battle: LyRiKaL19 vs DaReTuRn
 

yo whatsup
6-10 lines
no crew hate or dr votes please explain
due 30 minutes after check in
Good Luck!

I'm out for murder motherfuckers get prepared to go
Will kill any nigga leavin em cold in tha snow

My whole objective in this game is to kill and show no pain
So what makes u think u can step to me ill shoot em up and bang bang

Down where I dwell, them boys ain't shit so motherfuck your crew
Bustin you like a pimple, takin your shit is so simple so wat u gon do

Its do or die and bitch believe me I'm not tryin to go
You ridin on these, buster freeze, I got you and ya niggas beggin please

I'm fuckin yo bitch, she suckin my dick, and it feels so good
I'm hittin that wood like you should when you leave my hood

its been a while...been practicin a bit..holla

checking in

I'll Return Da Favor When Dis Battle Ova
If You 2 Vote On Slugga Vs Marx And Slugga Vs Da Prodigy

oright im done

Here we go again, battling nother white wannab from michigan
i got your mom drikin uren, why ur over ther swallowing semen
if your say your good enough get produced then why are u loosing
you keep seducing your dog, the cum in your stoumics accumulating
Its do or die bitch are u ready, beacuase my rhymes are deadly
times over u cant run im about to slice you worse then the delly
your like a magnet to loosing, you cant avoid another defeat
now that this battles complete its time for your to retreat

uppin for votes

uppin for votes...lets get this shit ended...will return tha favor to anyone who votes

yo i voted Dareturn cause his verse was a better flowwer
Lyrical had a good verse and dont get me wrong boff was good

but overall:Dareturn

yo return the favor vote on deilquint vs. Mad Stylez

yo uppin for votes...and delinquint...if u think his had a better flow then mine...then u a dick rider...no offense to dareturn...that my dawg...but anyone else who votes...break it down...dont just be like...oh...he got my vote...darrrrr...stay honest peoples

i dont even know dat dude aight so it wasnt dick riding you dont even have to use the vote if you dont want damn!

yo playa...a vote is a vote homie...no hate here...just sayin...jus nextime explain ure shit...so it dont look like u know him...ya heard...peace

LyRiKaL19
I'm out for murder motherfuckers get prepared to go
Will kill any nigga leavin em cold in tha snow
->>weak opener


My whole objective in this game is to kill and show no pain
So what makes u think u can step to me ill shoot em up and bang bang
->>its alright


Down where I dwell, them boys ain't shit so motherfuck your crew
Bustin you like a pimple, takin your shit is so simple so wat u gon do
->>second line is stretched a little


Its do or die and bitch believe me I'm not tryin to go
You ridin on these, buster freeze, I got you and ya niggas beggin please
->>generic


I'm fuckin yo bitch, she suckin my dick, and it feels so good
I'm hittin that wood like you should when you leave my hood
->>weak closer


DaReTuRn

Here we go again, battling nother white wannab from michigan
i got your mom drikin uren, why ur over ther swallowing semen
->>played

if your say your good enough get produced then why are u loosing
you keep seducing your dog, the cum in your stoumics accumulating
->>loosing/accumulating?

Its do or die bitch are u ready, beacuase my rhymes are deadly
times over u cant run im about to slice you worse then the delly
->>kinda cool

your like a magnet to loosing, you cant avoid another defeat
now that this battles complete its time for your to retreat
->>didnt like the second line

i give it to dareturn by a hair...it was real close but he was a little more creative



hit this up honest http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135830

yo lets get some votes up in here..................

i htink DT won dis one i liked her opener and most of her bars but the other guy was good to but he needs to elivate more