Verbally Gifted vs Image
 

Battle Rules:

10-15 lines
blind spits
check in by 30 min
must drop by 30 min after check in
no biting
no recycling
no hate
no crew
no d/r


Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-18-04 at 02:10 AM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

Image has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-18-04 01:44 AM.

Verbally Gifted has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-18-04 01:48 AM.

I'm posting this fast because I already typed it in our first
battle that got closed, cause you didn't check in....

My Guns Promote Cancer~You'll Get Your~Hair~Removed...
And Then Put You In A Box Like Your Body Was A Pair~Of~Shoes...
Come On Lets Get Serious~Bottom Line Is Im Ill...
Murderin niggas Like columbine was my skill...
You Being Better Than Me? Thats Funny~Im Laughin~Despite...
Ill Leave You Lookin Like You Played Jesus, In The Passion~Of~Christ...
This Kidd Is Thinkin Hes Hot..But Guess Again Cuz You're Not...
You Could Set Your Computer Screen On Fire..Your Verse Still Wouldnt Look Hot...
Ill Renegade~And~Rent~A~Blade..Basically Diminish~Your~Existence...
Kill You And Win This Battle Before I Finish~A~Sentence...
You Should At Least Studied My Past Before Pressin~Your~Luck...
Now Like R.Kelly Around Teenagers~I'm Guessin~You're~Fucked...
Whats The Use Of Still Battlin~ I Won In The Intro...
After Postin Your Verse And Still Losin~Dont Get Mad At Your Pencil...

Merked.

ur hardly hot, so peep this geek I’m smashin’ em/
This cock can’t get over the net like a bad serve in Badminton/
I used to idol you man, the way you were ill and scored in the hall/
I was gonna follow in ya footsteps… Until I saw the brick wall/
I should be in Saved by the Bell...nah that’s out of my choice/
But the only Screech around here is the damn sound of ya voice/
& i realize ur wordplay has got u spittin them gassed bars/
but u really learn ur 'punches' from kangaroos that live in ya backyard/
don't make me bring up the past and your dickriding DOPE habits/
And I bet u hit me wit more recycled lines than frugal coke addicts/
you stink, your shook and played but go ahead, type away hater/
and dont forget to bookmark this page so you can bite my lines later/

damn, too bad all your personals aren't true...

don't make me bring up the past and your dickriding DOPE habits
And I bet u hit me wit more recycled lines than frugal coke addicts

^^how can I have dickriding habits if I ain't got any wins...lmao

anyways....uppin this bitch

We battlin' huh?...not spittin' out true facts...but it's cool

uppin

Voted For: Verbally Gifted

V.G.- good verse with real good punches i dont know how much of a noob u r cuz u seem to be a vet. i liked ur wordplay but u lacked personals which lost you a lil points.
8/10
Image-you had some real played and soft punches in your verse especially the one about the kangaroos, supa weak. and when u battle somebody dont give them any room to think they r better and u said u followed in his footsteps which was a big mistake. u had good flow and structure but not enuff to win.
5/10

v//verbally gifted

Voted For: Verbally Gifted

VG won this because his punches hit harder n thats what wins battles for me
not many multies but also the structure was better than
Image. Alot of Image's stuff didnt rhyme very well
both have potential
holla at me
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uppin

uppin#3

Voted For: Verbally Gifted

much hotter, punches hit way harder and great structure, easy 2 read also good open & close u said it right...Merked!

Voted For: Image

yo vg killed him no doubt about it.
he had a better flow.....................

Voted For: Verbally Gifted

Sorry dude but Im gon have to give this one to
Verbally Gifted

his punchlines were just knockin him out even though both were good
His flow was heavenly and
his wordplay just killed him
Very good battle

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