JyMiNy ::.VS.:: KOOL COL-B
 

Aight you know the rules lets do this check in and then I will spit ok..... LETS DO THIS!!!!

yo muthaphukka, im checkin in beeyotch!!!!!!!!!!!!!! werd

Aight
 

heres my verse, this should win against this half ass faggot, if not I wanna rematch aight here it is......
Fuck you and your bitch ass crew/
Dissin me like you got talent too/

Wanna say them yo momma jokes now?/
Okay, Your moms so fat for roller skates she uses 2 grey hounds/

Why do you think your styles so phat?/
Last I checked you was in a childrens label named "Wakk Trak" explain that/

My sig tells the truth, your nothing but fairres/
Yall holdin picket signs saying "Gays should get married"/

If rap was like sex my rhymes would be a choad, and yours would only be sterol/
Bitch you dont belong in hip-hop your better off singing holiday carols/

Peace im out 1, your number 2 on my list of little pussy faggots who tried to come through/

aight muthaphukka, here it iz:

Fuck Jyminy, comin straight from tha underground/
step in B-H2O, and ima gun ya down/ u best not act like everybody in lancing iz strapped/
u best tah shut tha fuck up and start advancing ya rap/
ya neck iz gonna break, muthaphukka, u got served/
when im sayin u aint straight, i don’t mean that u iz curved/
u lie when u say that u aint nuthin but a artist/
ya wanna fuckin battle me? Let’s fuckin start this/
when i win this, i bet u wont start talkin ish again/
so take ya fuckin shitty rymes, and send em back to michigan/
this iz goin out to Jyminy, aka Inspiratik/
callin me out to battle, that just gon begin tha static/
on my lyrical hit list, yo name iz next/
u so gay that u should type all of yo shit in flaming text/
after everybody votes, yo text record gon b 1 to 1/
ima win, mayn fuck this shit, becuz, sun, im done/

and wut muthaphukka. werd

tha 2nd ryme fucked up, let me try it again

Fuck Jyminy, comin straight from tha underground/
step in B-H2O, and ima gun ya down/
u best not act like everybody in lancing iz strapped/
u best tah shut tha fuck up and start advancing ya rap/
ya neck iz gonna break, muthaphukka, u got served/
when im sayin u aint straight, i don’t mean that u iz curved/
u lie when u say that u aint nuthin but a artist/
ya wanna fuckin battle me? Let’s fuckin start this/
when i win this, i bet u wont start talkin ish again/
so take ya fuckin shitty rymes, and send em back to michigan/
this iz goin out to Jyminy, aka Inspiratik/
callin me out to battle, that just gon begin tha static/
on my lyrical hit list, yo name iz next/
u so gay that u should type all of yo shit in flaming text/
after everybody votes, yo text record gon b 1 to 1/
ima win, mayn fuck this shit, becuz, sun, im done/

uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

JyMiNy
structure was ok...some of ur lines were stretched though...flow fell off because of the varying lengths in ur lines...a few metas...no good wordplay...like 1 of ur punches connected...no good personals...

KOOL COL-B
structure was pretty good...flow was good for the most part...a few metas....no good wordplay...a few of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
neither had good wordplay...kool colb had the better structure...as well as the more stable flow...more metas...and more connecting punches...so basing off of that...kool colb gets my vote...

VOTE - KOOL COL-B

thanx mayn. uppin, werd

aight ima break it down

flow both

punches koolcol b

personal's none

word play none

structure both

kool col b won this cause he came a harder and his punches were hitin harder pc o yeah go drop a vote on my battles pc

i liked these punch lines by JyMiny.....
1}Wanna say them yo momma jokes now?/
Okay, Your moms so fat for roller skates she uses 2 grey hounds/

2}My sig tells the truth, your nothing but fairres/
Yall holdin picket signs saying "Gays should get married"/

best structured flow i liked in this spit by Kool...
1)Fuck Jyminy, comin straight from tha underground/
step in B-H2O, and ima gun ya down/
u best not act like everybody in lancing iz strapped/
u best tah shut tha fuck up and start advancing ya rap/

~VERDICT~
I felt the battle was aight,but kool had a good structure,
and didn't diss as much as jyminy....
So i gave jyminy my vote
because he came at him with puches
an pretty good disses,but good battle to you both 1

JyMiny didn't really have a solid beat flowing.
He had alright rythms, kinda stupid but whatev

KOOL COL-B

Nice flow, and killer rythms.

They were both pretty solid, but I had to say that Kool wins this one.

VOTE - KOOL COL-B

^^ Just sidin wit him cuz yall both in Wakk Trak records but what ever..... UPPIN!!!!!

weak battle


kool: better punches better flow better structure better personals

jymny: good effort jus not good enuff u need to elevate though..EZ

i aint gon poll vote this until u drop an honest vote in this battle http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...d.php?p=1368163

kool took this shit witout a doubt.. weak ass battle though

jyminy u were iight but get some structure and rhyme scheme.. solid punches too--

koo b gets my vote

hit my sig up plzz

Yo it is against the rules to ask to vote so if KOOL asked you to vote please fess up.....