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raw killa 08-06-04 01:36 PM

neva new it would turn dis way ft. emerginmc07
 
raw killa ft. emerginmc07

(cell fone rings...i pick up)
(girl)-hey baby how r u?
(me)-im good mami how bout u?im on my way home...
(man's voice in back ground)cum back 2 bed...
(me)-wtf who was dat u....?cheatin on me....?
(girl)no wut r u tlkn bout?
(man's voice)-c'mon baby fuck dat dude
(me)-him dat guy bitch u cheatin on me?
(girl)-no its not like dat calm down
(me)-no bitch u calm down ima !?@!#!!?!? u n him up bye

(dial tone)(tires squeel)

yo u kno wut i hate....?

stupid lyin,cheatin,frontin bitches,u kno y? cuz all bitches is hoes.....

-hook-raw killa

i didnt want shit 2 turn out dis way,i neva meant 2 buy dis gat 2 spray,neva meant 2 have
ur family on they knees in tears 2 pray,n i bet u wish now u neva did wut u did dat day/

verse-raw killa

its was a saturday evenin i was comin home 4 work,came in da house heard ya screams from
twirkin wit sum otha jerk,so i grabbed my gat n went 2 work,shot u both dead 2 relieve
da hurt,burien memories i use 2 cherish 6 ft unda da earth,its cuz it was 2 weeks afta our
daughters birth,so many twist n turns n da plot gets worse,secrets r opened wit words dat
burst,ya apitite 4 truth n quinch ya thirst,da cold heart of a young man who feelin's hurt/

didnt have ya ring,but da vibe was closely similar 2 da thing,meanin wut rings represent,
4 those heaven sent,bent on bended knee's askin ur hand while heavenly angel's sing/

like we werent yet married,but our vows were already made n buried,where da ears in da wind
took wut our voices carried,n kept locked in da cemetary/

now like i said i didnt want shit 2 turn out dis way,i neva meant 2 buy dis gat 2 spray,neva
meant 2 have ur family on they knees in tears 2 pray,n i bet now u wish u neva did wut u did
dat day,n like jay-z wut more can i say,those tears of pain r kept locked away,swallow my pride
4 a minute n cry tears neva cried sendin messagges only tears can say,was time was it? wut was
da day,oh yea sorta like a metaphor of ur souls freedom it was.....july 4th...independence day,
im sry baby girl i didnt want shit 2 turn out dis way,i neva meant 2 buy dis gat 2 spray,neva
meant 2 have ur family on they knees in tears 2 pray,n i bet u wish u neva did wut u did dat day/

the roses were red da violets were blue,like ya runnin blood was red,ur bodies color slowly
turned 2 blue,permant break up,wit no more make up through n through,was i crazy or am i in
love who knows da screamin true-th,spend my las hour da only left alive 2 answer des mysteries
wit his gun cocked in his mouth sittin on da roof,wit my gun da mic n da world my booth,leave
tainted lies 6 ft. entangled in roots,wit a note on her parents door step declarin da truth,
bury myself beside u pull da trigger n shoot,now both our trapped spirits r loose,n love's
mysteries become 1 n life blooms anew a truce,roses r red n violets r blue.....

