AutoMATIK™ vs ..:Mystic:..
 

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....yo

you think your game is big and its sumthin nobody wants to face//
but i think its time to get real and step outta that mirror maze//
what a disgrace, your nothin special your hardly in sight//
if you didnt write BIG, we wouldnt even kno u were tryin to write//
fuckin fag, your whole spit was gay boy naughty//
through ur whole verse you were fantasizing bout my whole body//
'Just want ya'll to get used to hearin my name' i take that as a clue//
u wanna be famous, and before i head that i use to think dreams would always come tru!//

yo automatic took this fashor cause of his rhymin complexity
if mystic made his more complex his shit couldve one
vote:auto

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^^^ Okay...but What About Personals And Punches??? He Didnt Have None Of That!! If Your Going To Vote...vote Properly................half Of His Verse Wasnt Even Battle Material, He Was Rappin Like He Was A Damn Surgeion Or Sumthin It Was Bullshit!!! No Punches, Personals,wordplay Or Nothin!!

yo but still return the favor son i jus liked that dudes verse better no hatin on you

Look i kno ur not hatin, you just need to learn to vote properly and actually look at the point in a battle...HE DIDNT EVEN DISs me. HIs verse woulda fitted better at SELF GLORY in CYPHER... DO YOU SEE WHERE IM COMING FROM??? Ill show you how to vote on your battle.

VOTE PROPERLY EVERYONE OR IT WILL BE REMOVED!

Not Very Good...

Auto-Hot Verse and they where dope but mainly they was about
what you was going to do to him BUt they was dope as hell..I liked

Mystik-You Came Weaker then him with the Punches and Overall
SAtructure left flow Slipped

v/Automatic

:shoot: Aight no bullshittin here..........
AutoMatik: I like the fact that yours was complex and shit, sum punches were weak but better than having no punches at all.

Mystic: You came hard, but your structure was off.

vote:Automatik

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both was quite creative but neither got really personal or packed any punches. doesn't mean it was a bad battle though... i was feelin the linguistic prowess

punches - neither
flow - tie
language - automatic
structure - tie
multis - automatic
creativity - automatic
enjoyability - automatic

overall i vote automatic because i'm feeling that style, even if he was a bit too self-glorifying... but hey that's the same thing i seem to do.

v automatic

peace

AutoMATIK™
structure is ok...ur lines were a little stretched though...flow was pretty good...u had tight multis...tight wordplay...not very many punches, only a few of them connected...no personals...

..:Mystic:..
you fed...thats wack right there....dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...its newbish...structure is ok...ur lines were stretched as well...flow was pretty good...u didnt have very many multis...wordplay wasnt good...a few of ur punches connected...decent personal...

Overall
both had a decent structure...both had a pretty good flow...both had a few connecting punches...Mystic had more personals, but they didnt connect...AutoMATIK™ had better multis...as well as more, and better wordplay...so basing off of that...AutoMATIK™ gets my vote in a sem-close battle...

VOTE - AUTOMATICK