GEE vs. J_Trooper
 

Rules is like I said.

10-16 lines
No dickriding, crew votes
No recycling, feeding

Verses due 40 minutes after check in.

-You spit first mayn.

naw fuck that u spit 1st shit
drop yo verse in less than 40 minz

A Gee......... im Tellin u betta watch the kid he got Handles
Tek'z.............. hit ya back from Long- Distances Like Randall
Gunnin off Exclusivly Resultin In ya Face bein left in Shamblez
Fuck ya if ya Light Weight?...... Heavy Weight lifes full of Gamblez
Thrivein and Thurstin'n from No Stardom ni99a im tellin u im Thirsty
Go blow for blow wit me and get ya Sniffer drippin like D Strawberry
Suicidal Tendencies Infiltrate my Thinkin Cavities O so verry Fluently
U Tell me who the Truest Be cuz the Title of King Mc dont go 2 GEE!!
Troopz rep believe us that we stay around Bannannas like Ms. Chickita
Look.. im jus applyin for TRAX jus applyin to Rap my single Fact is That
i Dont need 2 come out Fat if what u Most In Defenetly Provide is Wack
2 Gee and to who eva Runs in ya Team i dont respect No Hot Bars Brauds
Elevate if you call me ya Way No Longer a Newbie cuzz ya rank jus Dropped

Alright almost done......

J...I see ya bitch crew, that you "rep troo."
holdin up fingers, cuz you dont got cocks or lead to shoot.
Wolverine?..I'm cyclops...makin heat, and leavin you dead,
thats why mah laser eyes empty gats and leave you "red".
His signature states this...this rookie thought he shook me,
I "ripped" him with a "slug", like his white girlfriends pussy.
Bitch aint gotta girl, this fag deals with more pipes than a plumba,
more room in his "trunk" than in a H2 Humma.
This bitch fucks with more jewish boys more than Adolf,
fagit customers askin if he wants a foursome...but I aint talkin about golf!
So I leave it to the voters to say your shit's worse,
this "Trooper" couldnt rap "higher" if he lit a "J" when he wrote a verse.

upppin

Good shit mayn....Good battle.
-Uppin for votes....

yea im aight 4 a newbie?
good scrap

Ummm, well

Trooper: Some of that didn't make sense to me nor did it rhyme in some lines. I think it was the misspelling that had me a little lost. But anyway the were really no personals and the punches were a lil weak. Make sure u get ya spellin right i know u prolly be rushin but that kinda mess up the flow and the rhymin.


GEE:I "ripped" him with a "slug", like his white girlfriends pussy.
Bitch aint gotta girl, this fag deals with more pipes than a plumba,
more room in his "trunk" than in a H2 Humma

That line stood out a lil but the rest of it just went down hill, other than that line, the verse wasn't hard hitting.



Vote: Troopa

Damn tyt battle but i gotta vote for j_trooper cuz his punches hit harder than Gee's. Trooper had mispelling but i understood after a while. Gee had some nice punches but not alot.

Punches: trooper
Structure: tie
Metas: trooper
Multis: tie
Flow: trooper

Vote: Trooper

man where the fuckin votez at i kno ya c tha shit

Aye yo, that was fresh I like both of yall openings and shit. I'm feelin ya punchlines and everythang. I'm a give my vote to J, cuz he hit that personal shit nah mean?!
Nice shit fo real do', Real close Gee.

Ayo.....I had more personals than him man. Like on his name and look at the pictures in his signature and you might get some of them. Like on his shirt and shit and that one where that white doo gets slugged. Damn...how u gon say he won on personals when thats the thing I got him on?

-Uppin.

aight les look at dis...both ya guyz structurez were ok, tha punchez I think Gee had quite more, i liked, I "ripped" him with a "slug", like his white girlfriends pussy.
Bitch aint gotta girl, this fag deals with more pipes than a plumba,
more room in his "trunk" than in a H2 Humma...
but like rapmistress said then it started goin down stream dawg, this no hatin.

Now Troopa had some interesting shit, Go blow for blow wit me and get ya Sniffer drippin like D Strawberry,
^I guezz that means blowin lines and be gettin a bloody nose? hopefully im gettin dis shit ha ha, but ya needs some spellin and grammar and shit dawg, maybe shortin tha linez jus a bit.

Total comes ta this,

Punchlines: Gee
Structure: Draw
Flow: Trooper
Multis: Draw
Metas: Trooper

'Sa I v/J_Trooper

analysis
 

J's verse:

A Gee......... im Tellin u betta watch the kid he got Handles
Tek'z.............. hit ya back from Long- Distances Like Randall
nice opening 6/10

Gunnin off Exclusivly Resultin In ya Face bein left in Shamblez
Fuck ya if ya Light Weight?...... Heavy Weight lifes full of Gamblez
didnt see the punch 4/10

Thrivein and Thurstin'n from No Stardom ni99a im tellin u im Thirsty
Go blow for blow wit me and get ya Sniffer drippin like D Strawberry
liked this 7/10

Suicidal Tendencies Infiltrate my Thinkin Cavities O so verry Fluently
U Tell me who the Truest Be cuz the Title of King Mc dont go 2 GEE!!
nice vocab there not much of a punch 6/10

Troopz rep believe us that we stay around Bannannas like Ms. Chickita
Look.. im jus applyin for TRAX jus applyin to Rap my single Fact is That
wack 3/10

i Dont need 2 come out Fat if what u Most In Defenetly Provide is Wack
2 Gee and to who eva Runs in ya Team i dont respect No Hot Bars Brauds
decent shit 6/10

Elevate if you call me ya Way No Longer a Newbie cuzz ya rank jus Dropped
shit 3/10

35/70
5/10
look ur shit is tyt i tell you i like your flow and all but the personals just killed it fucked the hole thing up great vocab i tell you if this was audio i will give 9/10 cause it will sound mad but it aint so u need more personals and harder punched and a bit more imagination

gee's verse:

J...I see ya bitch crew, that you "rep troo."
holdin up fingers, cuz you dont got cocks or lead to shoot.
ok nothing great weak personal 5/10

Wolverine?..I'm cyclops...makin heat, and leavin you dead,
thats why mah laser eyes empty gats and leave you "red".
not bad 5/10

His signature states this...this rookie thought he shook me,
I "ripped" him with a "slug", like his white girlfriends pussy.
nice liked it 7/10

Bitch aint gotta girl, this fag deals with more pipes than a plumba,
more room in his "trunk" than in a H2 Humma.
not bad 6/10

This bitch fucks with more jewish boys more than Adolf,
fagit customers askin if he wants a foursome...but I aint talkin about golf!
shit didnt feel it at all 2/10

So I leave it to the voters to say your shit's worse,
this "Trooper" couldnt rap "higher" if he lit a "J" when he wrote a verse.
personal not hard though 4/10

29/60
4.8

gee girl i like your imagination but seriously you need to aviod the sexual shit only thing you diss about it homosexuals and dicks other than that your shit is good you need a bit of work on the vocab harder punches try to make your hard punches related to personals cause you kinda seprate em like hard general punches and wack personals

i have to give my vote to J cause he had a better flow, althought he had less personals but he won it with harder punches close shit the diffrence was
0.16666666666666666666666666666666667 lol
vote; J trooper

with respect for both of you

hit up my battles with explained votes i will retern the favor like i just did to gee although she didnt get my vote when she voted for me we need to stay honest so this shit gets going

peace