Justify vs Katastrofe
 

10-20 lines
No d/r, crew, or hate votes
No feedin, bitin, or recyclin
verse due 45 min after checkin
Any rules broken auto DQ
I'll post my drop first

check it, im checkin in...........................

Aight.
 

Ok I'm checkin' in.4sho......1

yo, r u droppin 1st. or are we doin it a the same time.

you can drop nah if you ready...I could so mines like 5 min after that.

I'll lyrically abuse you're weak punches n flow
Your lines more wack than a child on dope
It's a "Katastrofe" that they let you on rb
fuck you bein a emcee, your a cracka on extacy
Kept PMin me, tryin to get me ta set up this shit
Wastin 3 credits to hear a fake eminem spit
You gon be takin more hits than a pot heads bowl
Drop rap, maybe youd have a better career in soul
cuz your raps got more holes than swiss cheese
Think you can beat my drops? bitch please

You dont wanna battle me, you must be lost like Fido/
You bound to loose, like the chinese dude, off American Idol/
To much time fuckin around should of een at the recital/
Now you screwed, can't even be saved by Jsus or a bible/
Nigga you aint on top of shit, you stay fallin' like "Niagra"/
Yo ass couldn't get up wit ten pounds of viagra/
Waited after the check in, this niggas bound to chocke/
And if not from the battle its fromLE dick in his throught/
Tryin to rip ya quick, so I'ma change the pace/
And before you start talkin shit, wipe the cum off ya face/
Already started the battle so theres no time to run/
The best advice I can give you is to put ya mouth on a gun/
I bet you the type of nigga to drop the soap in jail/
And when I'm through wit you, you gonna be the only one in heaven wit a wheelchair/

Damn.

damn my comp. fucked me up.....2nd line should say "been" not "een"
and the 3rd should say "Jesus".....not "Jsus"
Nah mean.

Justify
structure is good...flow is on target...u had a few multis...wordplay was decent...some of ur punches connected...alright personals...

Katastrofe
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...its mad newbish...structure is good...flow is on target...no multis...wordplay is tight...a few of ur punches connected...personals were ok...

Overall
Katastrofe had the better wordplay...both had a good structure...both had a good flow...both had ok personals...Justify had more multis...as well as more connecting punches...so basing off of that...Justify gets my vote...

VOTE - JUSTIFY

PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the second link in my sig against ruff_tuff_thug...thanx...

Uppin, and i'll return wit honest votes if ya dropa link

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uppin, lets get some votes, ill return the favor with honest votes on ya battles..come on dont sleep on this

uppin...............

Break Down I

Justify- Structure Is Good, Punches Could Be Better, Flow Is Ok, Wordplay Played.... Overal Ok


Katastophe- Structure Was Ok, Flow Was Ok, Punches Hit Harder Than Justifys..... Overal Ok...



Break Down II
Punches- Katastrophe
Personals- Niether
Flow- Justify
Wordplay- Niether
Multis- Niether
Metaphors- Katastrophe
Structure- Justify
Originality- Tie
Vocab- Tie

Final Vote- Katastrophe

Return Favor With Honest Vote:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137726

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