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State Capitol Vs Gottaasswhoopin4u
aiight...ill battle in elevated frontlines from now on....just' for you
10 lines no d/r cv or biting 2 hours to spit after check in Blind Spit No feedin good luck |
checkin in.......
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checkin in............Good luck.......:thumbs up:..
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recheck....my comp froze, and i had to restart....back again tho.
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Let's Flip-the-script, His Own ass He "whips", This kids-a-bitch........ Your Raps are on Bum Status, Your far from Rich......... I Spit An-thrax, let the gats-blast, right through your gas-mask...... Your Lines are half-assed, He who laughs first laugh's last...... I laugh-at, you thinkin' you the best on this site, Kid your ass-crack...... This Kids Mad-Wack, Hey Look I Have-Facts!!........... Quote:
So Put the mic down, and pull your skirt down too.......... This bitch is gon' cry and complain after i merk him, so watch out for Gotaasswhoopin' Gettin Ripped Part 2............ its over ...its over...lol |
ur a fake rapper..that jus hate on mine....
only reason ull make it to the "front" of the game is cuz u stay "online"..... im rippin capitol, and leavin so much carnage... u crews name is the "hardwood classics", so ur rhymes should get "thrown back" in the garbage...(hardwood classics is the name for nba throwback jerseys)... u crew is classic, thats a nice deciever, ur the only believer... ur crew is sad, they breed rbs cheater... he be on the net searchin for porn, u need to get a real girl... get off the comp, mtv's not the only way u can see the real world u trash, i hope u havent been doin this rappin thing for a while... u think ur the prince of rb...cant be, ur jus my illigitemate child... |
uppin this shit....will return favour.................
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Capitol u got nice mulites etc but this a battle, I would say there not important but PUNCHES are what are ur verse didnt contain any, ity just looked like intro 2 a diss track where they hadnt even started dissin yet, i didnt rate ur verse at all.
Gotta ass ur verse was nice, every line i liked because u were consistentent and had some witty punches are wacked personals in their aswell...good verse. drop the quotations tho ur a fake rapper..that jus hate on mine.... only reason ull make it to the "front" of the game is cuz u stay "online"..... he be on the net searchin for porn, u need to get a real girl... get off the comp, mtv's not the only way u can see the real world one sided v/Gotta... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132029 |
^^^returned....uppin...drop links if ya want to.....
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uppin this fam.................i will return the favour on who ever drops an honest vote on this....................
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state: not many punches.. and personals werent that good either.. wasnt really feelin your verse.. some ok wordplay, but i think your multis were kind of forced.. you traded off punches for flow.. which is a bad idea...I mean, im a real multi person, so i really feel punches with ill flow that are done well.. and your punches just didnt hit hard enough
gotaass: "ur a fake rapper..that jus hate on mine.... only reason ull make it to the "front" of the game is cuz u stay "online"....." ^^lol but yeah.. although your rhyme scheme wasnt as complex as states, it still flowed well enough.. and you had some nice personals n wordplay in there.. and some pretty hard punches..nicely done vote: gotaasswhoopin4u return the favour.. need some votes on my battle with hoops.. its in my sig |
btw my vote isnt polled... its just an opinion..
but i need some experienced votes on my battle.. cos front lines is full of wack cats that vote for wierd reasons... |
uppin....will return favors..if the vote is polled
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u think ur the prince of rb...cant be, ur jus my illigitemate child
hahahah Fuckin Dope Lol Let's Flip-the-script, His Own ass He "whips", This kids-a-bitch........ Your Raps are on Bum Status, Your far from Rich......... Blah? 4/10 I Spit An-thrax, let the gats-blast, right through your gas-mask...... Your Lines are half-assed, He who laughs first laugh's last...... Played 3/10 I laugh-at, you thinkin' you the best on this site, Kid your ass-crack...... This Kids Mad-Wack, Hey Look I Have-Facts!!......... 4/10 work on structure too So Put the mic down, and pull your skirt down too.......... This bitch is gon' cry and complain after i merk him, so watch out for Gotaasswhoopin' Gettin Ripped Part 2............ wth was that 2/10 Overall...BLAH! I thought u were hot or somin 4.4/10 ur a fake rapper..that jus hate on mine.... only reason ull make it to the "front" of the game is cuz u stay "online"..... Lol 4.5/10 im rippin capitol, and leavin so much carnage... u crews name is the "hardwood classics", so ur rhymes should get "thrown back" in the garbage...(hardwood classics is the name for nba throwback jerseys)... Good personal/punch kinda stretched 5/10 u crew is classic, thats a nice deciever, ur the only believer... ur crew is sad, they breed rbs cheater... Personal/punch agian 5/10 he be on the net searchin for porn, u need to get a real girl... get off the comp, mtv's not the only way u can see the real world Lol 4.5/10 u trash, i hope u havent been doin this rappin thing for a while... u think ur the prince of rb...cant be, ur jus my illigitemate child... Fuckin dope as i said...8/10 Overall decent i guess 5/10 Vote:Gotta |
this battle was soo logn ago i got a new flow new structure and i spit harder but its ok..uppin
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