Bk 2 tha future vs. Tha Metaphor
 

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you need to go back 2 the future...and realize you wasnt a rapper/
you should change your name to powder...cause i leave you whiter than casper/
if you win the battle it'll be like a...retarded leperchon just dumb luck/
matter fact im practicing abastadence...so you know i dont give a fuck/
you a whack ass mc niggas smellin nuttin but your stinch/
dog you a bitch...you the reason they invented apachromine fitch/
they should call me ripleys...cuase belive it or not you lost/
leave your shirt colored...brighter than a macontosh/
i done wit this cat cuase im stuck wit writers solomn/
mind almost empty...as this niggas win coloumn/

its suppose to be im done

and my mind almost as empty

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aight here i go-
i love rippin' stupid niggaz like you its fuckin hillarious
you way to optimistic, i'll shoot down lika sagittarius
that ripleys shit is one of tha most played out lines
you should save your flow and send it to "pimp my ryhmez"
see my lines knock you out your babrie chair time after time
hits yo so hard its like i shoot tens instead blastin wit nines
from tha opener to tha closer my flow is better
your is a natural disaster like some real bad weather
i probablly should stop now and waste time no more
battlin me is pointless like tryin to impress a loose-ass whore
your from not here, so that means you could be from anywhere
they way you flow makes it sound like you a orphan straight outta no where
you prolly abandon, origin a mystery like why humans have nose hair
but fuck it really don care,this spit didnt rip you it made you break
while you scared i show no fear like tha croc hunter witha snake
your gay and,your mouth stay filled wit white shit like a hostess cupcake
come on dawg i know yo ass is white shit your namez prolly jake
~closer~
this is it bitch you've reached the end of your rope
you say you grimy but, i think you dirty as soap

a sagittarius is lika a half horse half man, and its suppose to be a great archer
look it up muthafukcas

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props to both battlers on this one, decent entertainment. but here's the verdict.

the metaphor-decent structure i liked it. Overall subject matter kept to the diss, problem though. THE HORRIBLE SPELLING! lol. With text you gotta spell decently, because you got me saying, "Damn." and it's not because of the lines, i haven't seen bad spelling like this in....wait a minute ever! All jokes aside though, i liked this line a lot.
if you win the battle it'll be like a...retarded leperchon just dumb luck/

that was nice. you made great use of 'metaphors' which is key.

bk-decent verse, i liked this line

that ripleys shit is one of tha most played out lines
you should save your flow and send it to "pimp my ryhmez"

because all in all, that ripley's line is one of the most played out lines.

your is a natural disaster like some real bad weather
but whwat was wrong with this verse, is that you had lackluster punch lines. You set the punchline up. "leave (fill in something) like-" you'd have us waiting at that point, and when the ''like'' came up, you handed us a weak metaphor.
you lacked execution and creativity.

but you came back with a decent closer that was the nicest punchline.

just not nice enough to win you this one.

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Opener- metta
Closer- metta
Multi's- none to speak of
Flow- tough call, tie.
Personals- one sided metta was talk'n bout bck to the future.
Punches- Tough call i'ma say word cause he had more of them, that hit harder
Wordplay- nothin overly comples. word processor though.
Creativity- Word
Originaliy- Word.

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Overall- Metaphore you had a nice verse with some sick punches but Word had more punches inpart cause he had a longer verse which goes hand in hand for having more punches, but no always. He used his lines right and hit almost everytime. Cause of harder punches he take this battle.


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