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Orijinal -VS- Mag...
iight..this is how we break it down...
10-15 lines... no d/r no crew votes no bitin u know da deall.. lets get this shit poppin.....mag spits first.... |
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ch-ch-ch-check it out......o yeah BTW...u need 75 posts to poll in dis...cuz i hate dem newbies...hate um hate um hate um!!....o yea no prewritten shyt....thank u
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first bar your hung out to dry,like jesus bitch i crucify...
place you in the public eye with raps like that they'd turn a blind eye... i'm shining bright with lyrics thats fluorescent,bitch is dull hire a cosmetic... touch up them lyrics shits pathetic you aint a battler just more poetic... my shits leaving Orijional parasympathetic 'n' dont think i'll be sympathetic... i'll diss 'n' rip ya like a surfer rips tides then up 'n' leave fuck being apologetic.. it's the way my brain ticks that says unload these clips fill em with lead.. so much i could flip this inbred 'n' write my next track with his head... with lyrics so sick i'll leave u malcontent as i beat you with circumvent... thats my intent i torment mc's so much they need there parents consent... like parental guidance as i carry a warning cas i spill blood and guts... so get off my nuts,bitch could'nt be a smash if you was a dish washer klutz... as i upset 'n' leave you like a epeleptic so once u read this you'll throw a fit... cas i straight up beat you "orginal" so write that in your life's diary bitch.... well good luck and peace |
there a reall quick key... cuz im about to leave iight
so good luck..and peace.... |
MAG is battlin newbies so he can get his record up/
Ya game is ass, is like Charlotte Bobcats startin' lineup/ You think you MAGnificent just because you got 10 wins/ Ya rhymes ain't authentic, is like a flower logo on timbs/ Let me put the MAGnum toward ya forehead and cock it back/ U gonna get zero listeners, like William Hung's soundtrack/ U say "the champ is here!", but U meant "the chump is here!"/ Right now, U Toni Braxton N I'm Bobby, I tore Ur whole fuckin career/ Let me knock U out like Tarver did 2 Jones, start da action/ I'll beat U down, U'll have mo' surgeries than Micahel Jackson/ Right now, I'm MAGnificent and gonna take ya whole spot/ My M16s will make covered in spots, than a hoe thru cumshots/ So from now on, dont be cocky thinkin U all bomb/ Cuz son, you nuttin' but a joke like 'Chappelle's Show' sitcom/ Holla back at chea boy..vote people.....ill return the favor....... like MAG...says......"i took it easy on u"...hah...1 |
umm...this line:
"Right now, I'm MAGnificent and gonna take ya whole spot/ My M16s will make covered in spots, than a hoe thru cumshots/" i forgot the you between 'will' and 'make' and if you dont get it...it means...u know how m16s have a red laser dot to target the victim..thats wut im talkin about.. a whole lotta spots on his body to kill him.. |
Damn!! THat was a pimp ass Battle for real, i liked mag;s shit because his structure is just off the chain and his Vocab is open, but this rap was hard to understand, Mag u usually merk fools, ORiganl just fuckn took this one , his punch lines and everything were off the chain VOTE=ORIGINAL
Yo Look at some of my battles , SCroll down the Battle list < the names SICCWITIT, holla at ya boy |
upppppppppppinnnnnnnnnnnn this battle...please vote....ill return fvaor...hollla
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aihgt nice flow form both
nice structure frm both better punches from mag better verse from mag overall i lked mag'z verse better i thnk he diserves tha win aight mayne e.z wun v/Mag Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
uppin this battle......ill return the favor...iight 1
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ori hands down
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Too close too call really imma put ya names in a hat and whoever i pull out wins.........................its Orijinal, damn i hate votin like dis but both came hard UPs to both of ya mag usually just tears at niggaz chests he did today also but orij came wit it so i had draw from a hat
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well i dont have e nuff posts yet so i cant vote i will if this is still up when i get 75 posts
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i say Origini get this cause his punches came juss a little harder and i liked his closer 2 so it did it for me..
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