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Tha Q vs Triple_N
Topic: Someone breaks into your house. Talk about what happens.
Battle Rules: 20 line MX No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 08-04-04 at 11:47 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Tha Q has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-01-04 11:47 AM.
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Triple_N has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-01-04 11:50 AM.
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It was 11:48..I was in bed with this chick..
I was watching a flick..while she was slobbin' my dick.. Then, I heard a window burst..sounded close to the kitchen.. "Oh my God, what was that!?!".."Hol up broad, stop trippin".. Quickly I leaped from the bed..grabbed my gat but I was shook.. "You wait here for one minute while I go downstairs to look".. I tried to tip-toe real slick..but the steps started squeakin'.. Then, half-way down the stairs..I heard noise where the kitchen sink is.. I couldn't believe it..I cocked my .38 and pointed straight.. When I got to the bottom..I saw a shadow across the drapes.. My heart raced like fast-forward tape..my breath had its own rhythm.. As I edge around the corner..I wondered if I could even hit him.. "Who's there? Come out now."..I tried to give this dude a warning.. But, I heard not a peep..like this creep was tryin' to ignore me.. Slowly, I inched closer to the door..I heard a pot hit the floor.. "Oh my Lord", the chic screamed out the door..but I pressed on.. I stood an inch away from the room..ready to burst in an shoot.. Then I thought, maybe I should just fire a warning shot into the roof.. I decided against it..then built up courage to face this Jack.. When I finally turned the corner..I saw that it was a stray cat.. I burst out laughing... THE END |
Suddenly awakened by sound of breaking glass
Shakin', adrenaline starts pumpin' real fast "What was dat" I asked, brother looked deshoveled Stepped into hall to my mother lookin' equally puzzled Askin' same question as me, Shit!! I gotta think I know either we are being robbed or all need shrinks "SHHH!!! ma' quiet down" I said and grabbed my bat Didn't know what broke window, but its head I was gon crack Tipped toed down steps, got my head on the swivel Glass on the floor still no answer to riddle Then I notice something movin' with my peripheral My biggest fear went from suspicion to literal Out popped a masked man, I instintively swung Saw a flash, then fell and felt a pain in my belly that stung Looked down, my T shirt's red, I thought I was dead But he didn't finish me, jus ran out as I bleed Mother ran down steps, " OMG!!!!" she screamed Death for me was inevitable it seemed Blacked out, woke up to bright lights, I was thru Nope jus celing lights in hospital, next time I'd be packin too |
This was feedback posted for Triple_N
I gotta say he won this battle ebcause i think his just was more like reality...i just like it nice overall
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hmmm
^^why drop feedback if it isn't adequate or elaborate?
And, no, you can not have my money. Damn Vultures! upppin... 1 |
Voted For: Tha Q
Q- Was Feelin Yours, Made Me Laugh At The End When It Was A Cat, Good Discriptions, Flowed Good, And Was Easy To Vision.... Triple N- Was Also Feelin Yours, The Endin Made Me Laugh Aswell, I Liked Q's Better, He Was More Discriptive And Made It Easier To Vision, Your Flow Was Good Too, But Overal I Liked The Q's Better... Final Vote - The Q.... Peep State Vs Me In My Sig |
Voted For: Tha Q
Tha Q wins this battle in my opinion.The topic is average and both emcees made good spits.Why Tha Q wins is cause of this:He had pretty elementary rhyming pattern but the way he phrased everything and I liked the ending about it just being a stray cat.He also had quite a bit of dialogue in his conpared to about 2 lines of speaking in Triple N's.Triple had pretty good flow but his structure wasnt the greatest.Triple had better punches but there was only 2 or 3 in the whole verse.So thats why I think Tha Q wins. |
^^ word...preciate the honesty bro
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Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeerrrrrrrrrrrrrr uppin
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yo ima give this one to triple n by a mila meter,
q shit was hot wit the ending props son...but n had me at the ending too.. wordplay and everyhthing was fire for both yall..structure good..metas all on point...storyies was both tight..but i give it to triple n |
This was feedback posted for Triple_N
damn this was a good battle both good flow both epually good storys both ill drops q gets it cuz he won in the only area they didnt evenly match in vocab and q took that
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ive already posted my vote i forgot to poll it though
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^^ well...two votes that didn't register
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