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Proverse vs JPoll
Battle Rules:
6 lines max and min No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-26-04 at 05:42 PM Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in. |
ProVerse has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-23-04 05:56 PM.
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this is NOT prewritin
too many ppl say dat and its annoyin lol remember no dickriders plz ********************************** you spit garbage in plural,yo rhymes is trash studdering your lyrics,couldnt make your wins mass arived in RV i april,still words couldn't spring into action couldn't understand your punches-stop battling with a accent gargling flaming hots-only froze the chip Jpoll hensed the name by what you're known to fix (cheat) *********************************** |
JPoll has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-23-04 06:16 PM.
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Yo heres some straight key biatches...
I’ll eat this kid up til he’s dismembered won’t find him totally till december… its sad him getting ko’ed by me, is the only reason he’ll ever be remembered… Already forgotten forever,but still trapt with a KO like being in the old soviet union... It's like the ghosts of this site, well him ,spiky ,n gunit are having a 'Most wackest reunion'... He gets walked on all day, like he was a dirty ass door mat... he'll 'grab' zero votes max, too slow witted to pick this up like we were playing jax... boom it's over straight keyed...if you don't get it get the fuck outta my post... |
Voted For: JPoll
you spit garbage in plural,yo rhymes is trash studdering your lyrics,couldnt make your wins mass this was sorda a weak start.... arived in RV i april,still words couldn't spring into action couldn't understand your punches-stop battling with a accent 1st line was nice, 2ed was aight... gargling flaming hots-only froze the chip Jpoll hensed the name by what you're known to fix (cheat) ending was preety decent.... not a bad quick verse.... 7.0 I’ll eat this kid up til he’s dismembered won’t find him totally till december… its sad him getting ko’ed by me, is the only reason he’ll ever be remembered… this was a ok start... Already forgotten forever,but still trapt with a KO like being in the old soviet union... It's like the ghosts of this site, well him ,spiky ,n gunit are having a 'Most wackest reunion'... 1st line was preety good, 2ed was decent... He gets walked on all day, like he was a dirty ass door mat... he'll 'grab' zero votes max, too slow witted to pick this up like we were playing jax... nice ending... hard hit at the end... i thought ya was preety even till the end where jpoll had the best and harder hit but ya was preety even i would of voted a tie if it wasnt for J's last bar..... vote Jpoll by a last min punch good battle fellas |
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Voted For: JPoll
Jpoll wins and gets my vote Pro: yours was weak try harder and elevate your verse was weak and didnt have any strong lines J: yours was not as good as your othjer but yours was better enuf to beat proverse vote jpoll |
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Voted For: ProVerse
only because he got a personal in there...naw, this was a hard desiscion and everything was tie except that... yall was on each others level with punches...i like the "april...spring in to action" line...and i liked the "wont find him til december" line, and outta those two, proverse hit harder...this was a good battle tho proverse also had better structure in his flow... |
Voted For: ProVerse
YO GOOD BATTLE BUT I GOTS TO WITH PROVERSE HIS PUNCHES HIT AN LIL HARDER DA FLOW AND THE WORDPLAYS WAS FROM BOTH OF YALL NICE// I HAD TO RELY ON PUNCHES TO I CHOSE PROVERSE CAUSE HE HIT A LIL HARDER YO PROVERSE RETURN AN FAV DA LINK ITS IN MY SIG MAYNE |
thanx for all the votes
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Voted For: JPoll
JPoll easily takes this. Proverses punches came kinda weak. I wasnt feelin the first line mayn. Dont say that trash is the plural of garbage. Theyre synonyms. That wasnt a really good setup neither. Jpoll had some ill lines in his verse. Good multis too. Came hard throughout the whole verse. And this bein only six lines. You GOTTA come hard all the way through. Jpoll gets it. Vote-Jpoll |
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