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(L.V) LyricalOnslaught Vs Revoke (T.I)
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Superior? Challenging me, this fucking lightweight has no chances. He is so fucking stupid, instead of circular “flow”, he “square dances.” Superior already has been dragging some lines to the recycling bin. Plus, Superior couldn’t ever win, even if he took strengthening vitamins. Says he’s what links everything together?, I’ll rip you off the chain. Remove you like a stain, cut off your circulation like a busted vein. Next I’ll cut your jugular vein, and melt you with my spits of acid rain. Or I could “drink this guy up” as if he were wine or champagne. Changing his name to ...Superior.., Revoke must be a fucking pussy. Superiors’ bars are full of nuts, like a box that’s filled with Chewy. Once I’m through with this fake “ILL” shit, you’d be a rotten fruit. Their crew must be horny, to add this fucking pussy in their recruit. |
Comin at Superior you need some elevated material Before I milk this win… and celebrate it with cereal… Your history, sayin anything goes..Hope you got insurance.... Cause if you went with the flow you'd get lost in the current.!! Checkout SUP in the zone… don’t wanna spit and get blown? Shit I can fuck you up with what text I can fit in my phone!!! Hold on! (LOL) I got another one… u know he a thug right? Instead of Pac’s tat? Where his stomach at it says “A Bug’s Life”!!!* hate your crew strobe should ban yall with a desparted distribution, And the only heads you make move are in a retarded institution... Your sig is true, your posioning RV with your skill…Wack!** You beating me is like midgets doing the high jump lets leave it at that *look at his rapper **scroll up to see his sig |
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Ok, i was feelin both dropz but i Onslaught came harda wit dem punchez. They was ill kid. Flow waz good by both an both had good wordplay.
Opener-On slaught( feelin tha punch) Closer-Superior( feelin tha personal) Flow- onslaught(both was almost tha same) Punchez-ON slaught( had more an had better) Structure-Tie v/onslaught vote on dis battle http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=138170 |
Supreior Took This He Had A Better Drop And Flow Was Sick...Slaught You Said Supreior In just About everyline We Know His Name...And You Didnt Have Any Good personals At All Really Your Punches Really Didnt Connect....
Open..Superior Closer..Superior Punches..Superior.. Perosnals..Superior..Bugs Life LMAO Winner-Superior |
DICKRHYER!!!!! LOL uppin 1 on this shit
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^^WTF? stop trying to sway....big wolfy there prob is though
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superior takes this due to the fact that his punches hit hard and they stuck although you could reword your shit a little bit better so they stick more....LOS you need a little bit of elevation with your punches and rewording them
Open..Superior Closer..Superior Punches..Superior.. Perosnals..Superior..Bugs Life LMAO Winner-Superior |
uppin this ish
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Lyrical- Came Decent Punches Connected, Structure Was Good, And Flow Was On Point, Wordplay Was Good...
Revoke- Damn That Phone Line Was Sick Man, Structure Was Good, Flow Was Decent Punches- Revoke Flow- Revoke Wordplay- Lyrical Multis- Niether Metaphors- Tie Structure- Lyrical Originality- Revoke Final Vote- Revoke Return Favor With Honest Vote: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137714 |
thanks for the votes so for....uppin for some honest votes
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