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EXPLICIT V$ Black Pantha
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Must Check In Once Tha Thread Goes Up Verses Due 30 Mins After Check In No Dr Or Crew Votes |
u spit first................
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checkity check bitch...............................
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let this lil hoe start to love me and then beat ma meat~ then throw em to tha curb thats tha only time he bein street~ man i see him actin all tough in bitch slapped he think he great~ lemme take u down to earth u like micheal claimin to be str8~ he claims to be a man and that venom is tha only thing he spit~ but that's fuuny cause when he open his legs theirs a split for a clit~ he claim to get pussy but he screams i need a girl pt1an 2 like usher~ but from what i hear to men his dick comen in all dif colors like a fruit gusher sorry i had to rush i gotta go to work i'll get on their |
Bitch
Let me introduce myself, my name is Black Pantha, u could call me an alchoholic// I got spittin skillz so sick its a disease and they dont know what to call it// Dont take me for no joke, bitch Im no comedian// Im waistin my time, got to many problems that have me sniffin and smokin weed again Nigga ur lyrix wacker than the motha fucka u bit ur style from// You couldnt sell 2 copies of that shit if it was a double platinum album// U better hide ur wallet cause im comin to strip ur cash// I bought a ticket to ur thread so I could straight up fry yo ass// Bitch picked the wrong user name, aint shit bout u dats explicit// Nigga the best thing u cando right now is take ur boyfiends ballz and lick it// |
^Black Pantha Lost that one for Biting Eminem damn near word for word... period.
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uppin................................
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uppin...............
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uppin for some votes i came weak cause i was rushin for work but i still beat this bitch leave a link i'll hit it up
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U aint beat shit except fo yo meat
Yo rhymes was shitty and that otha dude aint explain his vote |
Alright Black - Yo Raps Were Kinda Weak And All Over The Place. Mediocre Rhymes And Flow. 1/5
Explicit - Your Raps Were All Over The Place Aswell. Rhymes Were Alright. i've Heard The Usher And Gusher Thing Before. You Had Some Theme Though i'll Say That. 2.5/5 Vote = Explicit http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134161 -eB |
uppin this weak ass battle leave a link i'll hit it up bitches.
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SYLEM
structure is good...flow is on target...u had a few metas...wordplay was pretty good...some of ur punches connected...no good personals... Black Pantha dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...thats newbish...structure was ok...some of ur lines were stretched though...flow fell off cause of the stretchnes...no metas...wordplay was simple, and most of it was wack...none of ur punches connected...no good personals... Overall neither had good personals...SYLEM had the better structure...the more stable flow...more metas...better wordplay...and more connecting punches...so basing off of that...SYLEM gets my vote... VOTE - SYLEM PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the link in my sig...thanx... |
Vote=Explicit or whoever
Black Pantha verse was more like a audio verse than a battle verse.It didn't have that good of punches.Explicit won because of better punches.The verse Black wrote would sound cool for audio.But Explicit got my vote for punches.Also had good flow and structure. I'll poll when somebody votes on my battle,after all,I did take the time 2 read this shit |
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