-hook-

-verse2-emerginmc07

yo man bithces can play these games o well mine learned
ey yo- yo

gave her my heart n love, gave me a kiss den turned round n gave my frend a hug,
to busy lookin at her dint look up, 2 weeks lata i found she and my frend fucked,
it was love i thought, we fought, so she sought, n wen she got caught, it was me n my 9 i brought,
we screamed she tried bein nice, i hit ha across da hed n den did it twice,
she cheated, i was mistreated, felt like i was defeated, so i was heated, so i shot her n den repeated, lets jus say our relationship then was deleted,
fuck da bitch evrythin she got she deserved, they alredy had her tombstone and coffin reserved, if only i dint have to witness and observe, o well her punishment was served,
she dint undastand wat i felt, n she neva helped, at first i pittied myself, but fuk her she found sum1 else, i had her by her hair n she knelt, n den her cards were delt,
now i cant jus forgt bout da hoe, cus u no, i can let go, she played me 2 times in a row, y did i keep goin back? i duno,
yo u shdua seen wen her body was found, it was half buried unda ground, wen i was doin it i wasnt lookin round, n i guess a niehbor heard a sound,
cops came i dipped, her body was flipped, she was stripped, her back whipped, n they found out her tites were clipped,
they cudnt find da trace, no1 saw my face, its a closed case, da murderer got away wit out a trace,
yo man my final thought is, if u a bitch who cheats read dis, i dont give a fuck who u r or if i hurda u, if i fidn out u cheated on sum1 i no i will personally murda u

raw killa 08-06-04 02:13 PM

yo people dont sleep read n tell us wut u think hey yo emergin nigga its posted peep it help me up it...lol.....holla back nigga n niggets peace i luv holla back^^^^^^^^^^^

f8thfull21 08-06-04 02:40 PM

damn man, that's powerful. i think its good stuff. i'm new, but here's what i was thinkin. i like how u flow all through your verses, and i like the last verse too, but its def a different kinda flow. u don't rhyme at the end (it was love, i thought, we fought...), and it kinda threw me off at first, but i think it can show more power. sounds like u thought stuff out well, nice job.

Yvonne 08-06-04 03:45 PM

cool drop therre........some serious shit.........gd gd.........flow was tight and rhymes were tight too.....keep it p

raw killa 08-06-04 03:50 PM

ty 2 f8thfull21 n xxxtayve 4 da love n feedback keep givin damn em wher eu at?...lol hell me prote dis...lol shit hot must read rv holla back will return da favor^^^^^^^^^
uppin dis shit^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

raw killa 08-06-04 04:57 PM

k besides my 2 replies uppin dis shit there's been 2 replies outta 19 u fuckin lazy ass peeps betta start leavin feedback we wanna kno wtf u think n quit sleepin,hatin w/e ya'll do n return da fuckin favor lazy punks uppin dis shit peace^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

soultress89 08-06-04 07:12 PM

sounds real and powerful. but it's good.

raw killa 08-06-04 07:56 PM

ayt rv im upppin dis shit peep it n leave feedback 4 christ sakes peace

LilKay 08-06-04 07:59 PM

damn...that was hot. got pretty intense at times...but good shit. and yea the way u was rhymin was different but hey it worked

raw killa 08-06-04 08:12 PM

hey lil kay holla at me on yahoo need 2 tlk bout shit...u kno wut i mean holla n thanx 4 da love peace mami uppin dis joint^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

JaneDoe 08-06-04 11:10 PM

"wit my gun da mic and the world my booth" that was one of my favorite sentences. nice drop. very clear and detailed. i like this. now ya'll just need some audio equip to start doin that. nice

JaneDoe 08-06-04 11:13 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by raw killa

gave her my heart n love, gave me a kiss den turned round n gave my frend a hug,
to busy lookin at her dint look up, 2 weeks lata i found she and my frend fucked,
it was love i thought, we fought, so she sought, n wen she got caught, it was me n my 9 i brought,
we screamed she tried bein nice, i hit ha across da hed n den did it twice,
she cheated, i was mistreated, felt like i was defeated, so i was heated, so i shot her n den repeated, lets jus say our relationship then was deleted,


that is.... the words and how they rhymed but still fit in, was beautiful. i like this a lot.

raw killa 08-07-04 02:12 AM

ty 4 da love n respect ladies now niggaz ya'll gonna show sum luv?holla ack peace

D-ICED 08-07-04 02:37 AM

yo i was feeling that good drop i heard you spit some trash but not here that was hot to death you need better vocab but good fucking drop fo sho :thumbup:

raw killa 08-07-04 04:07 AM

n e 1 thinks i eva dropped n e thing less than perfection in its own art is fuckin hata but thanx 4 da love caliph holla back rv quit sleepin feedback need n wanted uppin
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