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mistah_tate 08-31-04 06:36 PM

Just an advanced warning......
 
Just be glad you heard it from me and not someone else, i'm goin easy on u dawg.......now go home wack nigga

sleep on mistah tate? u crazy as hell
gotta sound so familiar, make yo mind ring bells
they say that boy crazy, his screws gone loose
but they wont say it to my face, i put they neck in a noose
neva said i was a gangsta, but i'm far from bein wanksta
so watch yo valuables when tate around, wont hesistate to jank ya
lyrically spank ya, put yo head on spin
make u wish u never approached me with that fake ass grin

corny ass niggas, yall just aint got what it takes
flames come out my mouth so yall flakes stay baked
i'd put you on the bus and school you, but i'll just fool you
till you learn that even you with voodoo couldn't stick bitches like i do
murda for pleasure? naw, i just do what i got to
respect that and your spinal cord will remain intact
if neccasary i'll squash you like sumo, and that be a fact

u say you mad, you say you ill, but your statements lack truth
you cant record in a studio, they kick yo wack ass out the booth
when you rhyme you dont make sense, but you claim yo styles dense
and tell me if you the king then why yo punchlines full of dents?
don't hate on a nigga, just respect his evidence
drop after drop, and you wonderin why you aint gettin no replies
take a hint fool, your a pest, sumtin like summer flies

and i'm supa fly, look up to see me cuz i be that high
i got you askin yourself like jada, oh why oh why?
time to stop inquirin your position and start lettin the game go by
i gave you that push, that nudge, now take yo ass on
and dont cry on your way out, cuz bitch you claim to be grown
now you can guess or you can ask to who this was directed
you know who you are, and now you know that u rejected

LIL'DREW 08-31-04 06:51 PM

nice drop...it had a steady flow...unlike some other shit i be readin'...

mistah_tate 08-31-04 07:16 PM

uppin fo feedback

TURBAN 08-31-04 08:48 PM

shit that is hot ... flow was off the chain , super steady flow, i wasnt thrown off at all by what i read. it was tyte 8.5 out of 10 so nice drop . peace out keep em comin

SycklyFlowetic 08-31-04 11:47 PM

pretty nice liked the structure also

mistah_tate 09-01-04 05:12 PM

uppin ^^^^^^ dont sleep, it aint nap time

mistah_tate 09-02-04 11:01 AM

uppin this summabitch, thanx for all the feedback so far

Femcee4Lyf 09-02-04 11:50 AM

that shit was nice keep it up

mistah_tate 09-02-04 04:28 PM

^^^thanks for the compliment, uppin once again

mistah_tate 09-03-04 04:17 PM

just one mo up, ^^^^

LEazy 09-03-04 04:22 PM

I liked that joint...the flow was steady and it had a good point to it. Nice drop...keep postin them and i'll keep readin um.

mistah_tate 09-04-04 02:39 PM

^^^^appreciate the feedback, uppin

Implicit 09-04-04 03:47 PM

it wasnt the best but it was good. u had tha flow and ur strucuture was good.

Cocaine 09-06-04 12:50 AM

yeah i agree wiht hood u can improve but it was good.. o and making ur font smaller does not hide stretched lines..

mistah_tate 09-06-04 11:10 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by ~Genicide~
... o and making ur font smaller does not hide stretched lines..


well damn, guess u read that move like a book, cuz thats exactly what i was tryin to do, cant even front


^^^uppin^^^


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