Venomous Spit ft. Raw Killa
 

:: Hook ::
We break cattz off so "ill", knock "nurses"-propa
Stack-facts and wacks-in-walls, ten-million-droppa
Off-tha-gauge, deadly "combo", like "bladed-lockers"
Couldn't "dance" wit us, if you could "mambo"

:: Country ::
Shit I rape-rappers, your who gay-bastards, get named-after
We're the main-factor, of u gettin your face-fractured
The gauge-matters, when the brains-shatter, of u stage-actors
U get straight-laughter, when u go against-me
The joke, is your so broke, u don't even own-a-penny
When we gross-plenty, all u bitches know-is-envy
Dawg if your hoes-pretty, u better hug-the-dame
Cos u think she lovin u, as me n Raw, run-the-train
Ain't no one above-the-game, faggot we come-ta-play
No matter what u fuckin-say, I know u don't wannna see slugs-get-sprayed
Go ahead dawg touch-this-chain, anyone steps n we cut-his-veins
We like seein blood-get-drained, where the knife-hits
Cats like "damn they got some nice-shit", for some crazy fuckin white-kids
I'm never polite-bitch, we're always like-this
So where ever the mic-is, u can find sliced-wrists
Dead emcees layin lifeless, cos they heard us rap n tried ta bite-it

:: Hook ::
We break cattz off so "ill", knock "nurses"-propa
Stack-facts and wacks-in-walls, ten-million-droppa
Off-tha-gauge, deadly "combo", like "bladed-lockers"
Couldn't "dance" wit us, if you could "mambo"

:: Raw Killa ::
u hear dat niggaz ya tongues get slit,when u biters try 2 recite it,
country n raw 2 whities u dont wanna fuck wit,turn ur brains 2 mush,
when i push i mean pull these triggaz n ya face is combined wit bullets//
a cannibal,like hannibal lecture,give u high blood pressure though hyper tention,
take dis razor 2 ur scalp n make an incission,servin mc's fresh when inside
hell's kitchen,n fillet da competition,wit each n every 1 of my writins//
u bitches da type 2 tuck ya chain in,me i tuck sumtin dat'll bust ur brain in,
i carry da stainless,fuckin rape mc's wit mic stuck in they anus,leavin bodies,
foresnic's couldnt even distinguish,cats neva heard sum 1 so hanus//
so much vocabulary,rival's run 4 they dictionary,raw n country we makin
history,while ya'll carreer's r worse than low payed celeberties,my words
creat lyrical orgies,u can pre-write n still cant ghost write 2 forge me//
spittin dis venom like king cobras,claim u pussies drunk but found sober,like
lil flip its game over,flows so sick i got ur fans lookin over,my shoulders,
droppin punches like boulders,while u still packin rubber bands in ya holsters//
leave ya rhymes on life support,cuz in battles dat ur only support,drated # 1 pick
cuz i perfect da sport,leavin rival's all breathless scattered over da court,
u like da change in my pocket and ur rhyme r commin up short//

:: Hook ::
We break cattz off so "ill", knock "nurses"-propa
Stack-facts and wacks-in-walls, ten-million-droppa
Off-tha-gauge, deadly "combo", like "bladed-lockers"
Couldn't "dance" wit us, if you could "mambo"

This is the best one i've seen yet and it makes sum since to me ,nothing to work on and has a great flow i can hear the flowin through my head.

That was hot, had a real nice flow to it too...nice job

thanks soultress...uppin for more feedback y'all

thanx soultress89 n lilkay keep da feedback comin uppin 4 more comin ya'll
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shit hot dont sleep holla back n peace

yea that shit hot man keep the good work up and the flow is tight

That Was Nice The Flow Was Good On It I Like The First Verse But It Slacks And Gets Weak Towards The End.the Second Verse Was Ok But Not Hot Like The First One

thanks caliph n killa for the rates...uppin for the rest

whoa!!!!!!.....mayne that was tight a :thumbup: to both........
i got nothing to say than "wonderful"........gd gd

Didn't expect any less of these 2 guyz,u kno how to express a topic with nice emotion and great vocab...Flow is hot 2, nice collab!

dat shit was nice dawg nice multi's and vocab and it flowed pretty well nice job

thanks for the rates y'all

Country Your Part Was Good Raw Killa Rofl That Was Wack Fix Ya Structure And Use Betta Vocab Rofl

DAmn, this is actually a good open mic that yall did...
i liked the first verse better
overall ratingis 7/10
thier were some flaws

thanx for da feedback people n virtue r u a fuckin moron re-read if every1 so far said dis shit was nice his n my verse obviously it is stop hatin bitches 2 da rest good looks n holla back uppin 4 more feedback^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^