EyeDentdy V.s. bk 2 tha Future
 

U calling me out so here the rules.
2 verses each.
unlimited bars
no D/R votes
all vote gotta be explained,
none of my crew will vote, and U aint got no friends so I aint gotta worry about U.
verse is due about 30 t0 45 min after check in.
and since U had a problem wit showing up in Verbals battle, I expect U to spit first,
feeding is allowed.
Only under deez conditions will a bitch like U ever get Ur groupy ass around a real battle scene.
I aint involving my boys cuz this'll be squashed befor it even getz seriouse. good luck.

ima checkin then i wanna get this over with quick

good cuz I got real niggaz to bruise, Ur just a fish in a pond of victems.

nigga after i blow out ya brains i'll help you find your ''eyedentdy''
your ryhmez are empty like a etheopians stomach, my rymez feed you sparingly
one line of mine shreads tha ryhmez you extort, my elevation keeps you higher than tha crack that you snort,i'll leave your bitch-ass broke like child support
this is ''proof'', that your eyedentdy is nuthin but a spoof
a genetical fuck up, here comes my second verse to shut your dumbass up

your sig is gay sayin thugs love us you forgot to insert in tha butt
your pussy, so if your not gay then you must fuck yourself
battle me is a sin against your self, so beg for forgiveness to save your health
so bitch get off my dick, pass it to your mom so i could share tha wealth

I'll consider that one verse U moron, Ur supposed to spit one verse, than I go, then U go, then I go again U fucking dumb azz.
This is my check for my 1st verse U ass.

His Occupation is "lyricist", that means he's jobless and bankrupt/
at the unemployment office "free"styleing "put them food stamps Up"/
Ur rymes feed me, but not enough to even make me shit/
U got no punchlines nigga, like A boxer with out a fist/
so go back to da past, the futers looking fucked wit U layed out/
the present is depressing, like Micheal Jackson in Ronalds playhouse/
U must be stupid, cant understand the 2verse concept/
why the fuck would U spit 2 verses like that, U on some retarted nonesence/
I droped verses like rocks from skyscrapers/
U aint a dick rider, Uv been branded a dick chaser/
this battle is one sided like the ass whooping that Verbal Violence gave ya/

NNNNOOOOOOWWWWW UUUUU SPPPPPPPIIIIITTTTT UUUUURRRR SSSEEECCCOOONNNNDDD VVVVVEEEEERRRSSSSSEEEEEEEE DDDDDDUUUUUUMMMMMMMBBBBBB AAAAAAAASSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!

aight bitch i'll shred you again

muthfuka hatin on wut it sayz for my occupation wen yours simple doctors patient
if lose my temper you be all over tha canvas like a paintin'
tha present depresses you because every time you bend over to tie your shoe your husbands right behind you
please just leave your computer now and never look back, because your text is for squares like rolley back-packs
and "Gangsters Approved" of stoppin you in ya tracks, my flow will hang in your mind all tha time like ball sacks
nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnooooooooooooooooooowwwwwwww yyyyyyyyyyyoooooooouuuu ssssssssssppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiittttttttttt yyyyyyyyyyyyyooooooooooouuuuuuuuuuuuuurrrrrrrrrrrr rrrr GGGGGGGGGGaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyy sssssssshhhhhhhhhhiiiiiiiittttttttt

that was stupid ass fuck.

ay yo, fuck a ball sack/
My thaoghts are of Ur skull meeting my ball bat/
bring beef nigga, Im like God, totally above all that/
Im a grown ass man battling Newbeez and unattended rugratz/
and if I docter patients, Ur rymes should be emetiatly treated/
I'll eat off Ur plate like Christopher Reeds in a room full of Fetus/
Cut off Ur head like net beef with Afgan Talibans/
U aint back to tha future, U go back to tha trash can/
I've seen more blood in this battle than care to see in a life time/
Dr. EyeDentdy cant keep Ur family from Unplugging U off that life line/
Send flowers to this battle after U niggaz vote/
cuz this nigga bit my ryme style and couldnt help but choke/
I call metaphores into actions like they was listed in phone books/
when U call, the operater says "nah nigga", than gets off the hook/

yo that wuz pretty tight even tho you cant spell
lets get some votes on this shit

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Aight, flo was decent on both but when it came down to it Eyedenty your flo n structure is more wack than a four year old attending a grade 12 provincial...spellin is horrible n didnt even make it wanna read n with lines..:

and if I docter patients, Ur rymes should be emetiatly treated/
I'll eat off Ur plate like Christopher Reeds in a room full of Fetus/...Wtf?
Cut off Ur head like net beef with Afgan Talibans/
U aint back to tha future, U go back to tha trash can/...So Basic

Your lines are stretched n you jus throw on words that dont link, you need to more than elevate you need to "Get" game than "Step" up yo game nigga before you keep gettin merked...wait till next year pick up a thesarus n dictionary gain a vocabulary n learn to spell, n maybe you might contend..

Would props the other cat, but not enough here to give anything up to..

Vote: bk 2 tha future

PS: Eyedentdy to save you the time of startin the beef back cus by your style its obvious you don take critiscm or else you wouldnt have such a horrible style with a big post count along with your start date, you don like the critiscm, than elevate bitch ass nigga....

see thats tha kinda votes we need voters who see this chumps text and think damn this shit is weak
lol
uppin for votes

I see wat he's saying but he kinda did'nt explain why he voted for U and it also could be that he's mad couse I voted against him in a battle that I think was almost an embarrassing K.o. But its kewl thoagh. keep this shit coming, we need more votes.

hahahahah funny shit how future put now spit yur verse in dem letters makin fun of eye ..i donno but yeah i foound that funny hahaha anyways

hands down ...future got this...
better flow
punches
structure
humour
better verse overall
elevate eye wun
v/bk 2 ha future

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valid votes niggaz
uppin

Yo , that shit was Kinda of lOpp sided, first of all LIl trip shit started out ill , but then his punchlines were confusing, and his shit was simple, i like bk's personals shit was funny as fuck , but it was a good battle no DOubt

VOTe.....................Bk

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