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Topical Battle:Coming Up-Vs. NovaKane
16-20lines
bout coming up in the rap game making moves check in 30 min to drop 1 |
~In These Days, all I can Imagin Is Gettin Blazed Wit Hayze~ ~Too Young To Get a Raise, Aint I Aint In a Prebuscent Faze~ ~Finding Different Ways To Get this Green, In Descreet-Layers~ ~Defeat-Players, Producers Coming to Me For Mah Sheets-of-Paper~ ~Creating Fire As Best As I possibly Can, Makin Thunder-Proud~ ~and Like A Protruding Zombie, Im Still Tryin To Make it out From The Underground~ ~Coming Up Is Harder Than You Think, Most People Fake-They-Past~ ~Me?, I Talk The Truth, like that Anti-Fag(cigarette) Company, Cant Break-My-Pact~ ~That i Made Including Remebering Where Im From, Keep My raps Factual~ ~Asking-You, Real Questions, My Stuff is True And Actual~ ~Mom Needs This Money, Cronie Understand the Stakes-Is-Up~ ~I Dont Care About The Publicity Or Jewels, I need To Make-It-Up~ ~Sick-Of-The-Hood, The Bricks-and-The-Mudd, shits-Nasty~ ~Cant Incase Me, Till The Grave I will Understand what The Task-Be~ ~The Industry is my Way Out Of Misery, From The Man-Handling-Grey~ ~This Is My Story Of Coming Up, No Man can Stand-In-The-Way~ |
I've been on da grind since before I could remember
needed Christmas cash so I hit da block n December times been hard and my eyes seen niggas get shot and murders unsolved as if they were Biggie and Pac Its been hot up on my block and time was money that couldnt be told by lookin clocks sometimes I feel da rap game needs me If I can survive-I believe da rap game gon feed me I've been n a struggle since Day 1 now im 18-you'll neva undastand where im from dats a young age but a long time comin when u got 4 friends, die in 4 months so tell me what I got left to hold on too Da rap game and da hustle cuzz I said fuck school they kicked me out cuzz of my attitude u dont know me and I dont know you-so neva try to judge this dude |
aight coo man lets get some votes in this bitch
holla back |
Come on ppl.
Give us some votes We need a winner |
shitt..i like that, i might do a topical
i would put both ya'll w/ them verses on a trax if i was a producer...its a hard decision, but imma have to ryde w/deliquent on this...his was handlin, they both was...fuk it,sry kane, but shit..yea thats final...deliquent...better wording, opener,closer the metas was tie though good battle |
while im here...need 1 more vote on this wack fuk...http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136294
be honest though |
Yeah that was a good battle. Good shit from both. This shit was almost even too. But I think I gotta give this Deliquient. I was feelin both raps but I just liked his better. Nova had some good rhymes in there too but D took it with rhymes that came together almost perfectly....He had a good structure too. D takes this vote.
Vote-Deliquient Vote on these: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136079 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135031 |
aight lookin for more votes
anybody wanna help us out holla |
novakane had better everything he gets the vote
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its a close one but we need a definite winner
May da best win |
I liked both...really tight..and a hard decision to come to..but in the end I gotta give it to Nova..and J Dot, i'll battle ya topically...vote on my battle with Kizza..thanks
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yo needing more votes on this shit and explain ya shits more
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Ima Have To Go With Deliquant...
Just Was Feeling His Concept Settup Alittle More... Verses Were Pretty Even Though... Nova, I Think You Could Use Some More Multies And Shit To Even Better Your Flow... And Just Work On Ya Imagery ALITTLE More... Use More Adjectives... Good Battle Though... Vote-Deliquant... ~One~ |
uppin more votes
and i will return the favor my promise more votes please |
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