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B.X.P vrs... verbal violence
aight muhfuka 10-15 lines max
no hater or d/r or favor fuking votes check in after check u got 1 hour to drop ya shit first to 5 votes wins i will drop first |
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your droppin first then ill drop and heres some other rules no crew votes no recyclin no biting |
looks like a gud battle, tell me when the battle finished n am sure ta drop a vote .....
can yall drop a fair vote on these links seen as no 1 else does wen i vote on their battles.....thanx http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133335 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133370 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133487 |
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ayo ayo i come out swingin bustin b.x.p for a real quick lesson// flowin venom everywhere like a smith and wesson// i come amediate he stilll treadin,pourin spit up in his mouth like it was unleaded// leave the others to rest,explode b.x.p like a virus buts really espestas// they call this king the best of the best,b.x.p is weak just like the rest// this phenominom is eternally spiritual i must confess// that when it gets gorry b.x.p is one to clean up tha mess// abdominal pain im the major like david wayne// he still a souljah but aint know how to us an ak// as my mockarie rhymes bust and spray// its ma killer instinct ur my prey,eat u up like a fiend but thats ok// thats alright u just scared cuz u thought a ice cream cone was the mic// deep throatin that shit like it was a mic and ike// i come unseen but he still run at the sight of fright// killa i seem but i only creep at night,catchin b.x.p standin scared under tha moon light/ |
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Another whack emcee c.h.k is his crew but what is its origin He talks big but hes hidden behind the Walls and Ft.Morgan Heres some advice verbal you shoulda quit before you started Heart in the freezer the only way you could be cold hearted You don’t know hot to abbreviate good but he still wants to fight Two letters and at the title and he cant spell “VS” right!! Lookin through his profile try to find where c.h.k made birth Bury him 6 feet under the dirt so he feel “Down To Earth” This kid is way behind the game all whack emcees are the same I was arrested for Verbal Violence when I “Sparked the Flame” To win this you will need luck so heres heres a played line “you suck” Tupac is rollin in his grave since you named him “Sir Luk” Lyrically killin emcees? You can say you just got robbed That’s your occupation But You just been fired and I stole your job |
aight uppin fo votes on this and i dont want know favor votes if u gonna vote vote fair and dont br pming for votes take an ass wippin like a man
but we still uppin fo votes |
uppin dont sleep on this
i always return the favor just drop links |
Verbal Violence you still gotta work on ya structure man, it throws ya flow off, and makes ya verse harder to read. You have been elevating though, I noticed you were trying throwing harder punches this time, but some of em werent working. Like your opener, smith and wesson has nothing to do with venom, and the ice cream cone for a mic...You didnt close out well either, you gotta hit hard on ya open and close, make those your two hardest lines if possible.
BXP...nice job on the structure, and flow was pretty precise throughout ya verse. A few nice metas in there also, like down to earth(although ive heard that before). Your opener was pretty strong, i thought you coulda closed better as well though. You were pretty consistent with your entire verse though, maybe a lil harder on the punches next time...not that they werent good though. Nice Verse overall v/BXP |
Please drop an honest vote on this...I only need 1 more to close it.
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133090 |
uppin fo mo votes if ya could leave a link i will get at ya
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uppin dont sleep on this
drop links ill return the favor |
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dont sleep on this will return the favor just vote and drop links __________________ |
uppin fo votes
drop a link i will return wit da favor alwayz have alwayz will |
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aight Structure on Verbals was off n the flo was with BXP..
regardless tho you gotta step out how you read it n how the spitter is comin off n after re-readin verbals jus the way i presume he is spittin makes sense n even tho this isnt real, in reality the way he was spittin if your rooted in your shit you got the message.. abdominal pain im the major like david wayne// he still a souljah but aint know how to us an ak// as my mockarie rhymes bust and spray// its ma killer instinct ur my prey,eat u up like a fiend but thats ok// thats alright u just scared cuz u thought a ice cream cone was the mic// deep throatin that shit like it was a mic and ike// You had it lost in the beginnin in most cats cant come off a bad start but that center kept it real, my vote is to verbal.. Vote: verbal, props to both tho |
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