PlaTinuM_ vs ProVerse
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-04-04 at 09:59 PM

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PlaTinuM_ has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-04-04 09:00 PM.

ProVerse has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-04-04 09:03 PM.

whats the topic again?

look in bitch slapped itz there.. i think it was comin to be a numba 1 mc

PeG City holla, All da natez doin da peg reppin str8 up,
ima nate balla, we mad crazy tuff, pass dat shyt n take a puff
we aint stop representin, we be presentin peg city where da neechiez at ,
you betta represent dat, u betta give us mad respect,
me n ma homiez take a ride to da rez wit a private jet,
Weve gone multi platinum, Tha best rapper alive is wat ima become,
Get ready da natez r comin in da rap world, make ya mindz twisted n twirled,
diz iz true native hip hop, we makin hot songz non-stop,
get rdy for us cuz we gon be on top, yall wannabez r gon get popped,


dunno if ma shyt was good but im new at this shyt!

topic: "goin off to be a numb1 big hit"

chosen by platinum (i know i did this before)

-verse told as a star talking on behind the music-
ha yaw luv dat twist^^ lol



9 years after being made....

my 1st attempt at fame-was back in my younger days
what i'm told- i was tight even before i was grown
i stashed my rap in my binder-wit jay-z pic on the cover
filled the book in two weeks-from the front page till the other
favorite track back then -was jay-z album hard knock life
it was tight- and it really made a impact on the shit that i write

13 years grown...

the only one not havin a cell phone-but that's what i chose
i spent money only on cd's and tapes-didnt burn money on clothes
i got much deeper into hip hop-ex puff fan-now i am not
and now i kinda like pac-but i was a deep fan of the ROC
i focused more on the lyrics- and less on the chorus
i hated master P- i still believe his music aint for us

14 years old...

my current stage of age-i say now-i'm proud
because- i'm at the prime of my praise tallyin all of my days
i had lyrics to spit-and know where to store them
till i googled rapbattles and at the top was a forum
"rapbattles.com"
i left cuz you know what the shit lacked?
ima be real overall... the shit was wack!!!!!
good thing i left because i got a link to soundclick
i left my bio-some lyrics- and a couple beats i rhymed with
Damon Dash answered-now roc-a-fella is da nigas i'm singed with
i wanna say:thank you Rapverse-
i would be at home if i havent have found :thumbup:

uppin this shit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Uppppin for votez!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!UPPIN FOR VOTEZ!
i probably got owned...!!!! :banghead:

uppin this shit

This was feedback posted for PlaTinuM_
 

Wat Tha Hell Kinda Battle Was This They Both Was Off Course It Seemed Like They Was Rappin On A Topic But It Was Weak N E Way

::cough::
lakerrs owned philly


uppin for votes

j/p mayn

HAHAHAHA da Crew LOWRIDERZ is dead............... plz fuk no hate on diz shyt !

Voted For: ProVerse

ProVerse
structure is good.. flow is on target.. u had a few multis.. imagery was decent.. the topic didnt really allow for much anyway though.. emotion was alright.. u went about the topic at a somewhat of a creative angle.. it worked out for ya..

PlaTinuM_
structure is good.. flow is on target.. no multis.. no imagery.. no emotion.. i dont even see how u went at the topic at all.. just.. wackness..

Overall
both had a good structure.. both had a good flow.. ProVerse had more multis.. as well as more imagery.. and more emotion.. and he went that the topic better.. so basing off of that.. ProVerse gets my vote..

VOTE - PROVERSE

Voted For: ProVerse

wow that was creative...nice vocab and gud wordplay....i think pro gots this.....the other dude u need to up ur vocab and u should of tried to match his lines.....overall this was a pretty decent battle keep it up both of u stay up