UnKnoWn-KiLLa vs String9487
 

Battle Rules:

3-5 bars
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 09-09-04 at 01:44 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

String9487 DQ'ed for going over line limit

UnKnoWn-KiLLa has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-06-04 03:26 PM.

You got the rumor wrong, so let's fix it
Cuz, it's still dangerous ??? so, don't get it twisted
Cuz, it's ready to get loose, I ain't playin'
Cuz, freestylin' is just a hobby, if you know what I'm sayin'
Sippin' on some motherfuckin' Don Perigon
Money talk, bullshit, or walk a motherfuckin' marathon
But, I'ma pimp, and don't keep it a secret
Cuz, when I check it, I talk about the shit on the wreckit

post ur verse!

String9487 has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-06-04 04:51 PM.

should this be a disqualifie?? becuz he aint post his verse YET..

STRING IS IN THE BUILDING

eh yo this nigga MUST be trippin
he cant write his verse, bcuz of all the nuts he's grippin
u wanna roll gay, but i dont play that way
u a "Unknown"-killa, thanks to me, u gon stay that way
my powerful punches penetrate, n rock ya posture
ya rap skills a myth like Big Foot n the Lochness Monster
ya flow smells like shit u must b writin on tha john
u lien on the job, last time u seein a woman u was spyin on ya mom(ooooh)
in a categorical, im a rap rhetorical
there's no answer to me n them gats is horrible
u get fried nice, like fried rice
clone u n kill both yall niggas so u can die twice
i hope u rollin wit 2, 3 techs, askin who be best?
ima put this nigga in a box like im U-P-S
how u trynna b upfront? spend some time in the back
u wack, Talib Kweli wouldnt even let u "get by" rhymin like that
i didnt mean to do it, but WHOOPS he beat
when i "tip the point" at him like the new Roots Cd
fuck throwin punches, ima throw lyrical blows
until ya spiritual shows,wit circular shapes gapin from my spherical blows
u wack heffer, u blast never, i smack lessers
only thing "unknown" is ya track record
ya face a cabin for bullets, n ima "lodge" all
u b out like a fat girl in a game of dodgeball
HAAAAAAA



*Get By- Talib Kweli Song
*Tipping Point*- the newest cd out by the Roots

Voted For: String9487

iight i got to give this battle to string because he had punchlines lol unknown didnt have any and string was over all betta in this battle his verse flowed good and had some good wordplay and i like the 4th bar but no hate he jus took u in this battle

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Voted For: String9487

unknown killa

Yo, this wasn't a boasting self-glorication topical man. You need to attack the opposition in a battle unless agreed otherwise. C'mon dog. The flow was on but it was a weak verse cause you didn't go at it like you was in a battle. Had no devices in it whatsoever

String9487

You got a knack for punches. Not a knack for the clever material behind a punch, but the punch, the swing itself. You get me? that's what I saw in this battle. You had nice punches which would be extra lethal with a little more thought and cleverness behind them. You take this battle easily though.Landslide.

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i swear..stop dickridin do HONEST votes cmon..//..

uppin for votes.. nobody's dickridin dog u wack.... u need to elevate unknown

uppin for votes.. nobody's dickridin dog u wack.... u need to elevate unknown

Voted For: String9487

ok unkown no good punches disses or personals and flow was good vocab too but with no good punches it was boring as fuck a 3/10
strings good opener and unknown killa lmao youll stay that way good shit the moms shit was funny too alot of good disses you did you and some nice punches in there structure is a little streched but good good ass ender lmao good vocab and a overall good verse disses and ounches won it a 6/10

ugh.. thats not a good explanation =/