder punches and personal and nice flow..bigpappa elevate and use better vocab ur punches didnt hit hard..nice battle though
v/deleon


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