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LyrikalMirikal vs Tha Flash
Battle Rules:
10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-30-04 at 01:16 AM Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in. |
Tha Flash has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-30-04 12:47 AM.
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Now I Dare Do U To Step Me,
I Have Pieces Of Ya Brain Drop In Ya Refill Like It's Esctasy// So Next To Me Can't No One Do It Better, All U Gotta Do Is Push My Button And I'll Eat U Up Like A Paper Shredder// Nigga My Rhymes Work Mirikals, I'll Push Them Dicks Outta Ya Face So U Can Get A Clear View// I Don't Know Why U Tried To Battle Me Newb, Cause I'll Let The Nine Flatten Ya Head Like A Tire With No Intertube// It's Either Win Or Lose And U Lost, Cause My Pump Had U Jumping Like U Was Part Of Criss Cross// |
LyRiKaLMiRiKaL has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-30-04 12:50 AM.
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Checking in........
this cat's clutchin-ya-nine but he's the one wit slugs-in-his-spine// i'm fast enuff to crush ya skull without even touchin-ya-mind// twenty-twos-spray with blue-flame n scatter this dude's-brainz// all over the floor-board of his F*ck*n foor-door like loose-change// so violent-n-sick i'll gut myself n puncture your eye-wit-my-rib// cut you so fast u bleed to death before the knife slices-ya-skin// rhymes-that-rip-Sh*t, ya spliced-n-twisted if ya try-to-diss-this// my verbs impact like nuclear shock waves with twice-the-distance// violent-n-ornery, why would i try pullin a tech nine-in-a-robbery F*ck bullets, my punchlines crush-spines at twice-the-velocity//!!! |
can someone drop some votes ill return the favor thank you
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Uppin For Votes, My Man Did His Thing I Give Him His Props, So Now Put In Ya Votes
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Voted For: LyRiKaLMiRiKaL
Lyrikal wins diss battle his vocab is sik Flash ur flow was basic no real punches no wordplay u need more elevation but ok drop v/Lyrikal vote on da battles in my sig i voted on ya battle |
Voted For: LyRiKaLMiRiKaL
Lyrikalmirikal this cat's clutchin-ya-nine but he's the one wit slugs-in-his-spine// i'm fast enuff to crush ya skull without even touchin-ya-mind// ^beautiful ish... twenty-twos-spray with blue-flame n scatter this dude's-brainz// all over the floor-board of his F*ck*n foor-door like loose-change// ^damn, cool, but seem like I heard this somewhere else before... so violent-n-sick i'll gut myself n puncture your eye-wit-my-rib// cut you so fast u bleed to death before the knife slices-ya-skin// ^that's a bite from canibus. *looses points* rhymes-that-rip-Sh*t, ya spliced-n-twisted if ya try-to-diss-this// my verbs impact like nuclear shock waves with twice-the-distance// ^Haha real nice punch and self glorification... violent-n-ornery, why would i try pullin a tech nine-in-a-robbery F*ck bullets, my punchlines crush-spines at twice-the-velocity//!!! ^Probably should've finished with some type of personal on him to finish off better. Tha Flash Now I Dare Do U To Step Me, I Have Pieces Of Ya Brain Drop In Ya Refill Like It's Esctasy// ^below par So Next To Me Can't No One Do It Better, All U Gotta Do Is Push My Button And I'll Eat U Up Like A Paper Shredder// ^not too good Nigga My Rhymes Work Mirikals, I'll Push Them Dicks Outta Ya Face So U Can Get A Clear View//^you kind of diss ya self sayin you touch dicks... I Don't Know Why U Tried To Battle Me Newb, Cause I'll Let The Nine Flatten Ya Head Like A Tire With No Intertube//^not doing it for me It's Either Win Or Lose And U Lost, Cause My Pump Had U Jumping Like U Was Part Of Criss Cross//^sorry,you is done. Flash you came way too weak you didn't have a chance. The efforts was there, but you was throwin a whole bunch of haymakers that just wasn't landing. As in his last battle, Lyrikal kept it fairly consistent throughout, which gets him my vote. |
Oh yeah, watch some of those lines Lyrikal. I know I heard at least one of your lines in a song with essentially the same words and concepts. That can get you into some trouble.
P.S P.S, vote on my sh*t. Check the signature...\/ |
thenx for the votes vote for me and ill return the favor
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uppin for some votes do so and ill return the favor just send me the link
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uppin for votes, come on people, we will return the favor
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uppin for votes.....u wanted ur battles votes on votes on the battle im in and ill return the favor whether you vote for me or not.......peace n wun~
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Voted For: LyRiKaLMiRiKaL
ok flash flow was off as well as punches and disses no good vocab either here a 2/10elevate!! lyrikal good structure and flow good wordplay punches and disses need a little work but they were good also a 5/10 |
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